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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 22 B:

Zoya being a mother and wife was performing her duties really well... but she wanted to know her previous life as well... but her luck was not in favor... when she tries to remember something nothing came clear... just some flashbacks and blur images... Asad had told her not to stress herself as her memory is not important than her life... Zoya's birthday was coming next week... Ayan and Haider had planned a grand party but Asad told them not to invite so many people bcox Zoya will feel uncomfortable... so they agreed on a family party...

Zoya was clad in a black sarree gifted by Asad... Arman and Nuzhat too came to wish her... Aman was happy as he was enjoying with his entire family... Zoya cut the cake and fed Aman and Asad respectively... Arman asked her to sing as its her birthday... but she refused politely... all were requesting her but when Asad asked her to sing she agreed immediately... she offered a hand to Asad for a dance and he obliged happily... all other couples too joined them...

Mere Chhote Chhote Khaab Hai
Khaabon Mein Geet Hain
Geeton Mein Zindagi Hai
Chahat Hai Preet Hai
Abhi Main Na Dekhon Khwab Woh
Jinmein Na Tu Mile
Le Khole Hoth Maine
Ab Tak The Jo Sile
Zoya placed a hand on his cheek and came closer to Asad...

Mujhko Na Jitna Mujhpe
Utna Is Dil Ko Tujhpe
Hone Laga Aitbaar
Tanha Lamhon Mein Apne
Bunti Hoon Tere Sapne
Tujhse Ho Mujhko Pyaar O

Zoya pulled his nose and sang...

Poochungi Tujhko Kabhi Na
Chahoon Main Ya Na
Tere Khaabon Mein Ab Jeena
Chaahoon Main Kyun Na
After the party, all were in there rooms when Zoya asked Asad to come with her... actually she wanted to spend some time alone with her... they sent Aman to Asma and left for KV...
AsYa were in Zoya's room in KV... Zoya was feeling hesitant... Asad placed his hands on her...
Asad: Zoya kya problem hai... kisi ne kuch kaha kya... ya mene koi galti ki...
Zoya: Asad apki galti nahi hai... it's all my fault... mjhy apny past k baarey main kuch bhi yaad nahi aa raha... mjhy apny baarey main jan'na hai Asad... she said with teary eyes...
Asad: everything will be fine Zoya... he sai wiping her tears... tumhy jo pochna hai mujh se pocho... I will answer...
Zoya: lekin app mjhy hamesha se to nahi janty na...
Asad: haan par app jab se India aayi hain main apko janta hoon... apko pata hai app kitna bolti thi... or hum jab bhi milty thy app koi na koi bahana kar k mujh se takrati thi...
Zoya: mjhy kuch yaad nahi hai to eska matlab yeh nahi hai k app aisy bat karein gey... apki bhi galti hogi...
Asad: haan hum ono ki galti hoti thi... par takraty takraty hi nobat Nikah tak pohanchi thi...
Zoya: Asad... you still love me na... mjhy agar kuch yaad nahi aya to app tab bhi mujh se pyaar karengey na...
Asad: I love you Zoya... an I will till my last breath... she placed a hand on his lips...
Zoya: app aisi baty kyun kar rahy hain...
Asad: it's a fact Zoya... you are my last breath and main apni lat breath hamesha sambhal kar rakhonga...
Zoya: I love you too... but...
Asad: but...
Zoya: but I think you love me moreee...
Asad: so you trust me...
Zoya: haan... isi liye to app k sath hoon...
Asad: or agar mene kuch kiya to...
Zoya: app nahi karengy... I trust you Asad... or agar apko kuch karna hota to app kar chuky hoty...
Asad: Zoya is waqt hum yaha akely hain... no Aman... tum mujh se nahi darti...
Zoya: jab main app k sath hoti hoon I feel safe... she said hugging him...
Asad: thanks for being here with me... he hugged her tightly... don't leave me again Zoya... plzzz... he pleaded with teary eyes...
Zoya: I will be with you forever... she said kissing his temple...
Asad: I love you Zoya... he too kissed her forehead... he looked at her lips and then looked in her eyes for permission... she blinked her eyes and came closer... he smiled at her response and in a flip of moment he captured her lips...
Asad and Zoya were just feeling each others presence... their lips were connected... both satisfied their hearts by staying still... Asad started moving his lips and she too responded with equal passion... both were kissing for the first time after like eternity... they broke apart and placed their foreheads together...
Zoya: ghar chalein... Aman wait kar raha hoga...
Asad: so mere liye no chance... he pouted...
Zoya: app k chance ka bhi kuch karti hoon... she pecked his lips...
AsYa came back at SM... Zoya took Aman from Asma's room and came in their room... Aman was sleeping peacefully... she placed him on bed and covered him... she went to change in her nighty... when she came back she stopped in her tracks... Asad was in the middle of the bed and Aman was on his left side... Asad smirked at her and patted his right side... Zoya came and sat on his right side...
Zoya: yeh sab kya hai???
Asad: sshhh... Aman is sleeping...
Zoya: yeh kya hai... she whispered...
Asad: kyun main apni biwi ke sath nahi so sakta kya... he said pulling her on him...
Zoya: Asad behave...
Asad: kya behave... haq hai mera...
Zoya: par mjhy Aman k sath sony ki aadat hai...
Asad got up from bed... Zoya thought that he got angry... she immediately grabbed his hand...
Zoya: kahan ja rahy hain app???
Asad: kahi bhi nahi... tum Aman k sath sona chahti ho bas tumhy jaga dy raha tha... ab aagy jao gi ya main sari raat khara rahon...
Zoya: mjhy laga apko shayad acha nahi laga or app... she shifted at Aman's side... Asad came to her right and lied besides her...
Asad: mjhy apki koi bhi bat buri nahi lagti... or apko aisy guilty feel karny ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... he said coming closer to her...
Zoya: app etna pass kyun aa rahy hain...
Asad: aap ne raat mjhy nechy gira dia to...
Zoya: apki tarha nahi hoon... pata hai app ne mjhy kitni zor se nechy giraya tha...
Asad was shocked by hearing this... he was starring at her in disbelief... some time ago, she was cursing herself for not remembering her past but now she was telling him their past incidents...
Zoya: kya hua... she said turning towards him...
Asad: you remembered your first day at KV... mene apko bed se nechy giraya tha...
Zoya: really... she said excitedly...
Asad: hmm... you will remember the entire past one day... he kissed her forehead and wished her good night...
Zoya was sleeping with Aman... Asad hugged her from behind... he was roamimg his hand on her waist... she placed her hand on his hand... AsYa slept peacefully that night...
Precap: AsYa Moments...
AsYa n Aman in Mumbai...




Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes plzzz...
hit like n leave ur replies...
next update till 50+ likes...
Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
res 4 arzoo, jas, aroo, amu, nilu, abi, anopama, asif, mayur, sasir, cinderella, yumi, hena
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
mera res😃
unres

lovely lovely updt Ashi😃
Zoe wanted 2 do job 4 money but Asad told her jo mera hai woh tera hai😉
Asya & Aman ke tickling aur kiss scenes were funny 😆
Zoya's B'day was celebrated &they went 2 Kv 2 spend alone time😳
they kissed Zoya was getting emotional cuz she want 2 remember everything😭
d end scene of them sleeping 2gather
slowly slowly she's accepting Asad😉
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: jas91

mera res😃

Ashi sep pe bhi karna hai kya😕

wahan new pg hai already if u want😉


chal tu ja main aram se unres krungi 😉
or haan kal os dalna hai time pe aa jana...
u should be at 1st place 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Ashii where r u and when r going to update waiting dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
res..
unres...
lovely update aashii...
so zoya is dheere dheere getting adapted to her present but she really wants to remember her past...
hope she gets her memory back someday soon...
n aman... sweet asya moments with aman...loved reading those...
the asya talks there were awesome
plz continue soon...
Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Awesome update
Asya relation is improving
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Beautiful update Aashii..
Loved how Asad and Zoya are getting closer with each update.
And aww they kissed.
The tickling scene was so lovely.
So was the bed scene at night.
Update soon
Anee
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: ashiii333

res 4 arzoo, jas, aroo, amu, nilu, abi, anopama, asif, mayur, sasir, cinderella, yumi, hena


Salaam Ashiii...
Thanx for the Res' and P.M...
So Zoya is still little hesitant...about accepting her new surroundings...and i think...but it is genuine...because she lived alone for so many days and has that independent mindset...but atlast near ending she actually accepted Asad...as her own and that was a very good step towards their togetherness and their love...
Zoya was also back to her chirpy self in that tickling part...that was like breaking the ice part between ASYA...Aman is actually acting as cupid for them..

Well Asad was very patient and calm...because he know Zoya will take her own time to adjust herself in his life and be back to his old Zoya Asad ahmed khan...that even showed in bedroom scene when he didn't got angry...when she wanted To sleep with Aman...but it feels like a sacrifice to me...
But when they were talking about being together always...are you indicating at something...?

Pretty good and well written part..
Continue soon..
# Nice song...apt for the situation..
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Wow awesome part
Very sweet asya and aman moments loved it
Finally zoya is starting to remember her memory
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon

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