SeHan SS : Broken hope... *Epilogue on page 54* (completed) - Page 34

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

emotional part

loved it
waiting for the next part
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thanks sen
am glad you liked it
next part will be up in sometime
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

Awesome update love it ❤️
Rehan thought seher is in love with amanat 😲
But love sehan scenes so beautiful
Update when you are free 😊


thanks shailu am glad you liked it
he thought so but his thoughts will be broken soon
am glad you did
am free now so will update in sometime
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Posted: 9 years ago

thanks dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zoyazrehan

Sehan moments...Loved it!

Awaiting the next update. Thanks


thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ankiecool

oh God
i hate misunderstandings


don't worry this missunderstanding is for short span😊
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Originally posted by: heemasomani

Awesome update

emotional one

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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Emotions of all three written beautifully
Rehan was shocked to see seher there. Her words consoled him.
Amanat, a good friend & brother, broke their eye lock as he cant see them like drenching in rain. Update when u get chance as I am curious to know what Rehan will do now as he thought seher & Amanat love each other
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am glad you liked all this! What rehan will do will be known soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 12 - When A Mistake Happen

The two men looked at each other gaping at the lady infront of them filled with determination ready to take the revenge. They were confused and numb to think how to stop her. Rehan was the most confused one he wanted to go and make her understand but his resolve not allowing him and at the same time he just can't let her do this. Amanat somehow understood Rehan's inner turmoil, he nudged him and gestured him to go make her understand. Rehan looked at him numb not understanding the reason but Amanat gave him a heartwarming smile that melts his heart. From the time Rehan met Amanat he feels safe and happy with him like he is his other part and he respect him alot to deny his desicion. He noded at him and looked at Seher, composing himself and thinking how to stop her. He walked towards Seher while Amanat looked at them with satisfaction.

"no Seher you can't do this it is too dangerous"Rehan started calmly

Seher looked at Rehan wide eyes - "you are stopping me Rehan? I thought you will support me"

Rehan gulped hearing her and replied - "I supported you in every desicion Seher but I can't do that in this! It is too dangerous for you, it can risk your life"He tried to make her understand

Seher gave him unbeliveing look

"are you trying to scare me away Rehan? You are telling me to leave all this, all this that is connected to my parents?"Seher said with little angry tone

Rehan shook his head while Amanat looked at the two with wide eyes sensing the danger that is going to come he thought to interrupt but his voice chocked

"no Seher am just telling you that the plan you are trying to put in action is too dangerous for you. You shouldn't do this we will think someother plan"Rehan said in convincing tone

Seher looked at him sharply and folded her arms on her chest. Her gaze sharp,cold and accussing.

"ohh now I understood everything clearly. You are trying to save your mother that explain your sudden denial in my desicion. You was supporting me all that time because it didn't involve your mother but now when it did and you know she is culprit you are trying to save her from punishment"

Rehan breath hitched and he felt like someone strangled him. He has been accuse from years but today this accusation from the one he love immensely shook him.

"n-oo Seher there is nothin-g like th-at"Rehan tried to explain in low broken tone

"there is this problem only nothing else"Seher said with anger blinding her from seeing his state and make her understand what she is saying

Amanat frozed. He was late to stop them. Seher has accused him in anger and and he is hurt now. Before he could digest what all is happening Rehan left from his sight, dejected and with the pieces of his broken hopes. Amanat pressed his forehead and walked towards Seher.

"what have you done Seher?"Amanat asked with low tone

Seher looked at him scrutinizing, Amanat shooked his head lightly and walked away from there behind Rehan.

The mistake! Anyone can do it even when they are extra caution and they did it too. Rehan of thinking to stop Seher and Seher of hurting Rehan and Amanat of trying to mend Rehan.

"Rehan"Amanat called him as he rush out of the house

Being deaf ear Rehan keep on walking brokenly until Amanat hold him from his shoulder

Seher walked inside Tanveer room without knocking. Tanveer was talking on phone in low tone and looked frustrated. She got startled seeing Seher, standing infront of her with cold face. She cut the call and asked her reason ever so sweetly.

"drop the act Begum Sahiba Tanveer"Seher said gritting her teeth

Tanveer was shocked at her tone. She worried of being heared.

"what's wrong Seher? Why are you so angry?"Tanveer said touching her cheeks

Seher looked away not allowing her to touch her cheeks.

"I know everything about you. I got to know everything. Asad Ahmad Khan and Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan, my parents does it ring the bell?"Seher asked with fire in her eyes

Tanveer frozed some blur flashbacks flashed infront of her. Seeing Tanveer state Seher was satisifed and knew she is going to win.

"what do you know?"Tanveer asked furrowing her brow and looking at her curiously

"everything! What you did with them! I have your gun"Seher said with smirk

Tanveer looked at her blankly and finally broke into smile and replied - "so you get to know? That I killed your parents? No problem, I don't have any issue I accept, I killed them but how will you prove it?"

Seher eyes widened but she composed herself - "I have proof and am going to show that to everyone and now your confession made it easier now you wait and watch"

As Seher start to go Tanveer came infront of her

"you don't have any proof"Tanveer said convincing herself

Seher smiled and replied - "I'm afraid to say I have"

"you cannot prove it! You will not tell anyone!"Tanveer said scared

"I am sorry Mrs. Tanveer, I will"Seher said and started to go, suddenly a sharp pain shot in her head and everything went black

Tanveer stood holding the vase in her hand with anger.

"I cannot let you live you are threat to my life and son!"Tanveer face was cold with evillness and her eyes shoning thirst, thirst of blood

They were going good till they were together, they fighted the odds and conspiracy but the time the anger, the fury and the revenge blinded one everything got ruin with the extra care of others two. They could have fighted all this together but they did one mistake that seperate them. Her anger rolled over her, his broken hopes, broke again and he feeling his pain left her alone working on her plan alone.

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sorry for mistakes no proof reading!

Bye!
Edited by Asshi... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really nice! Thanks for update!
Continue soon!
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awesome what an eventful update

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