Asya, Sahil and Sehaan FF: The Game of Love pt7-pg8 updated - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: nilusoni

amazing part

seher and ahil teamed up against tanveer
wow asad dont like aahil much
wow excited for family union
plz pm me for next part
continue soon


tnks
yes they teamed against tanveer however aahil's involment is not more
haa how will he stealed his little daughter
contine reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Wow cute sehan
kiss nd then bachpan wala love

Want more 😆 😉
😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Read all the 5 parts together

It is amazing and the flow of the story is also good
Everything is a plus point bas only it needs some editing and paragraphs ko dialogues se alag rakho
Also post new part in a new post or write the part number in bold
I know first time hai and all but just giving suggestion to help make reading easy for us readers
Sorry if I hurt you by giving the straight forward suggestion but this is who i am

This Tannu itni buddhi ho gayi but abhi bhi she does Jammy Jammy
Waiting for Seher VS Tannu


thnks
and don't be sorry infact thanks for ur feedback
aaha vo baat tanu ko kaise samjaya ki vo buddhi he

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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
amazing part
sehaan lovely
seher is wonderful
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
A www. Cute update
Yay! AsYa dance!!
Update son!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
nyc update
plz update nxt prt soon
n don't frgt to pm me

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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Hi guyss here's part 6d:

Part 6d:

Sehaan go to the orphange. The kids see them together and are very happy. They spend some time there and go from there. Next rehaan takes her to the kohinoor hotel where they spent some wonderful moments.

Se-hum yaha kyu hai

Re-just wait

He gives her the dress which she wore on the day he proposed her but then the police came and all. He says her to wear the dress and come in the office. He also wears the same dress and closes her eyes the sam way he did before. He removes hands from her eyes after entering. It was the same way he decorated it before.

Se-rehaan its beautiful

Re-shh wait I have to say something. Last time it didn't end properly but this time it will. He goes on his knees and proposes her.

Re- Seher tumhari naam ki tarah tumne bi mere zindagii me roshinni layi. Thanks for coming in my life and making it beautiful. Will you be with me forever and make my life beautiful.

She has tears in her eyes. She just nods and he slids the ring in her finger.

They later go to bappa's temple and go back.

In the evening: (party)

Asad:

Zoya:

Aahil:

Sanam

Rehan

Seher

It was on full swing. The repoters ask many questions as the great Asad Ahmed Khan is back.

Later Seher goes to the stage and announces asya's dance.

Zo-yeh kya

As-come lets go

The song Raabta plays

He twirls her around and they sway to the music.

Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

He goes far from her and again comes closer.

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Tu humsafar hai
Phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi hai
Marna issi ke liye

Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
har kisi ke liye...

He holds her waist while she keeps her hand on his sholder.

hmm Meharbaani jaate-jaate mujhpe kar gaya
Guzarta saa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
Tera nazaara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Taqdeer ki kashtiyon ko kinara mila

Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri sohbat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye

He bends her down and turns her around.

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fiqar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi hai
Marna issi ke liye

Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye...

He lifts her up, looks in her eyes and sings, then bring her down on the feet, twirls her around and brings her to his chest, keeps his hand on her stomach and the song ends.

Eveyone applaud them while calls for a sahil dance. The song plays zehanseeb.

He holds her hand and takes her to dance floor and turns her around so that she falls on his chest.

Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

He turns her around and keeps his hand on her stomach.

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

They sway to the music.

Huaa ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

He turns her around and bends her.

Lena-dena nahi duniya se mera
Bas tujh se kaam hai
Teri ankhiyon ke sheher me
Yaara sab intezaam hai
Khushiyon ka ek tukda mile
Ya mile gham ki khurchane
Yaara tere mere kharche me
Dono ka hi ek daam hai

He removes a hair strand falling on her face and tucks it behind. He comes far and then close and then she locks her hands with his.

Hona Likha Tha Yoon Hi Jo Hua
Ya Hote Hote Abhi Anjaane Mein Ho Gaya..
Jo Bhi Hua, Hua Ajeeb..
Tujhe Chahoon Betahasha Zehnasib..
Zehanaseeb Zehnaseeb
Tujhe Chahoon Betahasha Zahnaseeb..

