AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update dear
Zoya recalled asad expressions & then tanveer words. Finally she started thinking in different way. On the other side asad started doubt on tanveer. Hope they will find out the truth soon. Humeira had an accident & next 48 hrs will be crucial. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

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Yes she did, finally both did😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -silentbang-

Ahh finally both are using their minds... Hope they will come to know about real face of Tanveer soon..

Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaa4ever221

luved iit!

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continue soon!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah



Me too like ur idea Abii

Pls do this Aaish

And update was superb

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

best of luck 4 ur exams 👍🏼

updt was good
Asad & Zoya had developed doubt
hope Asad find d truth soon
Humi is critical poor soul

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Chapter 7 - Change of equations

Zoya get ready in her room in hotel. As she was about to go out when she stop and walk back towards Asad's picture hanging on a side wall. She ran her fingers on it as her eyes brimmed with tears

"Har kisi ko muhabbat ki talash hoty h! Har koi muhabbat chahta h par kya muhabbat ka matlab sirf dhoka aur beitbari h? Sahy kehte hain, muhabbat k kai pehlu hain kuch sahy kuch ghalat! Dekho na Asad, maine tumse muhabbat ki aur sirf muhabbat hy mangy us k badle jis mai apka yakeen bhi shamil tha, magar mjhe ap se wo yakeen na mila aur phir ap ne mjh se muhabbat ki magar ap ko apny muhabbat k badle mjh se mjhe badlna chaha aur sath hy sath Tanveer ki dosti jo mai ap ko nhy de skty! Tanveer ne ap se muhabbat ki sirf paison k liye aur ap se us k badle yakeen manga aur ap ne de bhi diya! In sub mai Tanveer ko uski khudgarz muhabbat mil gye magar hm donon alag ho gye!
Magar kya wakai mai apne mjh se pyar kiya? Ya phir ye mera dhoka tha? Kya apki muhabbat wakai mai sachi thi ya phir ek illusion tha, Asad?"
Zoya asked with tears looking at Asad picture

"wakt bhut beiman hota h Asad! Pehle mery bary thi aur ab ap ki! Apne mera yakeen aur muhabbat sab hasil ki pur mjhe kuch nhy mila jab k mery jaga wo chezain Tanveer ko mily akhir aisy na-insafi kyun Asad? Khair ab apki bary h mjhe wo yakeen aur muhabbat dene ki! Mjhe yakeen dilane ki k ap bhi mjh se sacha pyar karte hain, jesa k mai ap se! Ap ko yakeen dilana hoga mjhe Asad k ap Tanveer se zyada mere kareeb hain. It's your turn to see things Asad! am tired of showing you the real world that you see in me, always. Now you have to see who is right and who is wrong! I will wait for you Asad, wait for you to come to me even if I have to wait for eternity because my love is true Asad it is eternal!"Zoya wiped her tears and opened the door to walk out, she gave one last glance to Asad picture before closing the door and walking away

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Asad sipped the liquid from his mug, completely ignoring the gaze that was on him infact he was higly irritated

"Kya hai Tannu? What do you want?"Finally Asad let out his frustration on Tanveer, turning towards her who was busy ogling at him

On the other hand Tanveer was completely startled by Asad outburst, she was constantly trying to get Asad attention but Asad was just looking at mug which was pissing her. She thought that Asad was not noticing her so she sat and started to ogle at him but she never thought that Asad will shout at him. She quickly lowered her gaze and tried to composed herself

"why are you getting so angry Jammy? What did I do?"Tanveer said innocently

Asad was highly pissed by Tanveer reply, Zoya's departure and recent events were taking a toll on him

"kya Tanu? Kab ka mjhe dekh rhy thy jese koi bacha apny ma ko dekhta h aur poch rhy hun maine kya kiya?"Asad said placing the cup on table infront of him

Tanveer was embarrassed by Asad's words

"Jammy mai, wo..."Tanveer tried to find words

"That's it!"Asad standing up and walking away

"Jammy"Tanveer tried to call him but he walked away

"what was that? Why is suddenly he so violent? He was never like this even during Zoya if he scold her, he never shouted!"Tanveer said trying to comprehend Asad's behaviour

