AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

<font size="2">Awesome Update dear👏😊</font>

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<font size="2">Zoya stopped to find her abbu but she has to get another wen d truth of her abbu is out. Wonder how can she be so naive to find a man who left her ammi after her death n threw her in orphanage? I find Zoya stupid due to dat. Dis Tanveer is getn so happy wid her work but it was not entirely her fault but Asad's fault. Asad is so dumb. Tanveer was closing his buttons in d car n keeping her head on his chest. And he let her do dat. How wud he have react if another man or Zoya's male friend does dat to Zoya? Then he wud have insulted her n called her characterless. He is letting a female friend live in his house for so many days even though she has her own house in Kanpur. Wat if Zoya's male friend came to live in d house for so many days n hugged her now n then? How he wud have reacted then? Asad was not a gentleman at all. He even left Zoya at a deserted place cuz she helped to stop him 4m reaching d court. He knew dat she did not know abt d places in Bhopal. She wud have got kidnapped or even raped. Razia is sick to get her own daughter kidnapped. I wish Tanveer uses d opportunity. I want Razia to learn a lesson for getn her own daughter kidnapped. Let Humeira herself see d real face of her ammi.</font>


<font size="2">Glad dat Zoya has stopped running after Asad. Its good dat she is thinking him fake cuz he made her to do so. He never trusted her. He did not even believed her a little wen Zoya was saying dat she saw Tanveer talking in d hospital. Wat does he thought of Zoya? Dat she is hallucinating or she has gone mad. I wanted to slap Asad. Last night, he danced romantically wid Zoya n nearly confessed to her. But then, he was angry dat Zoya did not passed d shawl, thinking her lying abt Tanveer talking to d doctor n even doubting her dat she tried to kill Tanveer. Dats why, Asad can't be forgiven so easily. He really needs to change n prove himself worthy of Zoya.</font>


<font size="2">Update soon n PM me😃</font>

she doesn't know the truth dear that's why but yes here gudiya factory mystery is more complex!
Zoya will be strong and Asad will also prove his love for Zoya but not so soon look here again I told the story!😉
Yeah sure dear!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
thank you everyone! Will post next chapter in some minutes
Edited by Starry-sky - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Credit to sameera_12

Chapter 3 - Please

Zoya saw what she didn't have hope to see anymore

"app!"said shocked Zoya

and there stood Asad Ahmad Khan...in her room

Asad looked at her

"wh..at are you doing here now?"asked Zoya getting courage to talk

"and what are you doing?"he asked gritting his teeth shocking Zoya

"what I am doing? Hah*Zoya smiled sarcastically* it's you who are doing everything leaving, deceiving you are doing it not me...Mr Khan"said Zoya painfully

"okay i did but what are you doing you are leaving me? How can you do this you can't leave like this you just can't"said Asad desperately

"why? WHY? Why can't I Mr. Khan? After what you did why shouldn't I ? And why are you stopping me? To decieve me again? Tell me why??? Anyways you always wanted to send me back then why stopping today Mr. Khan, why?"asked angry Zoya

Asad looked at her. He looked in her angry eyes. He stopped, stopped for a moment. What is he doing? Is it right to stop her after what he did? No he is not doing anything wrong. She can't leave him like this she can't

"I didn't decieved you I..."
Asad was stopped by Zoya who showed him her hand

"enough. Enough is enough I don't want to hear anythin you always loved Tanveer and it's proof is all those incidents when you cared for her and didn't trusted me! You even blamed me for framing her and even asked me to apologise her when I was saying the truth you always put me down infront of her why? Because you loved her damn it and it is the proof!*calming her nerves Zoya continued* you can leave now"said angry Zoya pointing towards door

Asad looked at her hurt, pain, helplessnes all was visible on his face. He felt like all his doings are stabbing him back! But than how can he belived Zoya without proof?

"Zoya you never had proofs and Tanur had! So I believed her!"Asad tried to reasoned his doings but it rose Zoya anger

"Tanu, Tanu, Tanu! Always your Tanu is right! Fine she had proof! I accepted! But was my words not enough? What I saw was not enough? You said that you loved me than does it called love when you don't believe the person you claimed to love? Every relationship is based on trust Mr. Khan that you neve had on me! Even if today you had said that you are trap I would have accepted but tell me one thing Mr. Khan will you have believed yourself that you are trapped in Tanveer plan? Tell me Mr. Khan"Zoya demanded answer
Asad stood speecheless. He really had no answer for this

"you have no answer right? Than please leave Mr. Khan! The door is there"Zoya said pointing at door looking away

Gulping his tears he walked out but stopped at door step. A tear fall from both of their eyes

Asad turned and looked at her hoping to see her looking at him but felt dissapointed seeing her back. He finally walked away with heavy steps

Zoya turned and looked at him to see if he is looking at her? But to her luck he was going, going away...from her. Her heart squeezed in pain and she turned away

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Tanveer was still enjoying her victory in her room that was going to doubled

