AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 39

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Superb update.
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thanks dear😛
mitwaa is coming soon😉
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it will take time
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Superb update.
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thanks dear😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Part Dear👏😊

So, Zoya is still rude wid Asad😆. Well, he deserves much more than dat. Its nothing in front of wat he did to her 4m day 1. Glad dat he is atleast believing her. But u showed according to Zoya dat he only came to her wen he is stuck not wen she was teln him d truth n he did not believed her. Teln her to apologize to Tanveer was disgusting.

Asad also deserves dat behaviour 4m Najma cuz he always rules her life dat literally may have started suffocating her. But u mentioned some other reasons. How according to Asad n Dilshad, Najma can be nice if someone is mean to her? Plz explain😕.

Ayaan is trying to make Humeira happy n he is getn happy seeing her happy. I think Hum Aapke Hai Kaun scene was also wid old Ayaan but don't remember it.

Glad dat u did not showed Humeira like Rajni or Jannat. Rajni was decent eventhough she was married according to herself but Jannat clings to Shaad like hell. In one of my stories, Zoya has Retrograde Amnesia n I try to show her as normal as I can widout being OTT n her clinging to Asad but being friendly n respecting her husband Asad.

Glad u did not showed Imraan as Najma's love interest. In my one story I showed Rehan as Najma's love interest n in another I showed Abhimanyu. Imraan was a dumb who enjoyed wid Tanveer, Nikhat n Najma n then married Najma.


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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

<font size="2">Awesome Part Dear👏😊</font>


<font size="2">So, Zoya is still rude wid Asad😆. Well, he deserves much more than dat. Its nothing in front of wat he did to her 4m day 1. Glad dat he is atleast believing her. But u showed according to Zoya dat he only came to her wen he is stuck not wen she was teln him d truth n he did not believed her. Teln her to apologize to Tanveer was disgusting.</font>

<font size="2">Asad also deserves dat behaviour 4m Najma cuz he always rules her life dat literally may have started suffocating her. But u mentioned some other reasons. How according to Asad n Dilshad, Najma can be nice if someone is mean to her? Plz explain😕.</font>

<font size="2">Ayaan is trying to make Humeira happy n he is getn happy seeing her happy. I think Hum Aapke Hai Kaun scene was also wid old Ayaan but don't remember it.</font>

<font size="2">Glad dat u did not showed Humeira like Rajni or Jannat. Rajni was decent eventhough she was married according to herself but Jannat clings to Shaad like hell. In one of my stories, Zoya has Retrograde Amnesia n I try to show her as normal as I can widout being OTT n her clinging to Asad but being friendly n respecting her husband Asad. </font>

<font size="2">Glad u did not showed Imraan as Najma's love interest. In my one story I showed Rehan as Najma's love interest n in another I showed Abhimanyu. Imraan was a dumb who enjoyed wid Tanveer, Nikhat n Najma n then married Najma.</font>




thanks juhi😛

yes Zoya still can't forgive him as he didn't came to her for Her but for himself

Asad is a father like figure for Najma and is her brother and as a sister she can get angry at something of her brother but not rude a sister knows her brother well just like that Najma knows her brother thinking and respect it as it is her manners.. It is about brother-sister love not someone or anyone else

yes that scene hapened with old ayaan😊

Waking up from coma and turning into an Hindu married woman was just too much yeah we could have agreed if someone had told her after waking up all that but like this is unbelieveble

I didn't liked Imran getting Najma unconditional love without knowing his betrayal. It was fine that he was decieved by Tanveer who drugged and used him but Nikhat? What was all that shy and interesting in you all was? I hated Imran for that
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey just came across this story. N it's really nice.
Went through all the chapters.
Asad is so dumb? Y?
Even in the show I would be frustrated wit tanu n jammy.

Please continue soon.
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Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Hey just came across this story. N it's really nice.

Went through all the chapters.
Asad is so dumb? Y?
Even in the show I would be frustrated wit tanu n jammy.

Please continue soon.


welcome to the story sweety🤗
am glad that you liked it😛
That's what am showing, am showing the same Asad from show that will change slowly with the love of Zoya some mans are really dumb and need someone to open their eyes same case goes with Asad but don't worry he will change and will not be the same Asad as jammy
i'll try to update soon😊
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want to continue read this story
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