Asya, Sahil and Sehaan FF: The Game of Love pt7-pg8 updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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i am a silent reader. however i couldn't stop this idea in my mind and wrote it. this is the first time i am writing anything so do not know how it goes. 😊

*its after sahil go to meet sulaiman chacha
*Asya are alive. but they'll after 2-3 parts.
*rehaan is not going to dubai.
*seher's a bit intelligent😉😉


Part 1:

Aahil and sanam consult sulaiman chacha. He tells Aahil the truth. Aahil is not able to believe that is true. He starts breaking down. Sanam holds him and makes him sit. She caresses his cheek smoothly and takes a deep breath.

S- mai janthithi Aahil ki begum sahiba hi aapki abbu hi kathil thi.

Aahil is in a shock. But he keeps quiet and waits for her to tell.

S-mai ye bat aapko isliye nahi bathana chahati ti kyuki aap mujpar yankeen nahi karenge. He tries to interrupt but she stops him and continues- Aahil mein jo bolungi app puri baat pehle suniye. Just listen. He just nods. She just gives him a peck on his forehead. She then tells him everything including his mother's vision. She also tells how sanam2 helped them and again changed. His eyes express pure shock and anger but more of it is his guilt and hurt. He just stands up. His legs were not giving him any support. Sanam just holds him and makes him sit.

Aahil tells that he didn't know what happened that night with sanam2 and tells that as soon as he drank the juice he felt a bit odd and the next thing he remembers is waking up in the bed with sanam2. Sanam assures him that we will find out about it.

A-Sanam, I am sorry

Tears start falling down from the two pair of eyes. Words were not needed. The eyes did all the work. Aahil pulled sanam into a bone crushing hug. He keeps on saying sorry. He pulls out from the hug.

A- sanam I am sorry tum mere liye intzaar karhi ti or mein yaha kisi aur ko tum samjke jeer aha ta.

S- Aahil you need not be sorry aapko mere upar itna pyaar tha jiske wajse aap sach ko nehi dekh paye. Par Aahil I'll not say that I am hurt. I am not hurt because of you not identifying me but not trusting me enough to listen to me.

Aahil- I am really sorry sanam

Sanam- its ok Aahil ab hum ek nayi zindagi shuru karenge humare zindagi se burai ko nikal kar. Saying this she wipes his tears.

***

In Ibrahim mansion:

Kitchen

Seher thought to take a step against the new sanam.

Se- yeh nayi sanam bohot ajeeb hai. Pata nahi kya ghoor ghoor ke dekhti rehti he aisa lagtha hai aake phood dho iski. Kuch tho karna hoga. She remembers the toe incident. Kuch to zaroor pak raha hai iski dimag me.

She then sees sanam2 coming and taking some lemons and other stuff and going. Seher decides to follow her.

Sanam2 goes to the store room and starts doing all those stuff.

Seher sees this and gets amused.

Seher(thoughts): mujhe pata karna hoga k ye kaun he. Kitni ajeeb hai.

She thinks and goes to sahil's room and locks the door. (She knows they have gone out). She opens sanam2's trunk and starts seeing through it to find anything. She sees a photo album. She closes the trunk immediately. Before going she sees the name on it as Sanam Abdullah on the trunk written in small letters. She sees this and moves out. While going sanam2 in the same room seen before doing something and understands it as black magic. She gets shocked knowing it. She was about to go when she heard sanam2 speaking.

S2- ab dekhna sanam mein tumhe aahilji ki zindagi mein hamesha keliye bahar nikaldongi. Tumhe khud bi nehi pata hogi kyu tumne aisa bole. Aahilji ki dimaag tum apne aap apne baato se tumhare leyi nafrat paida karoge. Tumhe bi nehi pata hoga ki tumhare mooh se who baat kese nikli. aur phir aahilji aur paise dono mere honge.

Saying this she moves out. Seher quickly hides. She immediately calls sanam.

***

Sahil took sulaiman chacha's blessing and were to go home when sanam got seher's call.

S- seher ye kyu is waqt call kar rahi he. She lifts the call.

Se- Kya huwa vaha

S- seher meine Aahil ko saari sachai pata chalgye hai. Jab sulaiman chachane unke abbu ki maut ki sachai batyi meine unhe baaki sachai bi batadi. Ab hum nikl rahe he. Jaldhi vaha pochenge. Seher intreupts her.

Se- tu mat nikal. Vahi ruk. Mein hi vaha ar ruhi.

