Doosri biwi - a sahil os

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Doosri biwi - a sahil os

This os is based on 29th jan 2015 after ahil scolding sanam for being adamant to talk to him & sanam 2 is taunting her!

Sanam was too shocked. Last day she saw her ahil in the arms of another women & now his looks are giving her the feeling that she is no more needed in his life. On top of that this new sanam is going on taunting her.
New sanam: you are still standing here? Didn't ahil ji make it clear to you that you that he is no more interested in you? I am his wife in all means now. You are just a servant in this house. Go get coffee for me.
That's it sanam lost her patience. First all this lady very we'll knows that both she & ahil has been used & cheated. She very we'll know her ( sanam) situation. Even after knowing that ahil loves only her why is this lady taking advantage of there helpless situation? There is a limit that she can bare. Now this lady has crossed it.
New sanam: where are u lost? Didn't u hear what I said? Go get coffee for u me.
Sanam: ji nahi
New sanam: what? Ek naukarani ki itni himmat?
Sanam: first of all I am not a servant. I am ahil rasa Ibrahim's legally wedded wife & 50% owner of Ibrahim properties. In that way that makes me choti begum of Bhopal. EK nawab ki begum! Ahil may be angry with me. But he can never hate me. May be now at present we are not together but our hearts & soul will always remain connected. Soon ahil will come to know truth & my innocence. There is no need to go over board thinking that you slept with for a night. He will never betray me. I have trust in him & our love.
New sanam: after seeing it from your own eyes you are saying this? You are impossible.
Sanam: sometimes truth is beyond from our eyes. People like you & tanveer how manipulate you guys are I very well know. Even if it's true you need not be in seventh heaven as ahil as seen many women in his life. You are one among them.
New sanam: I am his wife.
Sanam: doosri biwi! I mean second wife. Or more appropriately a nakli wife as your marriage with ahil is not valid. You are not sanam Ahmed khan d/o asad Ahmed khan & moreover ahil was unaware it was not been during nikkah. So in all ways you are not his wife. At the moment ahil is under tanveer's influence & giving you a position of his wife. Soon very soon he will realise truth & throw you out of his life. Understood?
New sanam was too shocked to react seeing sanam like this.
Sanam: if you want coffee go & get it yourself. Next time think once more to use that tone to me. Samchi?
Sanam left to her room leaving an astonished & scared new sanam in the hall.!

Phew! That's it! I was not planning to write this. I have an entrance next weak & wanted to take break. So I wrote this.
Note: it's very disappointing to see sanam obeying like a servant to this nakli sanam. Many people are angry at seher for scolding new sanam. IMO it was much needed. I agree it would have been more appropriate if it was sanam. This new sanam was showing off too much & it was needed for her to see reality. She was just one another women in ahil's life. His heart & soul always belonged to sanam. This is what seher said & it's completely true. IMO seher didn't insult neither ahil nor sanam. She just showed new sanam the reality which was very very essential. I was angry on sanam for obeying new sanam. Initially we have seen a different sanam in Punjab who stands for her rights. It started changing once she entered IM & is worsened now a days. Many people said after seeing the promo that may be sanam wants to clear it with ahil & that's why she was silent yesterday. After seeing the promo I didn't feel that way. It has nothing to do with new sanam. Sanam would have made it clear to new sanam that she is not a servant but ahil's first wife or more specifically ahil's only wife. This new sanam was not completely positive from first. She knew she was marrying a man by taking some other women's name. Only good thing she did was saving the twins that may be due to humanity.
I will stop my buck buck. I will be continuing my stories from next week. I have recently got married & now I have a pg entrance exam at this weekend. So I have kept my on going stories on hold. From next week I will continue. This is my first ever story based on sahil. I hope you liked it!



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh this is such a treat my darling! Love that we at least get to read of Sanam standing up to this doosri biwi!


All the best for your entrance!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow that was just awesome
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after long time...
when will you continue your asya stories...
waiting ... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How I wish Sanam too reacted..

Usually I dont read stories related to season2..but seeing your pm, I read it..

Well written

And Uma, thanks for pm..

Hope you are doing good..

And all the best for your entrance exam
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello di
Congrats for your marriage

And all the best for your entrance!

Nice os

Waiting for you to continue all your stories

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ahhan! commenting in your work after a long time!!

The OS was just awesome!! loved how Sanam stood up for her right and showing new sanam her real place!😆 nayi Sanam bohot uchall rahi thi na!! glad that old sanam showed her the reality!

nywayz the OS was beautiful! beautifully penned!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey it's nice! Sanam should have behaved like this!
Cv's always do this, they should lead strong but soon they start to obey and respect the person whom they know doesn't deserved!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome dear! 👏

I wish Sanam stands up for herself like this in the show too. Where is the old Sanam who had a lot of self respect and who wouldn't let anyone just walk over her? God! Why are the CVs hell bend on ruining all the characters?

This OS was really a relief from all yhe crap that the CVs are showing again and again.

Thank you so much for the pm. Waiting for your other stories!

All the best for your exam!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Band baja di new Sanam ki! 😆
Wow wonderfull. If only it was on the show!!
Nice os. Thanks for pm...

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