#1 Asya ff-unique love part 1-17 *thread links in the index* @pg 1 - Page 2

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New story on AsYa
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I'm sooo happyyy!!!!!!!!!!!1
you guys are liking this
sorry i can't reply to all comments individually bcoz m not having much time
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Eric stood in the doorway.everyone stared at him wide-eyed except zoya.she rushed to him and they hugged.Eric quickly gave a peck on her cheeks.they turned around to see an enraged asad and scared yet smiling dilshaad.nazma on the other hand was still excited to meet zo's best buddy eric coz zo always used to tell her abt him on their video chats.
ZO:phupi ye mera sabse accha dost he.ERIC.and eric this is my phupi...i mean my aunt,there is tamatar[nz narrowed her eyes on zoya 4 calling her tamatar]and this is Mr. Khan.
Asad looked at them with flaring nostrils.
zoya wasn't able to figure out wat was wrong with him so she just ignored him.
ERIC:hey everyone.finally m meeting u all.hv heard abt u a lot.specially nazma...oops tamatar[he said with his american accent with a wink]
ZO:um.. c'mon in.
DIL:han beta please come in
ERIC:sure
they all went in and were having fun chatting and disclosing facts about each other.
NZ: so how did u get in eric...i mean the door was locked
nazma asked uncertainly.
ZO: He always makes his entry at odd hrs of the day[she said sticking her tounge out to eric playfully]
ERIC:i know the password to unlock every door of this house tamatar.[he said ignoring zo]
NZ:no ...not u too.please don't call me that
ERIC:what?
NZ:tamatar
ERIC:But thats a sweet name.isn't it.just like you[he winked]
nzma blushed a little on his flattering.
ERIC:yeah just like that.red tomato[he grinned]
nzma blushed all the more.asad cleared his throat sitting on the next couch.nzma realised asad was there and went to join zo and dil in the kitchen.
ASAD:so eric wat u do?
ERIC:m gonna join st.jose for higher studies.doing buisness.
ASAD:how do u know zo?[asad asked sarcastically.since he came here asad was nt getting gud feelings abt them hugging and him kissing zo on her cheeks.he was convinced ther was something fishy between them]
ERIC thought'oh so zo's loverboy is getting ideas hmm.':oh u know just like that.we met in a bar.[he said it with a huge grin making it sound cheap]
he was successful in bringing asad in disgusted state.
all 3 womens got there and they enjoyed some more chit chats over their evening snacks.asad was not liking the way eric and nzma talked.he was very possesive abt his family.also the fact of zo and eric meeting in a bar was hard to digest for him.he never thought abt zoya that way.he always thought she wud be traditional and the more he thought abt wat eric said the more he got ideas which were very disturbing.he thought 'ammi chahti he me is ladki se nikah karoo jo paraye mardo se khule aam gale lage aur...'
his thoughts were disturbed when he heard zo telling him to go in authorative tone.
ZO:go eric its time for ur spanish classes.
ERIC:ok boss.
they hugged again making asad more angry.eric moved to give a peck on dil's cheeks when some1 punched eric on his face.every1 looked at asad in shock.zo was too shocked to react when eric turned to her with hurt in his eyes.all evening he knew asad wasn't impressed with him and didn't talk with him politely.but he kept quite coz he knew that zo loves that man and so he was quite even now.he turned towards the door mumbling sorry to dilshaad if she thought he did something wrong.
ZO:eric wait...eric
ERIC:sort it out zo...please we'll talk later.[he got in his car]
ZO:Eric ...eric please listen to me once...eric[he drove away.]
she was on verge of crying coz she knew how hard asad have given him.there was blood on his lips and his eyes were wet.she knew he didn't retorted back coz he knew she loves asad.she thought of uncle's reaction and what if he fired her.ofcourse she was the boss bt eric's uncle was the owner of ZOAD and he still had the power to fire her.she was annoyed with asad in the first place ever since she saw that look on his face.and now whatever he did wasn't gud.her job was at stake.her frendship was at stake.more than that her relation with uncle rickwood was at stake.coz ever since she came to New york he was always there 4 her.he was the sweetest person she knew.he was her idol and a father like figure 4 her.knowing his love 4 eric and the extents to his anger she was scared.she questioned :allah miya!kya mujhe ek family paane ki itni badi keemat chukani padegi?me eric aur uncle ko ni kho sakti par phupi aur nazma aur asad?
she broke down but then decided to fight her fate.she was so angry with Mr. khan and she needed answers.she headed in.