He takes her hand and they sway to the music.

Hua Ameer, Dil Gareeb
Tujhe Chahoon Betahasha Zahnasib..

Zehnasib Zahanaseeb
Tujhe Chahoon Betahasha
Tujhe Chahoon Betahasha
Zehanseeb..

They keep their hands in each others in between and end the song.

And then Saahil go on stage and announce welcome the lover birds sehaan for a dance. The song dhoka dhadi plays.

Ud gaye tote re, tere to ud gaye tote re
La la la la... (x4)

He keeps a hand on her waist and she keeps a hand on his shoulder and start dancing.

Teri aankhon se hui yaariyan chalte chalte yunhi
Meri aankhon ne teri aankhon se aap-beeti kahi
Teri aankhon k piche piche hum pagle se chal pade
Meri aankhen ab dil ke chakar me kuch bhi na sunti hain

She locks her hands with his and he brings it near their eyes and they sway to the music.

Dil yeh dhokha dhadi kar dega, Socha na tha
Itni yeh gadbadi kar dega, Socha na tha
Aisi mushkil khadi kar dega, Socha na tha

Ud gaye tote, tere to ud gaye tote re
La la la la...
Ud gaye tote re, tere to ud gaye tote re


He swirls her and takes her in his arms and sway to the music.

Hote dil farebi hain
Aur hum sirphire bhi hain
Pyaar-vyaar hum nahi jaante
Seedhe-saade lagte ho
Phir kyun aise thugte ho
Lagte hain kya nadaan se

She turns around and starts dancing in his arms.

Hmm, isey jo maaf kije wallah
Yeh dil zara sa hai nitthalla
Iraade hain beimaan se

Dil ye dhokha dhadi kar dega, Socha na tha
Itni ye gadbadi kar dega, Socha na tha
Aise mushkil khadi kar dega, Socha na tha..

Ud gaye tote re, tere to ud gaye tote re
O la la la..
Udd gaye tote re, tere to ud gaye tote re
La la la la..

They sway to the music.

Mere kaano mein kahin
Roshandaano se kahin
Chhanti teri aawaz hai
Zyaada na hai ye kahe
Chup bhi na hai yeh rahe
Aankhon ka ye andaaz hai

He touches her ear with his ear.

Chalo miyaan ho gaya milna
Neendon mein bhi khona phisalna
Khwaabon pe tum chalna dhyaan se

Dil ye dhoka-dhadi kar dega, Socha na tha
Itni yeh gadbadi kar dega, Socha na tha
Aise mushkil khadi kar dega, Socha na tha...

Ud gaye tote re, tere to ud gaye tote re
La ra la la... (x3)

They sway to the music and end the dance.

They all call for a dance of the three couples. The song Radha plays. All of them start dancing the girls teasing and the boys praising them.

All the guests go. When all were about to go seher implements her plan and calls tanveer for a dance. The song aazma luck plays. Seher while twists tanveer's both the hands so that she can't use them for 2 days and pushes her(like in the kohinoor party) and stamps her legs. Tanveer now is bedridden for 2 days. Sanam tries to stop seher but seher ko kaun roksta hai.

***

Precap: Asya Sahil romance, a bit of sehaan moments

How was it? Do comment. I will update part 7 as soon as I can.

Edited by nicecoolhappygo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
awesome update!
AsYa dance for Raabta!! Haaye!
Tanveer! ha ha ha
Update soon
and thnx for d pm!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Hey sis really sorryyy for the delay...
Comin to the update it was awesum!!!!
Loved it to the core!!
Hahahaha loved seher n billi's convo
Seher is just awesumm really love her n sehaan is one adorable couple...
The reunion was nycc..
Aahil is such a sweetheart...
Love the argument on the table n sahil romance..
Loveee the 3 couples together, really cute...
Tanveer's son?? why do I feel its seher's plan..
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

awesome update!

AsYa dance for Raabta!! Haaye!
Tanveer! ha ha ha
Update soon
and thnx for d pm!


Thanks
Will continue soon

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