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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: JShukla

😭aww..you hopeless romantic.

I bet you slept late nights after reading all the love stories of the world.😆
You gave a dash of heartlessness to Sanam😉. I liked that. It was sad and sweet at the same time.


Aww Juhi! I made you cry? Okay then good. 😛
Yes I am a sadist and a hopeless romantic too.😆

Lol but I did sleep late nights while writing this and thinking how to end it. I am glad I was able to find an ending though.😆

Yes thats our Dhabevali for you! THIS is the real Sanam. Sugar and spice and all the things nice NOT! ;)😆

Thank you so much Juhi for the lovely feedback :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

Really emotional and heart wrenching it is...

Good piece of work.. Well written..


Thank you so much! :)
I am honored for the appreciation. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: flora212

Res...will read it by tomorrow!


Yes! Do read and DON'T forget to comment 😛😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww thank you! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahil333

😭 Prags 😭
What an amazing OS!
I actually read it when I was at the office this morning. It is such an emotional story and I got all teared up. Even though I have my own space, I was afraid that some co-worker would caught me so I just didn't/couldn't comment. I haven't re-read it yet, but will do soon. I know I will tear up again.
"Sanam Da Dhaba"...thank you to let Aahil honor the love of his life like this. It was so touching and heartwarming. 🤗
Their separation is very brutal 😔, but it has to huh, for our SaHil to find their Junoon back. I love my SaHil so much and to read such a story is very heartbreaking!
Nice piece of writing girl 👏...I loved it 👍🏼


Awww Rie! Hugs back girl! 🤗
Please don't cry okay? I mean I know this was meant for crying and its difficult to not to cry I mean atleast to me.but still you know what I mean? 😆
I know its brutal to separate such a loving couple but you know I thought it was kinda needed? I mean I could have reunited them too but it seemed it won't fit yet, this is complete in an incomplete way or the vice versa? :) I love them too! :'))

Yes that chain he promised, I had to incorporate it, she is in his memories that way, living her dream ❤️

Thank you so much Rie! You may read it again for sure, but please don't cry, I don't write to make you cry! 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

Unres.

I loved it. It was so heartfelt and so intense. Both are trying to move on, but cant. He built "Sanam Da Dhaba" chain for her. In New Zealand, there is a famous Indian restaurant chain called "Punjabi Dhaba". So Sanam Da Dhaba always reminded me of it. Of course Punjabi Dhaba is not a Dhaba, it's a fine dinning restaurant chain. But the food is amazing! Probably just like Sanam's food! :) So Sanam Da Dhaba is Aahil's tribute to his beloved.


Trust issues...totally get that part. Sanam has issues, just like Aahil had then before. Also Seher...She is a alive. Good one! Loved it and you should write another just like it soon! Bin Tere from I Hate Love Stories...one of my favorites! Also Linkin Park!




Thank you Mandy! Thank you so much, for the feedback! :)
I love your comments, and there's a special reason for that. You know what? That you share your own such sweet sweet incidents from your life, that connects more? I can't help but go all 'aww' on it 😆 Your so adorable! :)

I love Dhabas too! I love the Punjabi food! My dad is from Punjab, so there's a lot of Punjabi talk and Punjabi food in my home! And I love Punjabis too! So cool they are! 😆

Yes! Thats his tribute to his love. He thought she has died but he would let her dream live through him! :)

Yes, trust issues. Although I would have really wanted him to know she is NOT HER, but there were mistakes from her side too! A relationship gets strong from both sides, same way it breaks from both mistakes too, one can't be blamed solely. So. They try to leave it there but still can't so I made it complete in an incomplete way, makes more scope for the future meetings.

Another one? Hmm like a sequel? Actually I am thinking upon that, but really need to work it out and right now no ideas are coming, I'll try though. Thank you!

Yes Bin Tere sad version. Lovely song! Thank you so much Mandy for an in depth comment!
*was kinda nervous to read comments from YOU!* 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath


Esha, your such a sweetheart! Thank you for all that you have written! 🤗 Trust me, I was waiting for your comments too, as I posted this 😆

Aww Pragya ur welcome! 🤗 U deserve all the praise! It was really a wonderful OS! ⭐️

Oh and this is the sad version of Bin Tere. i.e. Bin Tere Reprise, it goes by this name. I loved the male part in here mostly!

