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Hi guysss. Was busy with note completion and my other ff. Unfortunately, I forgot my password and thanks my account got deleted. So I am writing with a new account. Hope you like it. Its full of Sehan. Next one will be full of Sahil. And the other one will be Asya moments with SaSe. And then my favourite one- be ready to see the Jallad Jin.

Part 8:

It was nearing to 12:00 o' clock. And as the clock struck 12:00.

Seher was having her beauty sleep and was dreaming about( you know who I am speaking about). She didn't know when her birthday was. Soon she woke up when she felt a soft touch on her cheek and she could identify that touch even in her sleep. She gave her dollar smile but pretended to be asleep.

He smiled at her cute antics and left out a small laugh which made her heart warm. How nice the laughter sounded. He pecked her forehead.

R- Stop your cute antics and wake up my darling.

She woke up and her heartbeat increased hearing his husky voice. It happened everytime he was near her no even when she heard his nam. Rehan. How nice it was. She loved to say this.

Se- rehan

How beautiful his name sounded from her mouth?

Re- seher

Saying this he caresses her face. There were butterflies in her stomach as she heard her name from his husky voice. How flawlessly he said it? They had an eyelock. Not leaving his eyes from hers he said.

Re- Happy birthday Seher.

Tears made their way to her cheek. She just hugged him. She started crying. Today was her birthday. She never knew it. For her there was never a birthday. No one ever celebrated her birthday. Hearing this she became emotional. How she cried to know who she was. She started crying on to his shirt.

Re- Shh. Seher.

Se- Rehan thank you so much. Those words mean a lot to me.

Re- And you mean everything to me. She just hugged him and he hugged her back.

Re- Waise don't you want to see your gift.

And her child like innocence came back.

Se- Ha

He gave her a rectangular shaped gift which was wrapped in a gift wrapping paper. She opened it and seeing the gift again there were tears in her eyes. He wiped them. It was her birth certificate.

Re- don't become too emotional. There are others two. He gifted her a album of her childhood photos with her parents.

Re- Now come down. I have some other gifts. I have brought you a dress. I want you to wear it.

She took the dress and she changed into it.

The dress:

He took her down. And there was standing her favourite car. It was a pink cool car just like her.(Sorry, I don't know much about cars. So you can imagine on your own).

She squealed seeing it and hugged him so tight.

Re- Liked it?

Se- I loved it Rehan. My fav car.

Re- wanna go for a ride?

Se- Yes. And I am going to ride it.

Re- Fine. But slow. Ok

Se- Yeah sure.

As soon as he removed the keys from his pocket. She grabbed it and sat and asked him to sit.

He sat in.

Re- Don't drive too fast ok.

She drove the car a bit fast but didn't cross the limits and Rehan kept cautioning her.

Finally she came to a halt.

He took the driver seat now. He drove to the restaurant where he met her first. She got down.

Re- close your eyes.

Outside the restaurant:

When she opened her eyes it was beautiful. There up in the sky was written with crackers.

Happy birthday Seher'.

Se- Its beautiful Rehan.

He then said- Seher this was the first time I met you. Though I thought you as Sanam I am the most happiest for this meeting. It changed my life. Thanks for coming in my life. He hugged her.

Re- Now come there's another surprise.

Se- Another surprise.

Re- Hmm come with me.

He took her to the orphanage. Their the kids where catching trays with candles. In each tray a letter was formed. Thus- Happy birthday Sunheri was formed. He closed her eyes and they went in. After seeing the kids. She just went and hugged them. She took blessings from Shenaz bi. All the children and Shenaz bi, Sehan celebrated her birthday. They cut the cake and made her have.

She played with the kids a lot. She had a connection with the orphanage a lot. When she was a orphan or thought so they made her feel they were there for her. And she loved spending time with them. And they wishing her meant a lot to her.

It was nearing 4'o' clock. He took her to Bappa's temple. They took his blessings and came out. They were standing near the car.

Re- mein Bappa ko tumhe apne life meiin bejne ke liye jitna bi shukriyada karu seher kam padjayenge. Just don't go away from me.

Se- Thanks Rehan Thanks for everything. Thanks for loving me. Thanks for coming in my life and giving a meaning to it. And they hugged. Rain started. He caressed he face and then cupped it and they kissed each other there in the rain. It was a slow yet passionate kiss showing all the love they have for each other and thanking each other for coming in their lives.

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Here I end the update. Next update will be Aahil celebrating Sanam's birthday. Please give your comments. It encourages me to write.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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As i Said I forgot my password I have posted part 1 -8 here:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4326148&PID=120246594&#p120246594

I'll continue updating in the link above and pt 7 and pt8 are updated.
Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here comes the next Part. It is full of Sahil. As I forgot my password I am upddating with new password.