"what is wrong with her? Zoya to kabhi bhi aisa nhy krty thy even ka wo to New york jesy city se thy!"Asad said pacing his room and comparing Zoya with Tanveer

Asad turned to see Tanveer standing at door, he rolled his eyes

"kya hum andar a skte hain?"Tanveer asked

"Tum already andar hy ho, Tanveer!"Asad said irritated

Tanveer was all the more startled. For the first time Asad called him Tanveer and also she was just one step inside his room and he just insulted him

"Jammy, what has hapened to you? Why are you so angry?"Tanveer said coming near Asad

"what do You want Tanveer?"Asad said gritting his teeth

"I... Just... I wanted to say sorry for what hapened outside! I was just trying to see that what's wrong with you?"Tanveer said touching his shoulder

Asad jerked away Tanveer's hand

"don't be so ignorant Tanveer!"Asad said giving Tanveer one last glance and walking away

"jane k bad bhi itna kuch bigad diya yahn tak k Asad ko bhi"Tanveer said gritting her teeth

Asad came out of house and ran his fingers in his hairs

"how can she just go and touch me? Zoya never did that! Ahhh, Zoya and Tanveer are so different!"Asad said

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Ayaan sit beside Humaira who was bandaged on head and many other places with several wires attached to her petite figure

"Ya Allah, please make her fine I promise I will never let a tiny tear fall from her eyes! I promise! Please, make her fine!"Ayaan said closing his eyes and holding Humaira hand

A tear fall from Ayaan's eyes and fall on Humaira's hand. Ayaan opened his eyes as he feel Humaira moving her hands

"Humaira! Humaira, open your eyes! Look am here!"Ayaan said patting Humaira cheeks

Everyone circled Humaira bed who were till now standing silent

"Humaira, meri bachi"Razia said in her sweet evil voice

Humaira opened her eyes slowly. Her gaze was unclear but she could see many people around her and voices that surround her. As her gaze cleared, she looked at everyone faces

"Humaira, shukar hai Allah ka, k ap ko hosh agya!"Ayaan said carressing Humaira face

Humaira looked at Ayaan

"ap! Ap kon hain?"Humaira said suddenly, shocking everyone

"Humaira, please don't joke!"Ayaan said chocking on his words

"ap sab kon hain? Humaira kon h? Mai kon hun?"Humaira said straightning herself and holding her head

Ayaan was shocked while everyone tried to introduced themselves to Humaira only Ayaan understood the situation so he quickly called the doctor

"please ap log bahir jayen, mjhe patient ko check krne dain"Doctor said

Everyone came out of ward

"pata nhy kya hogya h mery bachi ko? Ye sub kuch is Ayaan ki waja se ho rha h"Razia said in her wicked tone

"bhabi ap aisa kyun keh rhy hain? Hmare Ayaan to ghar tha jab Humaira ka accident hua!"Shireen said in her usual innocent voice

Razia rolled her eyes at Shireen foolish words

Doctor came out of ward and looked at everyone

"doctor, kya hua hai Humaira ko?"Ayaan asked fearing the worst

"am sorry to say but she has memory loss!"Doctor declared

Ayaan closed his eyes as he had doubt and now it comes true, a lone tear escaped from his eye as he blamed himself for Humaira misery

"it is due to her injury that she is going through temperory memory loss but don't worry she will gain her memory back soon but it can take time, months or maybe years!"Doctor told

"so what should we do doctor?"Ayaan asked composing herself

"try to make her remember old days but please be gentle she shouldn't forced herself to remember things! Show her past in present, I hope you are understanding me!"Doctor said

"don't worry doctor we will not rush in it!"Ayaan said softly

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Memory loss was better than rajni track as it is strange that person transparent into someone else! So here I am pening my thoughts

Asad was needed to be frustrated all time after Zoya left not all time sad even in sadness there is anger but he went in silent mode so strange! Do you guys liked the chapter?
Do leave your views sweeties till then

Tada!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful part
Assad,'s behavior is amazing
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

Wonderful part

Assad,'s behavior is amazing
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon

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your welcome
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