I have heard it but a while back. Will hear it again! I usually love the male parts of songs 😆

Thank you thank you thank you for such a heartfelt comment. I am really happy, I mean really you loved this, I couldn't help the sadism take over me, I just LOVE sad love stories man! 😆 The heartbreak and memories of each other, the long, its just to die for! And I love making my heroes cry and yearn for her just like I made him in this story, oh the tears! Sigh! I had "Junoon" playing in my head all the time 😆

I sure did! I love these kinds of stories too! 😆 The mushy stuff hardly attracts me! 😆 I love humorous fluff but not the nauseating sweet romance... U get what I mean? 😆 I need that intensity, the angst, the tears, the craving, the heartbreak, those strong memories 😭 And ur story had all of that! I love when heroes cry and yearn too, especially if they are very arrogant in the beginning lol I guess that makes me a sadist as well 😆 Their tears hurt me yet I feel that its needed to create a powerful and touching story! I always have junoon in my head, especially that intense version, when reading or writing these kinds of stories on SaHil! Its a must! Junoon is SaHil period! ❤️

Yes yes, I want more details of the story too, we can discuss in our "Adda" 😆

Yes today I will be around so we can discuss anything and everything 😆


Oh I don't know about the girl being mini Billi actually. I din't picturise her being Amrapalli man, Sanam crying and hugging her, would have been 😲😆 She might turn negative, who knows, I don't atleast as I am NOT planning to write it further! 😆This is just the end and I can't even seem to think beyond it now. I am so blank right now, NO IDEAS coming literally! Ugh! Oh well if you would like to carry on further and have some ideas you are always welcome babe! 😆 I was thinking of some airport drama, but this looks much better I guess.
Anyway, yes this IS the beginning, I wanted to leave it this way, gives more scope to their further meetings.

Lmao no ur right 😆 the only person I see AG hugging is KV 😆😆 lmao lets just keep Shaheen a nice sweet girl lol At least Sanam has some real people around her now! I am actually glad u ended there cuz like I said its a new beginning... The possibilities are endless! You can try writing a sequel without extending this scene... Maybe how they meet again 😊 If any idea does come to you then def write... Otherwise dont stress! You have written such a wonderful piece! You can write again on something else... Just enjoy what u have written! I will let u know if any idea comes to me but I haven't even finished my works lol I feel lazy so I will probably just give u ideas 😆 But thanks for asking! 😳 If something really awesome does come to me, I will write lol For now I want to read 😉😆

Thank you so much again! I love talking to you!🤗

Your welcome once again! 🤗 I also enjoy talking to u! Somehow u always get what I am saying 😆 Its always fun to come up with creative ideas with u lol See ya later at our heaven!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is a fabulous take on things. I'd love to see a sequel too though. they never reunited then sisters or sahil. i'ld love more of this take (where there is no extra bride and all that stupid, ruining stuff) I love how your take is filled with just the love and purity of the relationships and the people in it. more real, just better that real...words showing what can't really be expressed on-screen (I love the actors' abilities, but I love reading the different takes, just based on the so-much-better 'fleshed-out' versions written down; a show can only show one side. the different stories show so many dimensions. I wish the writers of the show had read these more, or maybe at all, and seen how much that story had in it all on it's own 🥺😵 ; but...their loss)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I've read it again and I got emotional again. Wow! Never thought they would gave us a horrible ending of SaHil in the show! So no SaHil in this story and neither in the show.

I still miss SaHil so much 😔. Aahil had loved her till the end and Sanam got her memory back and she loved him too. Don't wanna think about that fake thing, coz it will only spoil my mood.
Not seeing SaHil and more so Aahil give you that empty feeling still. So Prags, can you consider this and give us a happy ending in this story? Pleaseee!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How did I misss this the first time around? It was beautiful. So much emotion! And there's hope.
Edited by darkice7_12 - 10 years ago

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