Part 9:

Sanam knew it was her birthday tomorrow. She saw the clock striking 12:00 and was really excited how Aahil will wish her and was pretending to be asleep. Here Aahil could also sense her excitement but was pretending to be asleep and as the clock struck 12:00. He cupped her cheek and said Happy Birthday Sanam'. She just smiled.

He got up and brought a dress and gave it to Sanam.

Aa- Wear this

The dress:

She wears it and come. He stares at her intently and goes near to her and caresses her face and kisses her forehead.

Aa- Now Come. If I am here for another minute I don't know what I'll end up doing.

She blushes at his statement.

Sa- Par Kaha?

Aa- Itne sawaal kyu puchti ho? Just come.

And they go down. He opens the door for her like a gentleman. She sits in. The long drive went in silence as both kept taking glances at each other. Finally the car came to a halt.

She just followed him. They were near a lake. He blindfolded her and took her in. When she opened her eyes she could see a lake and a house infront of her, and she could guess it. It was their dreamhouse. It was built exactly the way they imagined it. She hugged him tight. She pulled apart.

Sa- Thank you Aahil.

He just smiled and caressesd her face. He took her inside. The room was full of ballons- red ballons. And as she opened the door all the balloons went outside through a window. The room still had some balloons which were tied to the wall. He took her in the between of the hall where a vanilla cake was kept. It was her favourite. She saw a red knife kept beside it. And both of them started to cut. It was perfect- white cooured cake- white being his favourite and red knife- red being her favourite. After cutting the cake Aahil started to apply some cake on Sanam's face. He smeared it on her face. She was ooking cute. And then she too started to apply the cake. And the fight over who will apply began. Soon they were running all over the house. They entered a room. Aahil was running behind Sanam and he soon caught her hand and both of them slipped with Sanam on top of Aahil. Junnon started to play and Sanam felt her heart thumping loudly and her breaths got uneven. Don't know what got into her she bent down and removed the cake smeared on Aahil's lips with hers. A balloon under aahil's leg bursted which brought them out of their trance.

Both of them got up and straightened themselves. Aahil started to show the house to her and they spent sometime in the balcony.

Aa- Sanam meine tumhe bohut dukh de hai ab tak par tumne kabhi mera saath nahi chodha. I am sorry. Sanam tries to interrupt but aahil asks her to wait.

Aa- sanam from the first time I met you all I gave you was pain. But see the irony I kept saying that you gave me pain and accused you of something you never did. I was I so blind in my Ammi's fake love that I stopped trusting you. I believed her everytime and accused you everytime. I am so sorry. But from today I'll never let that happen Sanam. Please forgive me. Let's start a new life.

Sa- Aahil I Love you so much for loving me so much

Soon it was about 4: 15. And they went out.

Suddenly it started to rain. She turned around to feel the rain. She loved the rains. She left her arms ree and started to enjoy the rain.

And Aahil took his mobile out and played the song- Mohabbat Barsa Dena Tu.

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai
Mohabbat barsa dena tu, saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

And suddenly she felt two arms tangle their arms in hers. And she took in the manly scent of his as he so softly moved her hair exposing her bare back and started to nuzzle her neck.

Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai


He turned her and hugged her and caressed her backand they swayed to the music.

Kyun ek pal ki bhi judaai sahi jaaye na
Kyun har subah tu meri sanson me samaye na
Aaja na tu mere paas, dunga itna pyar main
Kitni raat guzaari hai, tere intezar mein

Kaise bataaun jazbaat ye mere
Maine khud se bhi zyada tujhe chaaha hai
Sab kuch chhod ke aana tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai

As she turned around and took two steps forward he pulled her back as she felt to his chest, he turned around and bent her down and kissed her waist and then pulled her back.

Bheege bheege tere lab,
mujhko kuch kehte hain
Dil hai khush mera ki khayal ek jaise hain :)
Roko na ab khudko yun sun lo dil ki baat ko
Dhal jaane do shaam aur aa jaane do raat ko
Kitna haseen ye lamha hai
Kismat se maine churaaya hai

Aaj ki raat na jaana tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar main tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai

He traces the outline of her lips which sents shivers down her spine and then kisses her with full of passion. It was their first kiss in rain and they headback to home.

Precap: Asya- sase moments and tanveer-sanam confrontation.

How was the part guys? And please give me your comments.

Part 10:

They all reached the house but sahil came a bit before so they didn't see Sehan coming. Seher asks Rehan to stay for some more time. He stays. She changes her dress and comes. Seher sits on Rehan's lap and rests her head on his chest.

