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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Awesome part

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next part

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Awesome
In this update u made me fall for asad
Its really amazing
The way he took care of her was too good
Plz update soon

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

You are so so amazing..!!
It was another awesome update..
asad nd zoya are such cute things yr..
Asad cared for zoya nd dadi so well..
he is such a sweetheart nd so mature..
I just adore their friendship..
lovely update...!!
U hav no idea how glad I am that u r back...!! :*
Thank u..:)

Edited by cutie15 - 10 years ago

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

another fun mix lite emotional update😃enjyd asya bickrng dey r sho adorable🤗

so nw dey r 17 ne yr go fr asya seperatn😭as asad mntnd

nd my fav part in dis was hw trio bndng hw zak nd asad gve side hug to zoe aftr sucesful operatn kisi nazar na lage inke frnshp ko thu thu thu😛 lvd hw asad stood beside zoe al d time hw he made her drnk juice nd eat aple he s so so so so so so so carng

s i was too amusd by hs care jus as aunty he s so so so so so so so so mature dan hs age lvng dis asad sho sho much😳

awww asad made brkfast fr daadi abhi kitne tareefe chahiye yaar ise kitna shweeet banda h 😳aap itne carng frn ko selfish kaise kehsakte ho farii😛

lvd zoe excuses to daadi nd hw she said tat it was nly asad h wil nt hav any prblm nd evn he had who cares dey r such a cutepiees

d way u dscrbd AsYa emotions in hsptal s so so so so so so so so gud nd touchy👍🏼cntnue vry vry vry vry soon asusual waitng fr grwnup asya love story abhi ye haal h tho tab kya hoga dono ka hope asad wnt bcme jyada mature nd behav like oldie😉bt always love hm no mater hw strct nd oldie he bcmes 🤗nw update soonish plsh eagerly waitng fr leap😳

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

This is getting better and better.. Loving it..

My grandma is my world too. So i know how she might felt..

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Superb Update..

Loved it alot..

Asad took good care of Zoya..

Zak is good friend of AsYa..

My most favorite line of this update is

"It's alright. I'll-I'll just hug the walls. Don't worry about me. I'll be fine." They heard Zak exclaiming behind them and laughing together, they broke apart."

Enjoyed Zak's comment..

Continue soon..

Thnx for PM..

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kaju27

@kaju27

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

update wss as usual awesome 😊
well i read it on SaAz but commenting her too 😉
becoz this is my original forum nd my favourite couple 😉
coming to the uppdate it was showing the turmoil of the teenagers
sahir/asad was scared too but hid it so that he can give support to arzoo/zoya that shows how mature he is 😊
their bickering was sooo cute 😆
as the chapters progressing i think that he takes her as friend only
and i have thought that since the title of the story indicate that sahir/asad is selfish here, i have a feeling that end of the story will not be happy 😭
so i have thought of a solution so i won't get upset that if you give me happy ending then it's on asya... SaAz too i don't mind
but if it has sad ending then i won't consider as asya ss 😉

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Very very sweet and cute story of friendship and love.

Loved Assad here.

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Wow awesome update 😛

Love their friendship❤️

that's what we call a true friendship😉

Beautifully written yaar👏

the asad was supperting zoya in hospital was just brilliantly done

waiting for next

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GuassianNoise

@GuassianNoise

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

OH MY GOD. Fari, you're back!🤗

I had been a silent reader during Destinies Intertwined(might have written something once or twice from my older account) but I totally loved that story. It'll always be one of my favourite fictions on IF.

How do you always manage to write so well? You convey every emotion to us readers beautifully.

And this story is no exception. I love the way you've portrayed Asad and Zoya here. They are SO cute. The constant bickering, walking back home together, the swing incident. Everything is perfect. So much love :')

Oh and how did I forget Zak? He's such a good guy! 🤗I have a strong feeling that he's going to be some sort of a catalyst in AsYa's love story.

Selfish and Selfless. Hmm. I spent quite some time pondering over the title. The first few chapters led us to believe that Zoya's the selfless one, sharing her Cornetto and also caring for Asad much more than he does for her. But the last few chapters tell a different story. Maybe there's much much more to Asad's character than we can see? 🤔

I'm hooked on to this now. Please please update the sixth chapter. Now now now.

I'm so happy to have you back with another amazing story for us!

Lots of love😳

Quick Reminder: PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!!