|AsYa FF| Selfish & Selfless :) Chapter 6, Page 21 Updated! :) - Page 17

res. will zak fall in love with zoya? :P i'd like that... lol. is asad asad azeem choudhary or you forgot to change when you posted it from the other forum? xD

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Thanks Nida! 🤗 No problem that you couldn't quote lines. The knowledge that you thought them good enough is enough to make me happy 😆

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it all! I thought the story is going to turn serious as it progresses so why not give you guys a fun update while there is time 😆

Thank you for reading and waiting for this update 🤗

P.S. We were watching Alvida since you asked. Its a new drama on air these days 😉

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

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<div>So many people read my FF and everyone shows their own level of appreciation😳Your level is very flattering😳😆I saw your comment in uni and it lifted up my mood😃So thank you for that!🤗

ASR Junior? I must confess I haven't thought about it for the longest time! Right now my focus is this FF tou continuing that FF looks difficult😕I'm sorry!😒

i m talkng abt Asya versn AAk junior...u mentind tat it turnd n to ff in IPKND...so y dnt u cnvrt it into asya ???it jus dng slight modifcatns na😉i m nt askng nw anywaz..jus makng future plans😆

Awsomely fun and lively update.
Loved it

This was such a cute update..!!
Zoya nd asad r so lucky to have each other as friends..!!
Their friendship is adorable..:)
I loved it .!!
Awesome update..!!
Thank u..:*

Awesome + Light Update...👍🏼

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👏

Whole Update Is Fun Full...🤗

Update Next Part Soon...😃

it was so fun, i rofled over it... best update... kissess for this part

Jahapanah 'Zero' Pack aka me, is waiting... 🤣

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Fari,
Your jokes in the updates are so witty, dat I laugh my head off at dem most of the time. Wonder if dey make each of ur readers that bonkers as it does to me. Reminds me of my sis's scrutinizing eyes at me reading ur updates, n her facial expressions letting me know dat I have already gone 'Zoe' 😛 Hahaha I hope they make the others bonkers too 😆 That's my mission, ya see? 😉 To be honest, my jokes don't make me laugh 😆 The only line that made me laugh while writing was when Zak said are we trying to curve a serpentine trial on the road when Asad starts cycling 🤣

Tell me something Fari, r u d same in real life too? Dat witty n funny!? Coz d characters in d story are what d writer is. 😆 Hahaha I HOPE I am like my characters 😆 You've now seen me on FB I'm assuming... Do I look witty and funny? I don't think so 🤣 JK! People tell me I am funny. The word they usually associate with me is CAREFREE 😆

I in place of Zoe and her frnds wud grump and huff wid such witty answers to finally start giggling at them. I want Asad and Zak as friends too! They're so much fun!! I love writing on them 😃 I would've happily continued on the trio's adventures and incidents but then this FF is going no where 😆 I have to move the story onwards 😕

Bunch of fun these 3 are.
The updates are going fantastic. Totally intriguing. Glad you think so 🤗
I initially thought Zak to be that 3rd friend who'd create rifts between Asya. Thats what any 3rd frnds have done to me. Teen tigaada kaam bigaada. 😆
But that guy is a knight in shining armour for both his friends. Totally lovable. Hard to dislike even an ounce. Zak is going to be my special character in this one like Zaroon was in DI. He is going to be the one I have a crush on 😆

1 more thing what I felt initially was, that Zak would eventually make a love triangle between Asya. Yet again, you've proved me wrong. Everyone was and some still are insecure about him. He's such a jaanu though. How can anyone doubt him? 😭 😆

Well that's the freshness of your story. NO REPEATED CONCEPTS REPEATED AGAIN. Totally loved it lady! Thank you! Love you too 🤗

Zoya's dadi is playing that mother-figure role not only in Zoya's life, but also in both the boys' life. Wonder, if she knows how Asad manages to live in his Chacha-chachi's house.
Wish she could take him in along with Zoya. But right! No mother would want an outside boy to come and live in her house, with a young growing girl at home, no matter if that girl is that boy's best friend. Exactly! Societal pressures and norms 😕 She knows Asad leads a difficult life but at the same time, she can't really do anything 😭

Razia is showing what she really is. Fulfilling her role rightly. Of a careless pathetic guardian to the orphaned nephew, treating him as good as burden and a store-room stuff.
Though Chacha still has not come into view. Is he the same insensitive lot of a human like his wife, or does hold some tinge of sympathy for his poor nephew? The Chacha is the same 😡 I'm not thinking of properly introducing him in the story but through Asad you will come to know more about him 😉

Next, talking about Zak's family. Child living on his parent's wealth, but not on their love. Someone has rightly said- ''If you want to spend the best on your child, spend your time with them. They'd be the wealthiest...'' Hayye! Love this ❤️ How very true!

