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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs


Ok but please try that it is longer.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaa4ever221

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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting start with a twisting one!
Sheireen almost dislike Zoya!
and Asad! did he forget everything about their nikah or what? 😲
continue soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

interesting start with a twisting one!

Sheireen almost dislike Zoya!
and Asad! did he forget everything about their nikah or what? 😲
continue soon!!


Thanks!!!

haha yes she does!!

noo he remembers but someething in America has him bounded

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 7

It was still raining outside, Zoya was outside and not in her room anymore she was leaning against door looking at the rain smiling, Dilshad came in the room and sat down and turned on the tv

Dilshad: "Zoya"

Zoya: "Ji"

Dilshad: "There was this drama that was suppose to come on."

She changed the channel and saw that the drama was coming on

Dilshad: "Oh its coming on, I missed last week episode."

Zoya came and sat next to her

Dilshad: "Beta can you tell Najma to make me tea."

Zoya: "Ji, Ill will make it for you."

Dilshad: "Just tell Najma to make it, she is always in her room resting, and never does anything."

Zoya laughed

Zoya: "Nahi, Tiammi don't worry ill make it and with tea I will also make some pokara(Pakodi)"

Dilshad: "array wah you stole my words right out of my mouth."

Zoya went to the kitchen to make her some pokaras and tea, Najma had shown up in the kitchen and was helping Zoya.

Najma: "Zoya, this rain looks so much to paly in."

Zoya: "Haan"

Najma: "Okay I am done making the tea, tell me how much time do you have with the pakoras."

Zoya: "Almost done."

Najma put the tea tray on the dining table and went near stove where zoya was standing frying, she put her hands in the tray of the pakoras and Zoya hit her hands

Najma: "Ouch I just wanted to check the salt."

Zoya: "Cant you just wait."

Najma was juggling the pakora in her hands to cool it down and she finally ate it.

Zoya: "How are they made."

Najma: "First class."

Najma sat on the counter still eating

Najma: "Okay listen, why isn't your whatsapp working?"

Zoya: "It is"

Najma: "I sent you joke, you didn't reply."

Zoya: "What should I reply on a joke."

Najma: "LOL"

Zoya: "Pagal ho, why would I laugh at your stupid joke."

Najma: " your sense of humor is really bad that you didn't even find my joke funny huh."

Zoya: "Oh hello, my sense of humor is good, if it wasn't good toh I wouldn't marry you cartoon faced brother."

Najma: "My brother looks like a cartoon to you."

Zoya: "Yes, from the beginning."

Najma: "Come, once you come as my babhi(officially), then im going to show you how sister in laws can be, I will be more bad then those TV dramas sister in laws if im not then my name wont be Najma Khan"

Zoya: "oh ho dhamki."

Najma: "Ji nahi, haha."

Zoya: "Pagal."

Zoya: "If you do these kind of drama then Tiammi doesn't have to sit in front of the television that often, she can watch you."

Najma: "Hmmm should we go now."

Zoya: "yes lets go."

Zoya and Najma grabbed the trays and went to Dilshad

Najma: "Here you go ammi."

Zoya put the tea tray on the table and served the tea, They were enjoying the time watching tv and eating

Shireen: "Dilshad, Zoya." She screamed from outside

Dilshad looked at Najma and Zoya

Dilshad: "Shireen?"

Zoya got up to check at the door, Shireen came in and was wet from the rain, she took off her shawl and gave it to Zoya

Dilshad: "Where are you coming from in this rain, Najma go and get a towel for your phuphi."

Najma: Yes ammi."

Najma went

Dilshad: "come sit."

They sat down

Shireen: "I went to the doctors, it wasn't raining then, it just started suddenly, I was out so decided I should come by your house."

Najma came and gave her the towel

Shireen: Ayaan wasn't home either and Nighat went out too see her friends"

Dilshad: "Its good you came here."

Shireen: "haan, I thought I will meet everyone and I will see my two daughter faces, and I will watch my drama too, did it start yet?"

