AsYa SS: ROTB Part 4 Updated and NOTE 2/5 PG.16 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Zoya told her friends what she wants to do. Najma & humeira was sad after getting know abt asad .& tanveer marriage as business deal. Wow najma made a action plan to unite asad & zoya. Waiting for asad pov as well to know why he agreed. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm


Thanks!!!

yes but she is heart broken!

haha yes they will take revenge on tanveer

will do soon!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Nice update

Waiting to read Asad's POV too

I am eagerly waiting for the next update

Thanks for pm



Thanks!!

Will do soon!😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

Nice update...

Razia and tanveer are evil..
Najma has lost her mind...haahaa..
Well written...


Thanks!

yes they are

hahah

thanks!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

hw did asad land up with the witches...
i still cudnt get the deal there... it was razia who was going all bankrupt n kangaal ... thn y did asad agree fr the alliance...
plz reveal.soon


hahah

Razia wants money but she cant marry and now she is getting her daughter married so she can get more money

you will found out soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
So raizda and tanveer r money hungry bitches
So razia couldn't find a next bank machine so she put her daughter out to grab one
And Asad was the target and he was hooked and caught
He was always gullible
Poor poor zoya she is too good at heart
She can't forget Asad he was the one
I hate tanveer 😡
Can I join Najma and humeria swat team
And annilate tanveer and her mother
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

good one...
waiting for more


Thanks!!!

will update soon!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

So raizda and tanveer r money hungry bitches

So razia couldn't find a next bank machine so she put her daughter out to grab one
And Asad was the target and he was hooked and caught
He was always gullible
Poor poor zoya she is too good at heart
She can't forget Asad he was the one
I hate tanveer 😡
Can I join Najma and humeria swat team
And annilate tanveer and her mother
Continue soon




Thanks!!!

yes she is rich but wants more money

she cant marry so she is getting her daughter married

yeah he is, and also he has a reason to get married to tanveer (well he thinks)

i know poor her sont worry she will get her prince at the end

haha yes you can join, how about i put your name out there when they start to take revenge on tanveer hahahaa 😆

Will do 😊
Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 4

Location: Humeria House


They were sitting on the bed watching a romantic movie and eating popcorn and drinking juice.

Humeria: "How could Asad and Zoya mucked this up. They were perfect for each other."

Najma grabbed her glass of juice and drank it

Najma: "You never met him."

Humeria: I'm highly intuitive, they were meant for each other, and now Asad is going to marry Tanveer, and Zoya's gonna have her heart broken forever."

Humeria took the remote in her hands and shut off the tv, she was fed up with romance right now

Humeria: "Three thousand years of watching romantic comedies, and it's just one big stinking lie, I mean the couple just stumbles around for two hours and then miraculously, five minutes before the credit roll, they realize they are meant to be together?"

She stands on the bed and goes to the other side and sits in front of Najma.

Humeria: "That is not how life works my friend."

She grabs the juice bottle but I was empty, she started to go the kitchen and Najma followed her

Humeria: "Aciton movie have it right."

She grabbed the juice bottle but it was empty so she walked towards kitchen with Najma coming behind her

Humeria: "Actions movies have it right."

Najma: "You hate action movies."

They started walking downstairs

Humeria: "I hate them because they are right."

Humeria: "In actions movies some psycho path takes 25 sweet people hostage and he is going to kill them all, and then Bruce Willis come in."

Najma: "Or Channing Tatum"

Humeria:"Also good, he puts together an elite SWAT team of Navy seals, and they go behind enemy lines, and they do what has to be done, they wipe out the henchmen, the psychopath dies a spectacular death, and the sweet people go free."

They reached the kitchen Humeria was getting the juice out fridge

Humeria: "That's what you need to make love work, a ruthless SWAT team with guns."

Najma wasn't really interested in her talking about this so she changed the topic

Najma: "Haider didn't call you yet?"

Humeria: "No, he went to LA for pilot season with his scene partner that he swears he is not sleeping with."

Najma: "You should not date actors."

Humeria: "Who else should I meet.

Najma: "Oh you met that really cute guy today, Ayaan."

Najma: "He liked you, the way he was looking at you and talking."

Humeria: "No, he did not like me."

A minute later she spoke

Humeria: "Oh okay yeah he did like me but he is a trap, there is like 300 of them in every hometown, Nice regular guy, You go on one date and all of a sudden you wake up 10 years later with six kids, a fat ass, and ugly pink sweatpants."

Najma: "Just admit it you like him, you really really like him don't you."

She stammered,

Humeria: " I do not."

Najma: "What are you going to do when he calls."