Zak misses that wealthiness. He has all money in the world, yet he seeks that love, that he finds in his Mistress and Zoya's Dadi. Well, he's trying to make some of his wealth. A real well behaved boy, loving and caring. As much as he could do. Yes! He's a gem of a person who has always starved for a parent's love and that's why he loves spending time at Zoya's house because it gives him a family wali feeling 😳

Though in the start I was unable to understand your title with the context of your story.
Then after that Cornetto and Mango tree incident, I thought maybe you were trying to show contrast between Asad and Zoya, like how Asad is a selfish, thinks of himself and things around him; n Zoya a selfless, who loves Asad with all her might. And Zak's entry will bring in that angle of Zoya getting close with Zak, making Asad realise his selfishness, not encashing the opportunity of getting the love from his best friend. OMG! Why didn't I think of this? 😲 This could've been a good plot too! 👍🏼 😃

Yet again, I think I was thinking in the wrong direction. Now what I am thinking is, that may be you are trying to show the contrast between Zak's parents', Asad's guardians and Zoya's dadi. Though all the 3 of them are growing Parentless, yet Zoya has that one person that makes hers and her friends' lives bright. Yes it's going to be about the adults as well. Though the title is more based on the kids. You'll see ahead In Sha Allah! Problem ye hai k my story is a bit too detailed in my head 😕 I don't know how I'll write that big an FF! This seems like another DI in making 😆
Do let me know Fari, what point of view yours is. I have already given my speculations. 😆
I have missed to talk about our beloved Asad. This guy, It took me the longest to understand him man! Sometime he would prove to be the bestest friend Zoya can even get. Caring, protective, and loving. Yet he keeps something inside him to himself only, keeping Zoya away from some of his inner thoughts and miseries. Though circumstances have been bad and cruel for all the 3 kids here, but they have effected the worst in Asad's case. There was no one to protect his innocence at the right time, to save him grow at the correct age. He has overgrown himself mentally and emotionally. This is very true. Zoya and Zak have some sort of support systems in the form of her Daadi and his governess but Asad never had any grown up to fall back on. That's the reason he has mayured before his time 😒 Awww my poor baby!!!

Though in the Cornetto incident, I think, it was not the case of not sharing, it was the case of unfulfilled desires. Desire to have one icecream for himself, instead of getting a share from Zoya's. Zoya must have had plenty of those icecreams that she must have had for herself, whereas, Asad must have starved for that one cone of relishness. He doesn't seems selfish that much, more than he seems hungry of unfulfilled desires. That is quite a theory! That's all I'm gonna say 😃

Mango incident also I think he doesn't want to accept his feelings infront of Zoya until he can stand on his feet and capable of having Zoya as his life partner. The insecurity of life stops him. That is what he did in the last update, when he mindlessly said he wud drown for Zoya, and them immediately covered that up, to not let Zoya get awed and have ideas in that direction.
Dunno how rite I'm. Thats my POV. SSHHH!!! Don't reveal everything here! Everyone will find out 😆 Your POV is uncannily right 😉
Now you tell me, is this story going to revolve around only their teenage, or is it going to progress into their 20's and adult life, just in case their love too? It is going to progress to their adult life 😃

Whoosh! That was 5000 character update! 😆
will eagerly wait for your reply. And sorry if u find it too pathetic, lengthy and boring consolidated comment!! NO NO I'm sorry! My little niece came over and she DOES NOT let me use the laptop while she is over. She is my jaan so I can't even be annoyed at her ❤️ 😆

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Where art thou Fari? 😕

Here now! Sorry 🤔