Sa-kyu kya huwa

Se- mein ab tumhe kuch nehi batasakti bas vaha ruk.

Saying this she cut the call. Sanam tells Aahil what she told. They wait there. Meanwhile Seher comes there with rehaan and tells them about sanam2's black magic. So she says it's not safe to go there right now as even tanveer might be planning something as the truth is out so it will be safe to go somewhere else as this time they have to be careful and be a step forward than them.

A- hum humare farmhouse jayenge phir vahase uska pata lagayenge or phir mujhe ye bi pata karna hoga ki ammi yaha kyu ayi. He struggle saying the word ammi. They observe it but be quiet for meanwhile.

S- vo budiya she sees rehaan and sanam widening there eyes and says nahi begum sahiba aayiti yaha.

Sanam tells seher the matter.

Aahil now feels how different this woman is different from sanam. She can never become sanam. No one can be like sanam. His Sanam.

They leave to aahil's farmhouse.

***

Part 2:

Everyone sat in the hall. Sanam being sanam goes to kitchen to prepare lunch. Rehaan goes to his room for freshup. Aahil for sometime goes to the garden and sits on the bench replaying everything once sanam came into his life. Seher goes after Aahil to speak to ask for sorry. She goes and sits on the bench and calls jiju.

He turns towards her but doesn't speak anything.

Se- Jiju, meine aapko aise bulane ka hak khodiya. Kehte sab rishto me se jiju-saali ka rishta bohoti anoki hoti hai par meine use khodiya apne hi haato se. A lone tear escaped her eyes but she hid it as she wanted to speak and remove that burden of her heart. meine jo galtiya uski mafi nahi he. Shayad agar sanam meri behen na hoti to mein wo galti karchuki houngi. Aur tab use mujhe teek karneka mouka nahi hota. Mere vajhase mere swarthse do neik insaan ki zindagi barbaad hojati already hochuki hi aur mein use kitni bhi teek karnachahu jo huwa use mein badal nahi sakti. Shayad agar mein is duniya mein nahi hoti to meri behen ki zindagi teek-taak hoti. Aahil wanted to stop her but he let her say. She continued after taking a deep breath. She was going to tell her dark past. He would be the first person to know about her past other than rehaan. She didn't even tell it to sanam no one except rehaan knew it. But she could tell it to him. Even to rehaan she could not tell it so clearly. Such was jiju-saali's relationship. Mein do saal ki thi jab mere aur sanam ke abbu aur ammi chale gaye. Us durghatna mein me aur sanam alag hogaye. Uske baad mere pas koi nehi tha. I was a orphan. Mujhe bhook laga par khana nahi tha. Mujhe ghar jaana tha par ghar nahi tha. Kuch nahi tha. I started crying thinking someone will come but no came in vain. I started having garbage. Then one day some orphanage people came and took me. Life played a cruel joke with me. She let out a sarcastic laugh. I didn't even know who I was. I started calling myself as Sunehri. Then one day two thieves came and adopted me. They told me life was cruel and I need to fight but being with them I took a evil path to fight to live and the evil path was conning. Yes, I was a con woman. I conned people for my living. I believed life is all about money. Living in the streets made me believe so. To be frank I was no less than your mother. The only difference is I didn't murder anyone. Thats the only remaining thing to do. But I never played with people's emotions but soon that day came when I myself started to spoil my sister's life because I felt that was my fate, I was selfish, selfish because I didn't get any love. That's why I made the decision when razia came to me in the temple. For the first time in my life I loved someone with all my heart but then again it all came to an end. Yes I loved seher ahmed khan loved and is still loving someone for the first and last time in her life. I met a man, I came all set to con him but fell in love with him. Then he confessed his love to me and I was to confess the truth to him. It was all going beautifully but when I was to tell him my truth the truth came before him harshly and we broke up. That day I met razia and all this started. On the day of nikaah I came to know about sanam and also that the person whom I love is giving me another chance. Then we came back and you were married. We patched up later and I told him the truth and the rest is history. Still I can't make up for the mistakes I did. All I can do is apologize to you.