Zoya and Najma smiled at her

Najma: "Phuphi it ended a while ago."

Shireen: "What? it already ended, I don't why the taxi driver took the long route, I told him just go straight but he didn't listen to me, he told me he is taking a shortcut, look at this shortcut, and he took more money from me and I got wet from this rain and he made miss my drama."

Zoya and Najma were giggling

Dilshad: "okay forget it, hear have some tea and Najma and Zoya made some pakoras."

Shireen: "Okay."

Shireen ate the pokara and it burnt her mouth

Shireen: "Its too hot."

Shireen talked about the drama with Dilshad, Zoya and Najma were getting bored of them talking.

Najma: "Ammi were are going to our rooms, if you need anything please call us."

Shireen: "Yes go beta."

Najma and Zoya left

Shireen: "love the pokoras, besan acha hai, where did you get it."

Dilshad: "from where you get your stuff."

Shireen: "Oh achaa, I went there and the guy gave me a really bad bag of besan, and the other day I made pakora and they came out really bad, talking about pakora I remember how Anwar liked them, When ever I think about him my heart cries, he left this world at a young age."

Dilshad: "Shireen don't worry, No one can interfere in Allah's work."

Shireen: "How cant I worry, it feels like my heart closes when I think about him."

Shireen sighed

Shireen: "Okay forget it, Did Asad call? Is he ever going to come."

Dilshad: "Yes I talked to him, he is going to come."

Shireen: "Okay, wherever he is, may Allah always protect him, Acha Dilshad I should go now."

Dilshad: "where are you going in this rain, When Rashid come I will send you with the driver."

Shireen: "Okay fine if you say so."

Shireen: "Give me more pokara"

Dilshad gave her the whole tray

Shireen: "you also eat, they are really good."

It was evening, Rashid had come home from office, he was in his room taking off his shoes, Dilshad came in with a glass of water

Dilshad: "Water"

Rashid: "Put it on the table."

Dilshad put the glass of water on the side table and sat down next to him

Dilshad: "Asad called"

Rashid: "What is he saying now"

Dilshad: "Listen to me, you always."

Rashid: "Okay speak, you always speak in favor for him, what does he want."

Dilshad: "He says he wants time, I don't know when ever I talk to him about shaadi he gets upset, he said he is going to talk to you."

Rashid: "What is he going to say to me now, he has already told you everything."

Dilshad: "Im not hiding anything from you Rashid, whatever he said I am telling you."

Rashid: "Look Dilshad I am his father, next time he calls just tell him to come back home and get married, or I will go to America and make him come back, it is not that that far for me to go."

Dilshad: "He said he is going to talk to you, so talk to him and don't drag me into this."

Dilshad got up from the bed and grabbed his briefcase and put it in the closet

Rashid: "Ill talk to him, what does he think of himself."

Next morning

Najma was in her room, she was getting her purse and Zoya came in

Zoya: "Najma, we are already late, come lets go."

Najma: "yes just two minutes, you are always in a hurry."

Zoya: "Im always in a hurry? You make me wait to much"

Najma: "Okay lets go."

Dilshad was cutting some vegetables in the living room

Dilshad: "Kulsoom" (maids name)

Kulsoom came and stood in front of Dilshad

Dilshad: "Go wash these vegetable in the sink."

Zoya and Najma saw Dilshad

Najma: "Ammi we are going shopping we will back soon, allah hafiz."

Dilshad: "Okay come home soon, allah hafiz."

Zoya and Najma were at the jewelry store, Zoya was looking at the bracelets and smiling, Najma was on the other end looking at necklaces, Zoya came towards Najma and grabbed her hands and took her out of the store

Zoya: "Okay, enough looking, we have to go home now, tiammi will get mad, it is already late."

Najma: "Zoya one minute please, let me see."

Zoya: "No, tiammi is waiting for us."

Najma: "come on, can we at least eat something, the we will go home, I am hungry."

Zoya: "you didn't leave any time for us to eat, how are we suppose to, and tiammi is waiting."

Najma: "No we are going to eat and that's final."

Zoya: "Okay fine."

Zoya and Najma were sitting in the food court eating a gyro

Najma: "Mhhh this is good."

Zoya: "haan, its really good"

Najma: "Your right it's getting late, we are going to get scolded by ammi."

Zoya: "Haan and if abbu come home before us we will get in more trouble."

Najma: "Think positive."

Zoya: "okay fine, less talking finish eating so we can home already."

Najma and Zoya were on the streets looking for taxi, a white car passed them, it backed up and stopped in front of Zoya and Najma, Ayaan got off the car

Ayaan: "What are you guys doing."

Najma: "We are going home"

Ayaan: "I can drop you guys off."

Zoya: "No, no its fine, we will go."

Ayaan: "Not a problem, by dropping you guys off I will also meet mamo and mami"

Najma: "Zoya lets go"

Najma grabbed Zoya arm and took her to the car, she sat in the passenger seat and Najma sat in the back and they headed off

Zoya: "Thanks"

Ayaan: "You welcome, where were you guys."

Najma: "Nothing just went for shopping."

Ayaan: "Oh, for wedding preparations?"

Zoya: "No, just personal shopping."

Ayaan: "If you guys don't want to tell, I wont ask"

Najma: "btw why are you here."

Ayaan: "This is my way for home, I pass this place everyday"

Ayaan looked at Zoya and saw her worried

Ayaan: "Zoya why are you looking worried."

Zoya: "No I am not worried, just thinking that tiammi is probably worried about us, can you drive a little faster."

Ayaan: "Oh why are you worrying, I will talk to mami you don't worry."

Zoya: "Okay"

Ayaan was looking at Zoya from the corner of his eyes, Zoya was looking outside, she spotted a car and inside the car was nighat and a guy.

Zoya: "Did you see."

Ayaan: "yes im looking, uhhh I mean im looking at the road."

Ayaan: "What do mean, did I look at what."

Zoya: "Najma did you look."

Najma: "What"

Zoya: "Nighat ko."

Najma/Ayaan: "Nighat"

Ayaan: "Where is nighat."

Zoya: "She was in the car that just passed by couple of seconds ago."

Ayaan: "Nighat wouldn't be here, I think you saw someone else."

Najma: "Zoya I think you saw someone else."

Zoya: "No, I saw her, the car was close to our I saw it clearly it was nighat."

Ayaan looked at her confused

Dilshad was walking back and forth waiting for the girls to come home, Ayaans car pulled up in the driveway and they got off, Najma went inside and Zoya was about to when Ayaan stopped her

Ayaan: "Zoya"

Zoya: "Yes"

Ayaan: "Are you sure you saw nighat in the car?"

Zoya nodded her head

Zoya: "yes im pretty sure."

Ayaan: "Okay"

Najma walked in and saw dilshad

Dilshad: "Do you know what time it is, you guys took to long."

Najma: "woh ammi, ammi"

Dilshad: "What ammi ammi?"

Dilshad: "You know how there is so much going around on the streets, I was worried."

Ayaan walked in with Zoya

Ayaan: "Assalam walaikum mami, please don't scold these two, actually I was passing the shopping center and offered them a ride back home, I had some work so we got home late"

Dilshad: "You were with them so I wouldn't be worried, but I didn't know you were with them, they could have at least called me."

Ayaan: "Yes, they said they were going to call you but I said not to too. You will get more worried."

Dilshad: "Its fine, you sit, I will go make tea."

Zoya: "No, tiammi I will make the tea."

Dilshad: "No its fine you guys are tired, ill make it"

Dilshad left

Najma sighed in relief

Najma: "Thank you Ayaan, you saved us today, if you weren't here we would have been scolded badly."

Najma: "Okay Zoya, im going in my room, we will meet later."

Najma left, Zoya looked over to Ayaan

Zoya: "Thank you very much, you took all the blame on you."

Ayaan: "You don't have to say thank you on this little things."

Zoya: "Okay, please I will be back"

Zoya left and Ayaan set down, after tea Ayaan went home, he entered the front door

Ayaan: "Ammi

Shireen came to him

Shireen: " you here beta."