Humeria: "He is not going to call because nice guys don't call me, just selfish actors who screw their scene partner, now what are we going to do about Zoya?."

Najma: "I say we go full bore SWAT team, and break up Tanveer and Asad."

Humeria looked at her stunned

Humeria: "Are you crazy"

Najma: " No I am serious, Right? That's what Will Smith or Mat Damon or any of those hot action guys would have done."

Humeria looked at her as she continue telling her what she was thinking

Najma: "We sneak into the compound, we bust stuff the hell up."

Humeria: "What are we gonna do, disguise ourselves as German officers?"

Najma with a straight face

Najma: "Exactly"

Humeria laughs

Humeria: "Okay what the hell are you talking about."

Najma: "Im saying we wear the uniform of the enemy, bridesmaids."

Humeria: "She already has her bridesmaids."

Najma air quoted

Najma: "okay, then two of them have a little accident."

Humeria was thinking

Najma: "If anyone deserve to be knocked down a couple of pegs, its Tanveer, Zoya had one thing in her life that she loved and Tanveer took it from her, Are you really going to let her get away with that."

Humeria: "Do you really think we could take down Tanveer? And stop this wedding?"

Najma: "we can do anything, Why? Because we are sophisticated babes from New york, Or as Ms. Razia would put it "You guys are just a little too thinky."" She was imitating Razia

Humeria: "All right, I am starting to like this."

Humeria gave a glass of juice to Najma

Humeria: "Tanveer is going down."

They both raised their glass

Najma: "yes"

Humeria: "The Thinky girls are back"

Najma: "Yes"

Humeria: "To love"

Najma: "To Zoya"

Humeria: "To the defeat of the Third Reich."

They both laughed and clinked their glass together.

Location: Yogurtland(Next day)

The two Sanams were eating the yogurt at Yogurtland, Najma and Humeria with them too.

Humeria: "Mmh. Girls you are so right, This is the best frozen yogurt in all of lambert."

Sanam: "Told you."

Sanaam: "Arent you glad you called us."

Najma looked at her and smirked

Najma: "So glad"

The four girls sat down

Humeria: "We owe you Sanams, we really owe them Najma."

Najma: "Yeah but what can we give them that they don't have?"

Humeria sighs

Humeria: "hmm well, how is it going up at the house, you guys getting along with Razia"

The two Sanams look at each other

Sanam and Sanaam: "Not to bad, it's alright."

Najma: " Sanams come on now, we are yogurt pals now, share"

Sanam put her yogurt cup down on the table

Sanam: "We can't do anything right, she is always on our case, and she treats us like us we're big dopes, Can you believe that?"

Humeria looked at Najma

Humeria: "This is how we can help them."

Najma: "You mean our secret Razia tip? Your right yeah, She always liked us"

Sanam: "Really?"

Humeria: "Look girls, you have understand, I mean Razia is under a lot of pressure wedding and everything."

The both of the Sanams said: "Uh huh."

Humeria: "Is she drinking?"

Sanam: "Yes constantly."

Humeria: "That what happens."

Najma: "Yeah, here is the trick, when she is drinking tell her to slow down."

Sanaam: "Like in front of everyone."

Najma: "That is the only way it works."

Humeria: "What we used to do is count her drinks and tell her how many drink has drank."

Najma: "Hmmm"

Humeria: "She always thanks us in the morning."

Sanam: "we could do that"

Sanaam: "Yeah we could."

Najma smiled them

Najma: "Do it you will be golden."

Humeria: "How is the frozen yogurt."

Sanam: "Its really cold."

The two sanams laugh

Sanam: "if I eat too fast my brain freezes."

Najma: "How can you tell?"

They all start to eat fast, The two Sanams left and Najma and Humeria walked outside to their car.

Humeria: "The trap is set."

Najma: "Their poor frozen brains never stood a chance."

Hello guys! Hope you guys like this update! Hope you guys like it! Please press the like button and do comment, will be looking forward

I know no AsYa but this story just involves Humeria and Najma and Zoya taking revenge on Tanveer!

I guess i can put it like flashbacks of them when they were together

even though that wasn't in the story i can make them up haha😊

Next Update: 25+

Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I didn't send alot PM out for this story! so sorry if you didn't get one! I seriously need to fix up my list😊

P.S- I haven't started writing Vivah yet! So that wont be updated that till next week sorry for you keeping you guys waiting

A/N: Im thinking of discontinuing this story actually not feeling this story at all! or ill put on hiatus and continue it when i do feel like which can be months
Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
girls are on their mission

plan is in action noww

bring it on girls

missed asya in the update

I know the story demands them to be separateed... But want asya from past n present

pls try to incorporate it in story

but it was chotu sa update... I want llong one

update soon

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