DIL:asad tumhara dimag to thik he.kya soch rahe the haan?
ASAD:ammi mujhe ye sab pasand ni he.us ladki ko koi tameez he ya ni.ese khule aam gale mil ri thi .aur vo ladka?tamatar agli bar se tum mujhe usse baat karte ni dikhna chaiye.
asad was so furious like a lion.
DIL:lekin tum apni tehzeeb India chod aaye ho kya asad?yehi sikhaya he mene tumhe ki ghar aaye mehmaan ke saath is tarah pesh aao?
ASAD:ammi mene jo kiya vo..
DIL:tumne jo kiya usse u have insulted my upbringing.[dil was literally hurt by asad's behaviour]
ASAD:ammi vo sab zoya ki galti he vo...[asad sees zoya in the doorway]
zoya have heard everything and now she was not looking less than a tigress to hunt.
ZO:kahiye na Mr.KHAN aap kuch keh rahe the
ASAD: ji me itna keh raha tha ki..
ZO:ki me batati hu aap ko.aap kuch karne se pehle bilkul b ni sochte he na.aalah miya !wats wrong with u.kya aap ke pass koi explaination he?
ASAD:dekhiye Ms.Farooqi mujhe ye sab pasand ni he jo aap karti he aur..
ZO:Mr. Khan har insaan aap ke hisab se ni chal sakta he.rahi baat mere kuch karne ki to mujhe pata he mene kuch galat ni kiya.
ASAD:AAP ye samajhne ki kosish kyu ni kar ri ki wo ladka thik ni he na aapke liya na nzma ke liya.pr aapko kya fark padta he?ur so selfish.aap ek nihayti besharm ladki he jise na koi tehzeeb he na koi ...
ZO was hurt and raged with wat she heard.she said: enough Mr.Khan aap bohat bol liye.aap kese dusro ke baare me itni jaldi rai bana lete he.agar me selfish hu to aap b bohat judgemental he.tehzeeb aap ise kahte he ki ghar aaye mehman ko aap ese treat kare.wats wrong with u?
ASAD:[never in his life some women has talked to him in this way with such volume in her voice.he flared his nostrils]aur aap tehzeeb ye manti he ki kisi b paraye mard ke saathaap kuch b kare?
ZO:eric paraya ni he aur jo mene kiya wo america me logo ko greet karne ka tareeka he.sb aapke jese ni sochte he Mr. Khan coz unlike u all are from this century and doesn't have 17th century's thoughts and ideas.
ASAD:ha agar kisi bar me mila shaks apna ban jata he to...
DIL:bas karo tum dono.enough...
dilshaad and nzma were crying a lot allthru this drama.nzma was scared frm asad's anger which has no limits.she hugged him.asad cooled down a little but still glared at zoya.
NZ:bhaijaan aap please shant ho jaiye.aap chahte he ki me eric se na milu to me ni milungi.
asad kissed on his tamatar's forehead.
by now zoya lost her control and cried.she didn't wanted to fight but she can't stand being quite in front of man who misjudged every1.she was angry but still loved him no matter wat and this fact hurted her.dilshaad came and kept her hand on zo's shoulder to comfort her.she was rather angry with her own upbringing to behave with zo in such a reckless manner.
ASAD realised that he had gone too far mayb so he tried once to sort out:Ms Farooqi aap ..vo..mein...
but to no avail.zo was not done yet
ZO:Mr.Khan aap kese kisi ko accuse kar sakte he vo b us cheez ke liye jo aap khud karte he?[she said with hurt plainly visible on her face]
ASAD:ji ?matlab?
ZO:matlb ye ki abhi aapne nzma ko hug kiya aur use forehead pr kiss b kiya.nw shud i punch u?ya fir shud i accuse u for behaving such bad with a girl.?
ASAD again angrily:aapka dimag to thik he?do u realise wat u saying?tamatar meri behan he.
ZO sadly:Eric mere bhai jesa hi he pr ab lagta he ki he is not gonna be anymore.
she was again on the verge of crying and fled to her room.nzma went after her.
dilshaad looking worried too went after zoya.asad stood there rooted to 1 spot staring at nothing at reality dawned on him.


guys how was it?please tell me by ur comments.they are special to me.
all the gates to criticism and appreciation are open.
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Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago
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Hey read the story now it was so lovely continue soon
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nice story plz continue soon :)
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Nice story
Update next part soon..
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Loved it!!!

Amazing

Well written!

Asad angry!!!

Zoya also angry

Do PM me

Continue soon! :)
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guys m on top of the world knowing that you all are liking it.thanks 4 ur lovely commentsšŸ˜›
it means a lot to me since m a newbie.

will continue it soon😳
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DIL:beta mujhe lagta he hume use akele chod dena chaiye.hum kal baat karenge.uska mood b thik ho jayega.
NZ:ji ammi.good night

they retired to sleep.but asad was far away from sleeping.he felt guilty for misjudging them.but he still have dobts about eric.he can't bear one flirting with her tamatar even if that one is zoya's buddy whom she met in a bar surely?he decided to apologise to zoya and without thinking went to her room.he knocked but there was no answer.he pushed open the door and found her in the balcony.the site that met his eyes was simply amazing.but the irony was that it was heartwrencing.yes on the one hand it was the newyork view from there which was breathtaking but on the other hand it was zoya's state.she was shivering and shaking as if crying her eyes out.