Ayaan: "Where is nighat."

Shireen: "Why what happened."

Ayaan: "Why don't you ask her?"

Shireen: "Why are you angry? Sit, she is in her room I will call her."

Shireen: "Nighat, nighat."

Nighat: "Ji ammi, coming."

Nighat came down from the stairs

Shireen: "There she is"

Nighat came towards them

Shireen: "What is it, now tell us."

Nighat: "Ji ammi"

Nighat looked towards her brother

Nighat: "When did you come bhai, do you want some water."

She was about to leave

Shireen: "Wait, where did you go today."

Nighat turned back

Nighat: "Where would I go, I was upstairs in my room."

Shireen looked at Ayaan

Nighat: "Bhai what is wrong with you."

Ayaan: "Where were you."

Nighat: "I said I was in my room, why are you getting upset."

Ayaan: "I know you were in your room right now, but where were you before."

Nighat started thinking

Nighat: "Oh yes, before I was at my friends house, I told ammi before going."

Shireen: "oh yes, I totally forgot, she did tell me."

Ayaan clenched his teeth

Ayaan: "Did you go see your friend or someone else."

Nighat: "Bhai, what are you saying."

Nighat turned towards her ammi

Nighat: "Ammi look"

Ayaan: "Ammi, Zoya saw her today in a car with a guy, ask her who it was."

Nighat: "You believe in Zoya, but not me."

Ayaan screamed

Ayaan: "Yes, because you are lying, why would Zoya lie, now tell me was it you in the car."

Shireen: "One minute, where did Zoya come in between this, an where did you meet her."

Ayaan: "Ammi I was passing the market and I saw Zoya and Najma so I took them home and that is when Zoya saw her in the car."

Nighat: "you will still believe her right, okay fine yes I was in a car and the guy was driving."

Ayaan: "See ammi, what did I say."

Shireen: "Okay, I don't understand anything, be quite both of you."

Nighat: "Ammi he was my friend brother, and ask ayaan, that zoya saw the guy but didn't see my friend in the back seat."

Nighat: "I was getting late so my friend said that she will drop me off."

Ayaan: "You couldn't tell me that in the beginning."

Ayaan: "You know ammi, she is my sister so I would be upset seeing her in the car with a guy, you know how boys are these days, I just got angry."

Nighat: "You should have listen to me."

Shireen: "he is you brother, if he is not going to worry for you, who else would, and Zoya should say stuff that she think its true and not blame my innocent child."

Ayaan: "She said what she saw ammi, you shouldn't say anything bad about her."

Shireen: But she should have think before she spoke."

Ayaan: "ammi your saying the same thing again."

NIghat: "I don't know why you always in favor of Zoya, you trust her more than us, you know she is already married."

Shireen left and nighat went back to her room leaving Ayaan standing.

Zoya was in her room silently crying and wiping her tears, and talking on the phone

Zoya: "Ji, yes I understand, allah hafiz."

She put the phone down and sighed, Najma came behind her

Najma: "Whose phone was it."

Zoya: "Shireen phupho."

Najma rolled her eyes

Najma: "what was she saying."

Zoya: "She was saying that I created a misunderstanding between brothers and sister."

Najma sat on the bed in front of her

Najma: "I knew, she wont say anything to her daughter and will the put the blame on you."

Najma: "Why are you crying."

Zoya: "Phupho says, these are the reasons that Asad doesn't want to come back home."

Najma: "What, im going to talk to phuphi, why she talking about you and bhaijaan"

Zoya: "No you are not going to talk to her, you will create more problems"

Najma: "No this is wrong, she should look at her daughter"

Zoya: "Stop it, ill apologize to nighat."

Najma: "Apologize and that to, to nighat? What are you going to say sorry for, you didn't do anything wrong."

Zoya: "I shouldn't have said that, I don't know it just slipped out of my mouth"

Najma: "Stop it Zoya, stop blaming yourself for this"

Zoya: "I don't know why phupho is against me since childhood days, what did I ever do to her."