Se- Rehan tumhe pata he for the first time in my life someone's celebrating my birthday. I had cried everyday for someone to come to me, for someone to make me feel loved, cared for. No one came. I cried for food. Nothing came to me. I slept in the streets, in the rains. I started to eat food from garbage. Soon orphanage people came and took me. But still I cried for parents until you gave me that letter. You made me smile again. But then those two adopted my studies stopped. I became a conwoman. I lived for money because no person loved me. But then you came and everything fell in place. For the first time in my life I felt loved, for the first time I fell in love, I meet my family, my parents, I again dreamt of becoming something. Thank you so much for coming into my life. You completed me. A lone tear escapes her eyes.

Re- Par yeh sab kuch bi meri ammi se hi hua na. Agar vo nahi hoti to tumhe in mushkile kabhi nahi jhelne padithi and a tear also escapes his eyes as he says this.

She turned around and cupped his face and wiped his tears.

Se- rehan I know it is difficult for you, but you were never her son for me. You were never tanveer's son but you were my rehan, seher's rehan. Never forget that.

Rehan wiped her tears. She lied on him. And they didn't know when they drifted into sleep.

Sanam changes her dress and comes.

Aa- Thanks Sanam for coming into my life. You made it all perfect. You brought me out of my guilt, made me feel emotions to which I was alien to, showed me the right path, and made me into something which I never was.

Sa- Aahil you were always good. The only thing is you didn't show it. You just pretended to me. And you know I should thank you for loving me. Loving me like no one could ever. Giving me happiness no one could ever give me. I met my sister, parents only because of you. Thank you for coming into my life aahil.

And they drifted into a peaceful sleep in each others arms.

The next morning:

Asya and others wished Sahil and they went to Seher's room to wish her as she didn't come down. They both were sleeping peacefully in each other's arms. Then others entered their room.

Zoya cleared her throat and Rehan woke up by the sound and Seher was still sleeping. He started to get up.

Seher closing her eyes said Kya hai rehan sone dono. Kal raat ko to tekhe se neend bi nahi aayi. Tumhara surprise jo tha aur ab sone nahi dete ho.

Re- Seher tumhare ammi abbu sanam aur aahil bhai he was saying but was interrupted by her.

Se- Kya hua? Ab un sab ke naam kyu bata rahe ho aur ha unhe pata hai mein late uthi hu to no problem aur tumhare bare mein ek roj late jauge to kuch nahi hoga. Ab chup chap sone do. Saying this she cuddles onto him.

Finally Zoya couldn't control and started laughing.

Zo- Kya hai? Koyi teek se sone bhi nahi deta. She says as she frustatedly opens her eyes and then reality dawns upon her but Seher being seher doesn't wake up and gets down from rehan's lap but pretends to sleep on the bed and leaves Rehan for explanation.

Re- woh woh

Aahil now starts laughing seeing rehan's situation and soon everyone starts laughing. After sometime Asya go to Seher and wish her.

As- Sorry beta itne saal mein kabhi hum tum dono ke saath nahi the.

Se- abbu it's ok now don't think about think about it. Soon everyone go down as Rehan and Seher freshen up and come down.

Sanam gets a phone call and she excuses herself. She doesn't see the number and picks it up.

Sa- hello kaun hai?

Person- are zara sabar rako

Sa- Tanveer kyu phone kiya mujhko?

T- Yeh batane keliye key eh tumhara aur tumhari vo behen ki aakri janamdin hoga. Listening to this Sanam faints.

Aahil goes to check her and sees her fainting. He holds her on his lap and tries to wake her up. Listening to his creams everyone come. He sprinkles some water on her and she wakes up.

Aa- Sanam kya hu tumhe?

Sa- Aahil mein teek hu. Chaliye

Aa- What? Teek hu. Come take some rest.

Sa- Its nothing Aahil Come.

But who can listen to the ARI. He takes her in to rest and the others leave.

Aa- By the way why did you faint?

Sa- Kuch nahi Aahil todha sir dardh horaha tha isliye.

He again asks her she says nothing. Though he feels something he leaves it.

Later in the afternoon when everyone her having lunch even Sanam is sitting there and having.

Aahil goes to get his phonw which he left in the kitchen and sees her phone fallen on the floor in kitchen.(while fainting she had dropped it) He picks it up and goes to give it to her when he sees the logs list. And Aahil is back on the Jallad Jin mode.

He goes in the hall calling Sanam loudly.

Aa- Sanam Sanam

Sa- Kya hua Aahil? She gets up and sees her phone in his hand and gets nervous.

He goes to her and holds her by her arms and shakes her.

Aa- Sanam why didn't you tell me? He shows the phone to her.

Sa- Aahil wo

Aa- What wo wo kar rahi ho? Speak up.

As- Aahil what happened?

