SaHil (SurVir) SS: Faded Memories CH-1 *PG 2* - Page 3

Originally posted by: mahwash22

Oh this is really good! I'm already hooked on the storyline. I agree with you on how the drama wouldn't show any real logic - so why not write yourself and make your own logical story on SaHil :)
This is really great! Continue soon :))

Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil

Yayy Naff! Finally with the 2nd part!

Amazing it was! I don't know why you were saying it was crap? See? Opinions matter! 😛😆 I was not satisfied with what I wrote😆 particularly the Ahil's re entry part 😆 but I am glad you liked it😛

This is really interesting. Misbah makes an appearance 😆 Why is she acting weird, hiding something? Except for obvious reasons 😆 But I loved the convo between them. I hope you don't turn her evil! 😆Thanks😆 let's see What Misbah turns into in future😉

And. Our ARI. As expected, he is back to his cold, arrogant self. Baby! 😭 Aww man! He threw that apple pie "coz it was his favorite..not anymore" 😭 I loved the fact you kept him like that, like he was earlier, when she wasn't in her life. Its again that time. Coz she is not with him now 😭 I was missing my Jallad Jinn so much, it would be great to see his anger now! Yess!! 😆 Yeah me too I missed JJ 😆 but this time he is going to be more tough than before wait and watch😉😆

And ofcourse the FBs!! Great. Absolutely great! She is remembering something but still she isn't! Is she gonna get her memory back SO SOON?!! 😆 You will know it in next part😉

This is intriguing! Can't wait to read next part! Something to look forward in this forum now 😆 thanks! It means a lot😳