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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

hmmm lekin isko nai pata hum log superior quality k chipku hai


well said doc 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Salam... how are you all... hope fine and doing your best...
well first of all thank you sooo much for your love n support towards my story... my updates were ready but i delayed it for some reasons...
Arzoo yaar tune sahi kaha tha apny last sign main...
"Result Aa Gaya" yeh 3 word insaan ki life change kar dety hain...
etni sari Congratulations...
etni sari Wishes...
etny sary Gifts...
etni zaida Importance...
hayeee kaash result roz roz aaye 😉
okay now boht ho gaya now all of you can congratulate me just 8 months then meri PG finish yeahhh 🥳
now scroll down for update...
hope u like it 😊
Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Separation... No Moreee


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Part 17:

Asad reached Mannat in 15 minutes, he was sure that Zoya must be here only... he entered in the house and looked for her but she was not in their room... he searched her in the entire house but she was not there... he was worried for her and then something clicked in his mind and he entered in Aman's room and sighed in relief... there she was sitting on the bed an crying her heart out... he leaned on the door and hear out her self-blabbering...
Zoya: you know what Aman... nobody needs your mama... papa ko Asya mil gai to bas unhy ab Mrs. Khan ki ya Zoe ki zaroorat nahi hai... sab meri galti hai... mene hi unhy date par bheja tha... I know Jas boht achi hai par Mr. Khan ko pata hai main kitni possessive hoon phir bhi abhi tak nahi aaye... mama miss you Aman... she cried and hid her face in her legs...
Asad too cried with her but he knew that she was right also... no doubt he loved her more than himself but after AsYa's birth he didn't bother to show her the love and care which she deserves... his train of thoughts broken by the ringing of his cell phone... Zoya looked at the door and found him... she got up from the bed and ran to him and hugged him tightly... he too hugged her back... both smiled with teary eyes... but continuous ringing of his cell phone forced him to attend the call...
Asad: haan Najma...
Najma: bhaijan Zoya mili...
Asad: Zoya mere sath hai or pareshan hony ki zaroorat nahi hai... ammi se kehna fikar na karein hum ghar aa jayengey... or Asya...
Najma: Asya apni dadi k pass so rahi hai app aram se aaiye...
Asad: okay bye... he cut the call and looked at his wife who was relaxing his arms... I m sorry Zoe... he said breaking the hug...
Zoya: I don't need your sorry... she said without looking in his eyes and left from there...
Asad smirked when an idea popped up in his mind and he followed her till their room... Zoya was standing near the window... he hugged her from behind and placed a kiss on her shoulder... she tried to free herself but Asad's grip was tight...
Asad: I m sorry na Zoe...
Zoya: how was your date???
Asad: date... that was just a dinner... or Mrs. Khan app shayad bhool rahi hain app ne khud mjhy date par bheja tha... he said turning her around so he can face her...
Zoya: app mana bhi to kar sakty thy... she said with fresh tears brimming in her eyes...
Asad: I swear Zoya aaj agar tum rony bethi na to main sachii main Jas ko apni GF bana longa...
Zoya: haan to mere pass aaney ki zehmat kyun ki... jaiye app...
Asad: okay fine... he was about to go when she held his hand and pinned him to the nearest wall...
Zoya: ab jaa kar dekhaiye... she said clutching his collar...
Asad: oh to apko bura laga k main Jas k sath time spend kar k aya hoon... he said freeing himself from her clutch...
Zoya: haq hai mera... app mere shohar hain... mene apko 2 ghanty k liye kaha tha or app ne kya kiya haan???
Asad: mene kya kiya...
Zoya: zaida smart ban'ny ki zaroorat nahi hai app ne Heena se pocha tha or app ko pata tha k main etny time se wait kar rahi hoon lekin app ne jaan bojh kar mjhy jealous feel kraya...
Asad: kya pocha tha mene Heena se... or app kiss cheez ka wait kar rahi thi... he said now pinning her to the wall...
Zoya: poch to aisy rahy hain jesy apko nahi pata... she said coming closer to him...
Asad: or agar main kahi k mene app k liye kuch plan kiya hai to... he said pecking her lips...
Zoya: to main kaho gi k plan hum bad main discuss kar sakty hain... she said sneaking her arms around his neck...
Asad: as you wish Mrs. Khan... he said placing his arms on her waist and pulled her towards him...
AsYa looked at each other with lots of desires... they sealed their lips to recreate their magic of love... both were totally lost in each other... that was not their first time but their feeling, emotions and desires were on fire... after breaking the kiss he placed open-mouth kisses along her neck... he took her in his arms and placed her on the bed and came on top of her...

Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain
Aaj To Mera Tan Badan
Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein
Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain
Aaj To Mera Tan Badan
Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein
Hai Meri Kasam Tujhko Sanam Door Kahin Na Jaa
Yeh Doori Kehti Hain Paas Mere Aaja Re
AsYa were lying in each other's arms... both were awake but a bit tired... Zoya was roaming her hands on his six-packs... she got up and wears his shirt and came to the door... she turned and told him to follow her... Asad like an obedient husband followed her but didn't forget to pick a shawl for her...
Actually, Asad had arranged a set-up on terrace on his wife's demand... Zoya wanted a romantic arrangement in open air so he had arranged a floor-bed with some romantic touches on terrace so his bold wife can enjoy in privacy...


Zoya was looking at the arrangement when Asad came there and covered her with shawl from behind... she smiled at his concern and dragged him to the bed... Asad was shirtless so Zoya removed her shawl and placed it on them of them... AsYa were sitting under the sky in a single shawl when Zoya sat in front of him in such a way that her back was touching his front... Asad too responded to her move and hugged her closely...

Yuhi Baras Baras Kaali Ghata Barse
Hum Yaar Bheeg Jaaye Is Chaahat Ki Baarish Mein
Meri Khuyli Khuli Lato Ko Suljaaye
Tu Apni Ungliyon Se Main To Hoon Isi Khwaayish Mein
Zoya turned a little bit and took him in a kiss... he too kissed her back and soon their kiss turned into another love making...

Sardi Ki Raaton Mein Hum Soye Rahe Ek Chaadar Mein
Hum Dono Tanha Ho Na Koi Bhi Rahe Is Ghar Mein
Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain
Aaj To Mera Tan Badan
Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein
Aaja Re Aa Re

AsYa woke up early in the morning obviously disturbed by the Sun and the chirping of birds... but they loved such experience... they made their way towards their bedroom... Zoya went in washroom while Asad jumped on the bed... after 20 minutes Zoya came out of the washroom with wet hair... when she found her hubby still on bed she came to him... Asad was lying upside down so Zoya sat near him and placed her wet hair on his bare back and whispered sweet nothing in his ear... Asad was enjoying the sweet torture but when she bit his earlobe he pinned her to the bed and came on top of her...
Zoya: its morning Asad... now get up... she said cupping his cheek...
Asad: mood nahi hai Mrs. Khan... he said pecking her lips...
Zoya: apky mood k chakar main Asya ka pata nahi kya haal ho hara hoga... uthieye na... she said pushing him on his back...
Asad: that's not fair Mrs. Khan...
Zoya: that's not fair Mrs. Khan... she mocked him... Asya se milty hi app mjhy bhool jayengey or phir mjhy blame karengey k mene late karwa dia... she said sitting up on the bed...
Asad: mera bhi time ayega...
Zoya: we'll see baby... she said with a wink... ab jaiye bhi...
Asad: app bhi aaiye na... he said getting up from the bed and pulled her towards him...
Zoya: kya matlab... main abhi naha kar aayi hoon...
Asad: acha to app mjhy company dy dejieye... he said with a smirk...
Zoya: jaiye na... she pushed him towards washroom and ran from there...
AsYa came back SM and ran to Asya... she was awake but Ayan and Najma were there with her... but seeing Asad she started crying... Asad took her in his arms and left from there...
Ayan: Najma tumhy nahi lagta Asya ek dum Zoya jesi hai???
Najma: wo kesy bhaijan...
Zoya: Rabert mjhy to Asya Mr. Khan ki tarha lagti hai...
Ayan: arry nahi na jab bhi yh dono maa beti bhaijan ko dekhti hain rony lag jati hain or bas enhy bahana mil jata hai bhaijan k sath akely time spend karny ka... kuch samjhi Najma...
Najma: oh haan bhaijan kal raat Zoya bhi to... she was speaking further but Zoya smacked on her head lightly...
Zoya: kya haan... tum dono shayad Mrs. Mukka Ahmad Khan se milna chahty ho... she tried to frighten them...
Ayan: kya bat hai Mona ek raat bhaijan k sath Mannat main Asya k bagair or app etni wild ho gayi... mere bechary bhaijan...
Najma: wesy Zoya mjhy nahi lagta tha app wild ho sakti ho...
Zoya: Allah Miyan... what's wrong with you... kesi baty kar rahy ho tum dono... main or wild kuch bhi haan... main Asya ko dekh kar aati hoon...
Ayan: haan haan app k Mr. Khan bhi Asya k sath hain so have fun Mrs. Khan... he said with a wink...
Zoya turned red due to embarrassment and ran from there while Ayan and Najma high-fived... Zoya came in the room and stopped at the door only... the sight in front of her pleased and shocked her at the same time...