zoya stood in the balcony facing up in the sky.it was cold outside but that didn't matter coz she has faced more colder person than this.she cried her heart out" allah miya wats wrong with you?aap mere saath humesha ese hi karte he.pehle mere ammi,abbu aur bhaijaan cheen liye fir mujhe mera ghr chod kar yaha ana pada.ab aap chahte he ki mere uncle aur eric bhi mujhse dur ho jaye?meri job?uska kya.ya allah mene aaj tak sirf do cheezo se mohbaat ki he.mera career aur asad.par fir ab lagta he ki sab kuch mere haathon se ret ki tarah fisal raha ho."
she cried and cried.from 2 hrs she was trying to reach eric aur uncle but neither of them were picking their cells.
"allah miya i love all of them.i love you par fir aap apne nek bando ka itna imtihan kyu lete he?"
she can't afford to loose her former family and phupi,tamatar and...asad.thinking of asad made her blood boil.how could he?he accused her of such thing and thought of her that way?"haan mujhe malang hona pasand he.mujhe mere tareeke se zindagi ka maja lena tha isiliye me independent rahi aur is mukaam tak pahoochi hu.par me hindustaani hu aur mujhe meri limits pata he.meri safety...and that was it .she remembered her bitter past and cried hysterically.

asad cleared his throat and she sensed his presence.she quickly wiped her tears and turned aroun to see asad and the tigress in her was back.he stared at her and held her gaze.he had never b4 seen such expressive eyes.he can read her like an open book.there was pain,loss,agony,anger,rage,yet love in her eyes.but he can tell there was something else.fear?why was she scared?
ZO:yes Mr.Khan?
asad came out of his staring session and stuttered:um...vo...me...zo...Ms. Farooqi..wo me.yaha
ZO became irritated and held her palm up:aap yaha sorry kehne aaye he na?
ASAD:haan.kya? mera matlb ni woh...
ZO sighed:its ok Mr. Khan.i forgive you.

asad was surprised at the women in front of her.ther she was forgetting all rudeness of him 3 hrs ago.he had not merely apologised to her even.

ASAD:zoya m sorry indeed.mujhe aap ke saath ese pesh ana chaiye tha.thanks 4 forgiving.
ZO:mujhe to aapko maaf karna hi tha.{in her mind she thought'aakhir apni mohabaat se kese naraaz ho sakti hu?'}
ASAD:ji?
ZO:uhm mera matlab he ki maafi mujhe b mangni chaiye.m sorry.mai aap par chilaana ni chahti thi.
ASAD:um yeah its ok.

ther was silence 4 2 minutes.neither spoke.zoya get a grip on you girl.i know woh handsome he par abhi ye sahi time ni he.
zoya was having these inner thoughts when asad spoke
ASAD:uhm uhm..Ms. Farooqi me ni chahta ki eric tamatar se ..vo...zada nazdikiya badaye.aap usse keh dijiyega.

zoya's face dropped.she said with a sad smirk:me kese kahoo?na to vo phone uth raha he na ghr ka phone lag raha he.
all thanks to you[she added sarcastically]
ASAD:m sorry vo..me ..ammi ke liye...u know
ZO:i know Mr.Khan par aap keh b to sakte the na?kisne kaha tha action hero banne ke liye?aur maafi to aapko eric se maangni hogi.
ASAD: wo me kal maang loonga.gud night.
ZO stared at him astonished.here she was talking to him and he was walking out just like that?:allah miya wats wrong with you Mr.Khan.aap ese kese baat adhoori chod jaane lage?
ASAD:kahiye
ZO:HUH?
ASAD:aur kya baat karni he aapko?
ZO:mr.khan eric aapki wajah se gaya he to aap [she didnt know wat to ask him coz she herself was confused wat to do.]
ASAD on hearing concern in her voice became jealous or was he?afterall she was his future wife whether he want it or not.for having such thoughts he became angry and blurted out without thinking.
:aap chahti he me use dhund kar lao?m tired from the flight journey.aap khud hi kyu ni dhundti use?shayad kisi bar me mil jaye[he said sarcastically]

tears began building up in her eyes and dared to flow when she retorted with equal force:Mr.khan me aur eric bar me mile the par aap?how could you think of me such low?vo meri majboori thi[she gasped]
ASAD:matlb me kuch samjha ni[he asked confused]
ZO became angry and said:aap samjhenge bhi nahi.do u know y?coz ur such a insensitive man.aap
she broke down.by now asad was boiling with anger and wanted to fight her but decided against it and left from there furious and dangerously red in anger.

zoya couldn't sleep that night.she had an important meeting tommorow morning.in order to prove her aligibility to uncle she bega working on her seminar.she hoped to see her uncle in office.


do comment and tell me hows it.
sorry for this short update but my exams are starting soon so i'll not be able to continue it till 18.
please bear with m e
wish me luck guys.!!!!!!!!
comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago
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Hey it was super update ek jhagada khatam nahi hua aur dusara shoru hogaya asad itana gussa acha nahi hai continue when u r free n all the best for u r exams 😃
Edited by shailu143 - 10 years ago

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