Aa- I guess the question will be better answered by Sanam. Kyu Sanam?

Sa- Aahil I thought you would be tensed so I jus. She fumbles with words.

Aa- So you thought you can just solve everything. You don't solve problems instead invite them. You know what you never tell things to me and go to solve them on your own and get stuck up. Ever do you tell anything to me? You think I am useless or you don't trust me?

And this got Sanam angry.

Sa- Bas Aahil. Had hai. Ha meine nahi kaha but pata hai kya aapse baat karna hai waste hai and uparse you don't trust me. You know very well I trust you right. But kya kare Jallad Jin ko kuch nahi dikhyi deti. Am I right Mr. Jallad Jin?

Aahil pulls her towards him holding her waist.

Aa- Unbelievable. I don't trust you? You ask me this. Its useless to even speak with you Miss. Dhabevali.

He leaves her and turns around. In frustration he pushes the glass of water beside him. He moves to his room without having the food.

Sanam stares at him in shock. She goes to clean the glass pieces fallen on the floor. Later, even she moves without having food but goes to take food for her Jallad Jin. And that's when everyone ask her what happened and she explains to them.

In the room:

Sa- Aahil I am sorry. Khana kaye.

Aahil- No Sanam I am sorry I shouldn't have overreacted. Khan pakdke sorry. He hold his ears and says cutely sorry to her.

While she follows the same and is about to feed him when,

Aa- tumne kaya

She doesn't say anything, he understands and feeds her. Later both of them feed each other.

In the dining room:

Zo- Seriously, I never thought Aahil could be this angry. He looks so cool na.

Re- Yeh to kuch bi nahi hai. Agar apne Aahil bhai aur Sanam ke first encounters dekha hoga to you wouldn't believe these two are the same Aahil and Sanam. ( In the flashback they don't stress their encounters they just say they didn't like each other.)

As- Really?

Se- Ya dad. Sanam ne to Aahil ko pehle pehle baar hi thapad diti.

Zo- What? And Aahil was quiet?

Re- Well, that cannot happen. Aahil bhai ne Sanam ka dhaba jhala diya aur badle mein Sanam ne aahil bhai ke gadi ko jaladiya

Then lateef popped up.

La- Then Sanam ne naukri dhundthi yaha aagayi kyuki use nahi pata tha ki yeh Aahil baba ka ghar tha. Aur hamesha use use chup chup ke jathi thi phir Aahil baba ne ek din sanam ko dekhliya aur phirse unka jagda hogaya.Allah kasam Aahil baba ko pehli baar kisne uthna sunaya.

And they explain everything, how they got married, Aahil's jealousy and how they finally fell in love.

As- Sanam had to face so much.

Zo- Oh! Mr. Overprotective Khan stop it. He loves Sanam so much.

As- Ha par aisa barthav.

Zo- Allah Miyan, what's wrong with you Mr. Khan? And I guess you were no less Mr. Rude and Arrogant Khan.

As- What I was Rude?

Zo- It's like Zoya hates pizza. And their banter continued.

Meanwhile Seher's mind was on work. Later, when everyone went to rest Rehan went to work. And the next thing Seher did was take a knife and go to her. Tanu was sleeping. Seher went and placed the knife on her neck and that made Tanveer consicus and as she opened her eyes she saw a knife on her neck and was hell scared.

Se- Kisiko marna tujhe bohut aasan kam heina tujhe ab tu maregi. Tanveer tried to interrupt but Seher pressed the knife close to her neck.

Se- Chup Bilkul Chup. Agar tumhare gale se itna bi awaaz nikla to phir tujhe ye gala nahi bacha hoga aur waise bi kuch der mein tum upar jane wali ho. So don't worry. Abhi kuch nahi karungi. She removes the knife and as tanveer tries to relax she again places it on her.

Se- 24 ghante. 24 ghante mein tum is duniya ko humesha keliye chodke chali jaogi aur kisiko yeh tak nahi pata hoga ki meine yeh kiya hai. Sab tumhare jaane ke khushi mein honge. Meine kaha tha koyi bhi chaal chalne se pehle 1000 bar sochlo par tumne nahi kiya to get ready cause your countdown starts. 1, 2, 3, 4 she says. Ginti shuru karlena.

She leaves where as Tanveer is horrified. She knew Seher will do anything and started to become conscious.

While Zoya saw all these she was tensed about seher. She went to seher later in her room to speak.

Zo- Seher yeh kyat ha tanveer ke sath. Kya 24 ghante? Mujhe ghabraht horahi hai.

Se- Ammi aap chinta mat lene. Us billi ki to aaj vaat lag jayegi. She explains the plan to Zoya and both hi-fi each other.

***

Precap- Billi's end, Seher's past out

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