"Jiju I am sorry". She waited for him to say anything but when he didn't she took a deep breath and got up to walk away when he said

"You know what Seher your story is somewhat similar to mine." He got up and crossed his arms and then said You grew up as an orphan and did these mistakes while having everything with me but not love grew up into a monster. I was monster until sanam came to me and showed me who I am. I was a womanizer and a complete jerk. Well you'll hear my stories from your sister. I burned down her only source of living, her dhaba because she said insulted me because I was wrong. I hurt her so much but then she changed me and made me a neik insaan you say I am. The same goes for you the person whom you love change you but then something happened and you did it all only because you were hurt otherwise you wouldn't. Maybe it was a way to make you two sisters meet. It was the game of destiny."

Se: you'll forgive me? She asked teary eyed.

A: Of course Saali Sahiba and took her in jiju-saali hug.

***

Sorry, it was long. Give me your feedback

Part 3A:

A- so whos ur boyfriend ha?

Se- can't tell u so quick, it's a challenge find out. Saying this she runs away.

A- Unbelievable! He goes inside to freshenup.

Seher bumps into rehan while running. Their eyes lock for a minute and it is disturbed by rehan's cell ringing. He answers the call but not before giving seher a kiss on her cheek.

After that they all have their lunch and settle down to discuss the matter.

Se- Pehli baat agar us tanveer ne tum dono ko dekne bad chup rahi to uske dimag me kuch to chal raha he.

Sa-Par kya

Se-Agar Jiju ko sach pata chalgya to vune mentally nehi handle karsakte so physically kuch karegi. Par vo usi vaqt Aahil ko sach pata chalne se roksakti thi. Isqa matlab uske gandi dimaag me kuch aur pareshaani he. Iska bare me pata lagani chahiye taki hum is uske against use karsaqte.

Re- par une kya parshanni hogi

Se- mujhe itna zarror pata hai ki une emotionally kuch parshanni kyuki humne use kal rote hue dekhe. Matlab billi royi. Rehaan rolls his eyes. Whatever. Begum sahiba to unke family related hosakta hai. So jiju app unki sare family conections ke bare me pata karenge. Pehle latif ko phone kijiye ki wo kya ghar me hai.

Aahil calls and S2 lifts the call.

A-kya ammi ghar me hai

S2-nahi aahilji. App ko kuch chahiye

Aahil- tumse matlab agar ammi puche to kehna shyam tak aajounga.

Se-ab salim chachu se kehiye ki agar begum sahiba puche to kehna ki meine kuch nahi bola.

Aahil does it. Meanwhile Tanveer calls Aahil and asks if he told anything, he lies and tells that chacha couldn't remember and tells he is going to come after a while with sanam as they have gone to dargah.

Se-so ab Aahil ko kuch nahi karegi. Next coming to Sanam2. She removes the photo album to find anything about her. They see the name as Sanam Abdullah and as they open they see the picture of S2 with a woman in many photos. They do not find anything more while closing the book they see a lost photo of Sanam2 with the jailor. Sanam and aahil immediately tell that this was the woman tanveer was speaking to. Aahil tells we'll go and see her. They went there and saw her. She asks for food. They immediately get it. Then she sees S2 in the picture and says:

J-ye tanveer ki beti hai. This was a shock. Par use ye nahi pata. Ise jaismila legyeti. Iskeliye vo subah aayti.

S-par ye to ghar me hai.

J-oh! Par use yeh nahi pata ki uski beti kaun hai. Aaj subah meine use addres di taki vo use dund paye.

They leave her but take that address again.

S-agar voh tanveer ki beti hai to ye nikaah nahi hosakata. Kyuki vo uski aadi behen hai.

Se-right hume yaha sekilke jaismilah ke paas jaake ye pata lagne hoga ki use yeh pata he ki nahi.

They go there and see house locked when asked the neighbor she is not here from 3 months.

Se-this proves that use kuch nahi pata. To simple lets go and cancel the nikaah and send tanveer out.

But when they go they find tanveer is not there.(Shes gone to block all evidences). So for now they send S2 and cancel nikaah.

Night:(Ibrahim mansion)

All were sitting in hall when tanveer came inside. She went to shoot seher but latif pushed her and the bullet reached rehaan. The first person to react you all know it.

Se- Rehaaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aahil called the ambulance immediately.

All the way to hsptl seher was saying rehaan nothing will happen. Get up. Utiye rehaan.