Najma: "Zoya, you know why she doesn't like you, she wanted Asad to marry nighat and you came in between."

Zoya: "I didn't come in between, everyone decided on this, what is my fault in this."

Najma: "Just leave it, don't pay any attention to what she says."

Zoya wiped her tears

Najma: "Stop crying or im going to talk to phupho."

Zoya: "No"

Najma: "Then stop crying."

Zoya smiled looking at her and Najma smiled back

It was morning in America, Asad called his mom

Asad: " Asalam walaikum ammi, how are you."

Dilshad: "Yes beta, I am fine, why didn't you call, your dad was upset and was waiting for you to call, you know he is worried for you about the wedding."

Asad: "Ammi why do guys always talk about my wedding? Ammi actually I wanted to tell you something."

Asad: "Ammi, main abhi shaadi."

Dilshad: "Yes abhi, when you come then we will get you married."

Asad: "no ammi, I want to say something else"

Dilshad got worried

Asad: "I want to say."

Asad was with his friend vikky

Vikky: "say it already"

Asad: "ammi, I have."

Dilshad: "What beta, just say it."

Asad: "Ammi, I just remembered something, ill talk to you later, Bye."

Dilshad closed the phone confused

Dilshad: "bye? What does this boy want."

Asad massaged his forehead

Vikky: "Why didn't you tell?"

Asad: "I will tell soon"

Zoya was in her room laying down on the bed, looking a the ceiling and smiling, she turned over and took the pillow in her arm and squeezed and her mind drifted to old days

Flashback: after nikkah

Zoya was sitting on the bench outside; Asad saw her sitting and went towards her

Asad: "I was looking everywhere for you, and you here sitting."

Zoya: "Are you really going to America."

Asad: "Haan baba, its only for 6 years, ill come back"

Zoya: "Your not going to forget your best friend, are you?"

Asad: "What nonsense are you talking, how can I forget you."

Asad: "We are best friends forever, can we go now."

Zoya: "promise me."

Asad: "Promise I wont forget you, now lets go."

Zoya: "Okay, lets go."

Zoya got up from the bench and went inside with Asad

Rashid was in his room buttoning his cuffs

Rashid: "Thank God, Asad's studies are all set now"

Dilshad came with water and sat next to him

Dilshad: "Is it necessary to send him so far for studies, can't he study here."

Rashid: "The times are changing, everyone wants to go study abroad."

Dilshad: "I only have one son, and your sending him off"

Rashid: "I also have one son, but sometimes parents have to sacrifice for their kids."

Zoya was walking on the streets in her school uniform and backpack, Asad came running behind her wearing a polo shirt and kaki pants

Asad: "Zoya"

Zoya: "What are you doing here?"

Asad put his hands on his knees and catch up on his breath

Asad: "I thought you will be coming home alone so thought to join you."

Zoya: "I should start getting use to walking alone to home now."

Asad: "It will happen, ill be back in 6 years."

Zoya: "I know, but walking with you it has become a habit."

Asad: "Okay forget this, how was your day."

Zoya: "not bad, was getting ready for the exams so the time goes faster, okay tell me is your tickets confirm for America."

Asad: "yes, it is."

Zoya: "Acually don't tell, when the time come I will know."

Zoya walked ahead leaving Asad behind

Woooh! Here you go guys! Hope you guys liked it and hope it was long enough! Please press the like button and will be looking forward to your comments as well!

Next Update: 55+

Precap: Najma and Zoya gifting Asad, Asad leaving for America, nighat wedding preps ;)

PS: didn't proof read at all, so please excuse my grammer and all!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry sweetheart
I was being silent bin this days
!
But u r updates were really amazing
So this one is too
Loved 5th update nd Asya always rocks
!
Loved the update nd love you so much
Again sorry yaar !! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting Update
l❤️ved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Asad should really tell Dilshad that he loves someone
I feel like you are dragging that a bit
But its fine

Edited by KeyaHira2 - 10 years ago

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