Asad was lying shirtless on the bed with Asya... okay she always wanted him shirtless in their room but she had never expected all this in front of Asya... Asad noticed her at the door lost in her thoughts...
Asad: Zoya close the door warna abhi koi aa jaye ga...
Zoya: huh...
Asad: kahan gum hain app Mrs. Khan... or plzzz darwaza band kar dejieye...
Zoya: app aisy I mean wo app is waqt... she asked after closing the door...
Asad: shirtless... he asked understanding her point...
Zoya: ji...
Asad: Asya kiss ki beti hai... apki beti hai na to or kya demand kar sakti hai...
Zoya: main smjhi nahi Mr. Khan... she said sitting near them...
Asad: app jab mere sath akeli hoti hain to mjhy shirt utarny ko kehti hain... he said with a smirk...
Zoya: haan par...
Asad: or yeh apki beti jab tak mene shirt nahi utari is ne mjhy impled smile gift nahi ki...
Zoya: app to jesy kabhi shirtless hona hi nahi chahty...
Asad: acha aisa bat hai... okay abhi shirt pehen leta hoon... beti k kehny pe uteri thi or maa k kehny pe pehen longa... he tried to get up from the bed but Zoya held his hand...
Zoya: beti ko to boht achy se 6-packs dikha liye or ab mere samney shirt pehn'ney ja rahy hain... that's not fair Asad...
Asad: jab app mjhy Asad bulati hain to boht acha lagta hai... app mjhy sab k samny bhi Asad bulati thi yeh phir se Mr. Khan ka bhoot kahan se sawar ho gaya...
Zoya: apko Asad bulati hoon to Ayan or Najma tang karty hain... apko pata hai abhi mjhy keh rahy thy k main boht wild hoon gayi hoon or...
Asad: unhy kesy pata chala k app boht wild hain... he too pulled her leg...
Zoya: Mr. Khannn... she smacked on his arms while Asya laughed seeing her wild mama...
Asad: ouch Mrs. Khan... aram se... or app wild hain lekin sirf mere liye... Ayan or Najma ko main dekh longa... ab kya hum dono papa-princess ko join karengi... he said patting the bed near him...
Zoya: so Asya ko mama chahieye ya Asad ko Zoe... she said lying with them...
Asad: papa ko Zoe or Asya ko mama... haina Asya... he said after seeing Asya as if he was conveying her message...
Zoya: phir Asya ko mid main kejieye na Asad... she said after resting her head on his arm...
Asad: Zoe apny Asad k sath sahi hai or rahi bat Asya ki wo papa k upper hi theek hai... he said pulling her more closer...
Zoya: I love both of you... she said kissing them respectively...
Asad: we also love you wild cat...
Zoya: Asaddd... she smacked him again...
Asad: Mrs. Khan abhi to mene kuch kiya hi nahi or app Asaddd Asaddd chilla rahi hain... Asya hamary sath hai kuch to khayal kejieye...
Zoya: hmm... she hum-ed without realizing his words... but when she understood his words she smirked at him and without wasting a moment she kissed him on his lips...
Asad: what was that... he said after breaking the kiss...
Zoya: your punishment...
Asad: then its okay... he pecked her lips and continued playing with Asya and enjoyed with his wife and daughter...


Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes plzzz...
hit like and leave your replies...
next update till 50+ likes...
Ashii...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 4 jas, arzoo, aroo, amu, nilu, yumi, abi, asif, mayur, sasir, anopama, cinderella
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Posted: 10 years ago
res..
unres...
jaan bach gayi asad ki 😛
bechari zoya kinna royi.. sab teri wajah se asshii !!!
sahi bola asya k aane k baad uski no importance ab to aman ko aana hi padega to b in his mothers party... 😉
lovely update ashii...
continue soon...
Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res

Unress...

Loved it!!!
AsYa romantic scenes
Ayaan and Najma teasing
AsYa their daughter
Overall nice Updateee
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon
Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow lovely and romantic part
asya with asya is really cute
ayaan and najma teasing wow
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashiii333

res 4 jas, arzoo, aroo, amu, nilu, yumi, abi, asif, mayur, sasir, anopama, cinderella

thank you for res😊😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Zoya wild cat
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashiii333

res 4 jas, arzoo, aroo, amu, nilu, yumi, abi, asif, mayur, sasir, anopama, cinderella


Salaam Ashiii... 😊
Thanx for the Res'...andCongratulations.. 😆
I must say this the Songs which you choose for any of your updates...are sooo good and spot on...and this also was very good choice totally voicing out the feelings which Asad and Zoya wanted to express...
Also ASYA's moments with her parents were very good..and adorable...
Continue soon...
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago

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