She breaksdown. Sahil don't understand seher's reaction. But just console her.

tanveer sits in the house shocked that she shot her own son. she comes to know S2 her own daughter. She felt she can't go to jail again and put blame on S2. S2 accepted because she thought my life is waste.(remember when she frst came in show bholi bhali)😉

Precap: asya entry rehaan serious

thanks for all your feedback can't reply new member. all problem not solved. sorry for asya wait. just thinking to give them a entry. i mean it should be a dhamka. but no more waiting will give you in next part

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start
reading 'cos AsYa is alive :)
p.s. Seher is always intelligent!
Edited by KSGmaniac_24579 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesomeee
Loved it to the coreee!!!
Asya are alive OMG!!! Sooo happy!!!
Finally aahil gets know the truth bwt his so called "ammi"
I'm so glad that all misunderstandings bitwin sahil is cleared n nw they will start everythn afresh..
Seher has always been my favorite 😆 she is just tooo good n bwt SeHaan I love that couple too cute n adorable..
Thank god Seher got to know bwt that witch n her black magic..
Really happy with sehan n sahil are together..
waiting for the next part eagerly
Do continue asap
do pm me if possible
Edited by sanah12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AsYa are alive That is all I needed to hit in this thread
Will comment on the parts after reading

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's awesome loved it
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

nice start

reading 'cos AsYa is alive :)
p.s. Seher is always intelligent!

But Cvs wasted her talent. Isliye using here.
Afterall talent kabhi waste nahi hota
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanah12

Awesomeee
Loved it to the coreee!!!
Asya are alive OMG!!! Sooo happy!!!
Finally aahil gets know the truth bwt his so called "ammi"
I'm so glad that all misunderstandings bitwin sahil is cleared n nw they will start everythn afresh..
Seher has always been my favorite 😆 she is just tooo good n bwt SeHaan I love that couple too cute n adorable..
Thank god Seher got to know bwt that witch n her black magic..
Really happy with sehan n sahil are together..
waiting for the next part eagerly
Do continue asap
do pm me if possible


yes asya alive will give dhamka entry all though i have never seen their episodes saw only few but read much and a few episodes. so i can give it well because of their chemistry can make us crazy with few episodes
Yes agar S2 is black magic then Seher is Chaska bina Maska
Gona give more touch charecters from part 3b as want finish the truth part but then problems are not solved. sahil, sehaan, asya chemistry from Part 3b
thnks
do continue to rd and giv feedback
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chahanya

AsYa are alive That is all I needed to hit in this thread

Will comment on the parts after reading

yes and are going to rock
thnqs
do continue read and feedback
however asya entry is chp3b want frst cut useless things and make space for love to be in air. but ofcourse tanveer never dies. shes gone come but this u'll enjoy her presence.
cntinue rding toknw why
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

It's awesome loved it

Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon

thnks gona cntinue soon
do continue reading and give feedback
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3b:

Part 3 is dived into 3 parts.

In the airport:

Two people are seen and yes they are none other thn our asya.

Z-Mr. khan aapko yaad hai apne mujhe yaha propose kiytha or mein to ab bhi shock mein hu ki Mr.Jerk became Mr.Superromantic

A- yaad hain mein hamesha romantic tha par thodi aged hona dikhna mushkil hai.

Z- oh really mr khan! Aged mein hu ya aap? Main abhi bhi cool and young hu. Rahul ko phone karu.

(rahul was their neighbour in London who used to praise her always. They moved to lndn after the incident. They were saved. They tried to search others but in vain so went to London.asya were here bcuse of Aahil. Aahil tell the reason. They came here bcause whn Aahil came to know he mde a business deal with them by nt telling them to surprise. As u ARI gets what he wants after d deal he made asad come and asad ke bina zoya wo bhi agayi but not without their tamatar.)

A- miss farooqi!

Z-mrs.khan itna saal hoga phir bi yaad nahi ata. Ye batata hai budhe kaun.

A - zoyaa

Zoya n najma start sing main kya karo ram mujhe budhe milgya.😆

He avoids thm and goes front. They laugh and move front.

They r happy for this is Bhopal- whr they found their love but sad because they lost their family. Asad's feeling- if not for Mr.ARI What to do ARI does what he wants. Ahh but Mr.ARI first impression from ur Sasurji.

***

In hsptl:

Aahil understands seher loves rehaan remembering the convo with rehaan on the nikah night. He tells to sanam. They console her. The doctor comes out and says it serious they can't say anything till tomorrow and he may also die or go into coma. Seher slumps down on the wall.not even a single tear falls down. She closes her eyes remembers every moment with rehaan and her past. In these thoughts she stays awake whole night. She gave no response to sahil.

***

Precap: Rehaan's condition. Family reunioun. Seher's decision

Pls gv fdbck

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