|AsYa FF| Selfish & Selfless :) Chapter 6, Page 21 Updated! :)

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simmi

@-simmi-

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Oh wow m so happy u r back i really love ur stories n this is awesome specially their first meeting in kindergarten that was so cute the all four update are mindblowing it was like a diwali bumper dhamaka in feb 😆 smwhere i have a gut feeling this ayesha is not good for their frendship... But anyway their is no love story without complication right 😳
Continue soon!!

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

I was like 😃 when saw your name in my inbox and when read it as asya ff I was like😃😃

so 🤗 for the come back and ❤️

before talking about it just want to remind you:

Waiting for the epilogue of destiinies intertwined and an asya os😉

now abou this ff:

I really don't know how to explain my happiness to read your another ff that too on asya

really love your writing thanks a ton for the pm❤️

the concept is just out standing

their friendship

they way they care and protact each other

zoya's being so selfless

asad's being or acting like a selfish

zak's entry

each and every part of it was just brilliantly done👍🏼

just some questions

1: was that dairy just a simple dairy or...?

2: asad said he will leave after turning 18 years old will he leave zoya as well in all this?

3:he acts like a selfish then why got angry when zoya said so?

4:will zak's saying that asad's action will create a serious misunderstanding between them turn to be right?

5:will zak act like this always like a true friend?

Eagerly waiting to read further and specialspecially from asad's pov

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Devanshivaish

@Devanshivaish

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

It was a fantastic chapter

Or should I say a wonderful of 4 amazing chapters😃

Who is shellfish here ASAd?????

I don't think so!!!!!!!

Corneto scene was cute

I thinks he keen about her cold

Well any ways I was fantastic start

Update soon

PS im big fan of ur other OS and destinies interwind

Keep writing and update soon

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Antara123

@Antara123

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Hello Fari

You may not know me, since I was a silent reader for Destinies Intertwined ( Ya, sue me, :( )

But, in my defence, I wasn't even a member of IF, one of my first reads was your story then. And I absolutely loved it.

I laughed at the end, seeing your comment, demanding us to start writing. 🤣

Amazing story this one is. Zoya and Asad are friends, BEST friends let me add, and she loves him,a and he should too, he must, but he is not vocal. Doesnt mean he doesnt have feelings.

For a change, Razia and Siddiqui are ASAD's relatives. The diary thing was cheesy but cute. Zoya is always a brat.

I am unable to express my thoughts properly actually... xD

Oh. And I LOVE ZAK! His characterisation is just brilliant!👏

I am in love with this story. Please update soon!

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mummyoftwo

@mummyoftwo

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Wow. Loved it!!!

Pls update soon

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

You know what? I ADORE YOU PEOPLE 🤗

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Sorry for not replying to your comments! I had a headache today and I took a Panadol only to complete writing this chapter! Couldn't keep you all waiting longer 🤗