"what a treat, Zoya leaving Bhopal. That's great now Zoya story will end and my story will start"said Tanveer laughing

Tanveer looked at Zoya and Asad picture. She tore it from mid seperating them, there picture

"aur is k sath hy sath Razia Bi ki kahani ka bhi khatma!"She laughed evilly as she took her phone again to execute her plan

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"kya Zoya thek keh rhy thy? Kya ye Tanu ki chaal ho skty h? Magar Tanu ye sb kyun kregy? Akhir us ka maqsad kya hoga in sb k piche? Aur kl mai Tanu k sath kese?"Asad asked himself pacing in room

"I should ask Tanu, what really hapened there? How can this hapened?"Asad thought and walked towards Tanveer room

Tanveer was startled, she quickly turned back to see Asad standing at door shocked.
"did he heared something?"Tanveer thought scaredly

"Tanu mai ye kya sun rha hun?"Tanveer looked shocked on Asad question

"tum kahn ja rhy ho?"Asad asked

Tanveer have a sigh of relief thinking that Asad didn't heared anything other than her words of going. She thought something and smiled inwardly

"mai yahn se ja rhy hun jammy!"Tanveer said looking down doing her melodrama

"pur kyun? Or kahan?"Asad asked

"Jo kuch bhi hua Jammy mai us k bd yahn nhy reh skty! Or mai tmhre aur Zoya k darmiyan koi daraar nhy ane de skty!"Tanveer said doing her drama

"magar kl hua kya tha Tanveer?"Asad asked


Zoya locked the door and jumped on bed crying her heart out. This little meet with Asad broke her again. Her wounds refreshed again which were already new after the little talk with Asad

After sometime she controlled herself and then took out the music box and opened it. The sweet melody rang in the room soothing her pain.

"why Abu why me? First you and Ami left me and now Asad too. Is am that bad? So everyone left me?"she cried looking at it

Asad : I want to know everything what hapened there Tanveer what hapened after i was hitted on head

Tanveer*cryingly* : when they hit you, you fainted and they too left from there, I didn't have my phone too and your phone was broken, I was helpless and alone so I drag you till that room when I was tending you, you come almost in senses but not completely than you try to....* she started to faking cry * I did my best, I tried to stopped you but you didn't, you didn't listened me...*she again started to fake cry to get Asad attention but Asad keep on crying and looking down not even bothering about Tanveer so she continued* I am a woman I couldn't do any thing infront of you so I silently cryingly obliged to you

Tanveer sit on bed and start to cry but Asad stood at the same spot with tears flowing from his eyes and guilt runing in his every nerves thinking what he might have done

"you don't need to go for that reason Tanu! Everything is finished!"

Asad walked backwards and then turned and walked away
He sit on bed in his room

"Tanu mere aur Zoya k liye ye sb kuch kr rhy h to phr wo kese in sb ki zimedar ho skty h? Nhy Zoya ko zaroor koi ghalat fahmi hoye h!"Asad said to himself

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That's it for now!

Tada!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
I seriously want to smack Asad's head.
Dump A**
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Asad ko koi pakad kar maaro

Smack him on his head cause his brains really not working

Tannu and Jammy ki dekho yaari sabse nyaari sabse pyari 🤓

I hated in the show too he had full yakeen on Tannu and not even an ounce on Zoya

🤓Asad🤓


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Posted: 10 years ago
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asad ki precious tanu...
He thnk tanu said all tht thngs bcs she wnt asya cme together 😕

serously sme1 pls try to making sme sense in his head 😡

thnks 4 the update

Hope tanu truth cmeout soon nd asya clear their misunderstndng
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Update dear👏😊

Asad needs a shock treatment or slap treatment 4m Zoya😡. How can he believe Tanveer dat he raped her?😡 He still calls her Tanu after so much happened😡. He even has d audacity to say dat he always believed Tanu n asked her to apologize cuz Tanu always had proofs while she did not had😡. Wateva d reason he sud not have told her to apologize. He still expects Zoya to forgive n love a dumb like him who never uses his brains.


Even if Zoya will convince him he will not believe her n insult her again. Asad sud name a road or chowk after his mahaan Tanu n make a statue of her. Dis time Zoya sud not run after him to help him. Let him use his own brain which he never did. Asad is nothing widout Zoya's help cuz she only helped him in many problems. Let him suffer which he deserves. Zoya is better widout him cuz he will never trust her.


Update soon n PM me😃.






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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Superb update
After everything happened asad is till belive tannu
Thank for the pm continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey sis hope your alright 😊
Coming to the update it was amazing..
Loved it!!!!
Awww I feeel very sorry for my zoya baby she has to go through so much just coz of that stupid billo rani and her so called Mr "Brainless" khan...
Can I plzz strangle asad?? 😆 You know it gets really hard to control your hands when his always believing his beloved Tanu 🤔
Hope we get rid of this tanu asap
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it!
hope Asad finds out that Tanveer is evil
Feel sad for zoya
But seperation tracks bring them even closer
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon please?

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