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asyaa4ever221

@asyaa4ever221

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: -hotsauce-

Yes Asad entry finally
Yes he was
Haha yeah he has a obsession with newspaper
Yes it's cute
Yes they are they will meet in the next update
Your welcome
Will do

Would you like this story changed a little or no?

Dnt chng it seem good rght now, if u wnt u can 😊

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: asyaa4ever221

Dnt chng it seem good rght now, if u wnt u can 😊

Thanks for letting me know! i will probably change the scene where she gets burned into something else but i will see 😊

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asyaa4ever221

@asyaa4ever221

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: -hotsauce-

Thanks for letting me know! i will probably change the scene where she gets burned into something else but i will see😊

ur welcome
I luv Vivah
It was my first bollywood couple I fell in luv with
You should change that scene in to where
she gets shots

Edited by asyaa4ever221 - 10 years ago

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: asyaa4ever221

ur welcome
I luv Vivah
It was my first bollywood couple I fell in luv with
You should change that scene in to where
A robber comes and shoots zoya or something like that

oh reallly!

i will think about it

thanks for your idea 😃

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

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Hello guys! I'm not getting enough like on this story! first part i got 60 and then 48 and then 37, so its decreasing i would like to know who wants a PM for this story so i don't have to waste my time in to sending people PMs. Thank youuu 😊

P.S - I would love it if Silent reader would comment :)

Please like this post if you want a PM!

and if I'm Pming you i would like to hear something from you 😊

Thats all folks 😉

Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago