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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Love it ashii

So even I will sleep to wait for this night ahead
I can't wait to say it is morning Asad 😳
So all night
Love Asad surprise by coming early with sexy nightwear
Oh dilshad happy for her son
Oh aman is so cute no body loves me it is aman and mama time 😆
So Asad got zoya love and she is ready to join with him in all ways
So she fell in love with him thrice nice
Even I would fall for him
Can't wait to see zoya surprise for the night
Continue soon



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

Its was a lovely update...
Asya n aman ...cutest sight to watch
Continu soon


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Congrats on your new thread... 👏 👏


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Posted: 10 years ago

thank u so much dear 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: H.e.n.a

Loved it so much...

Naughty wala update is on the way...excited!!
So they realized the importance of each other n Zoya is ready to go ahead in their relationship..nicely written...

Thnks for the res n update..

Sorry main late hoon..


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago
Adhoori Mohabbat


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Part 25:

In Evening, Asad woke up and came downstairs to meet everyone... he spent a quality time with his family... Zoya was missing from there and Asad knew the reason very well... he came in their room and found a note on the bed...

Meet me at KV in 1 hour...
Your's Mrs. Khan...
Asad smiled at the noted and kissed it... she called herself Mrs. Khan and he was happy for their growing relation... Asad took bath and wear out suit as always... he was standing in front of dressing table when suddenly he removed his jacket... now he was wearing a white shirt with grey waist coat and matching pants looking handsome as ever... he wanted to look good for her...
On the other hand, Zoya had decorated Asad's room with candles... she was clad in a yellow n green sarree obviously gifted by Asad... all the preparations were done and Zoya was applying some kohl when she heard the horn of Asad's SUV... she was nervous and excited at the same time... she checked herself in the mirror and ran to open the door...
Asad was standing with a bunch of red roses when she opened the door... his heart skipped a beat when he found her dressed in a beautiful sarree... Zoya too looked at her man with pure love...
Asad: Mrs. Khan I know mera charm boht effective hai but you can drool over me inside also... he said with a wink...
Zoya: you don't need an invitation Asad... well yeh roses... she said letting him in...
Asad: roses haan wo aaty waqt mene ly liye achy hain na...
Zoya: hmm... she said sadly... she thought he had bought roses for her...
Asad: kya hmm... isn't it obvious yeh roses kiss k liye hain... he said cheering her up...
Zoya: matlab yeh mere liye hain...
Asad: nahi Aman k liye hain...
Zoya: so mean Mr. Khan... I don't believe that I fell in love with such an unromantic that too for 3 times... poor me... she said dramatically...
Asad: KV aaty hi wapis se Zoya vali baty start haina... but I like my mature Zoya... wesy I love my naughty Zoya also... he said coming from behind while she was smelling the fresh fragrance...
Zoya: but mjhy to ek hi type k Mr. Asad Ahmad Khan miley... she said to tease him and turned but when she found him closer to her, her heart speed up and she felt blood rush to her cheeks...
Asad: ohh... but ab kuch nahi ho sakta Mrs. Khan apko aisy hi kaam chalana hoga... he said cupping her cheek...
Zoya: aisa kya... okay I will manage... acha ab app aankhen band kejieye app k liye surprise hai...
Asad: irada kya hai Mrs. Khan... he closed his eyes and asked naughtily...
Zoya: app aaiye to... she placed her hand on his eyes and took him to their room... she opened the door and led him inside... and removed her hand from his eyes and told him to open his eyes...


Asad opened his eyes and looked for his surprise but when he registered the decorations his eyes brimmed with tears and he turned from her to avoid his tears...
Zoya: yeh sab wesa hi hai na Asad... she said coming to her and placed a hand on his shoulder...
Asad: haan par apko kesy... he said surprisingly...
Zoya: mjhy Najma ne btaya tha... lekin main app se aun'na chahti hoon... she said wiping his tears...
Asad: I can't Zoya... I don't want to relive those moments... I can't... he broke out in tears and hugged her...
Zoya hugged him back and roamed her hand on his back to sooth his pain... she broke the hug wiped his fresh tears...
Zoya: Asad mjhy wo sab jan'na hai jo app ne kisi ko nahi btaya... I want to know the truth Asad...
Asad: you remember Zoya I told you k jis din hamara Valima tha ussi din hum... hum dono ka jhadga hua tha... lekin...
Zoya: I remember Asad app ne mjhy sab btaya tha... but main wo sab jan'na chahti hoon jo app ne hum dono k liye plan kiya tha... Asad wo din hmary haq main behter nahi tha par app ne jo kuch plan kiya tha wo btaiye... she said holding out his hand...
Asad: that... that night was the best night of our life Zoya... or subha mene app se kaha tha k I have to go for a meeting but no that was a lie... I came here Zoya... I decorated our room like you decorated today... I wanted to make our Valima and the coming night special for you... but when I returned back to SM sab kuch badal gaya Zoya... sab khatam ho gya tha... app k jaaney k bad main yaha aya tha or...
Zoya: or app ne sara gussa room pe nikal dia...
Asad: ji... lekin apko kesy pata...
Zoya: Najma yahan ayi thi kuch in bad or us ne room ki halat dekhi thi... kuch din pehly us ne mjhy btaya so I thought k jahan se sab khatam hua tha kyun na vahi se dobara shuru kiya jaye...
Asad: ek bat kahon... he said coming closer to her...
Zoya: ji... sha said quizzically...
Asad: mjhy mera pagal Zoya wapis chahieye... yeh mature or etni understanding Zoya samajh nahi aati...
Zoya: okay fine... jaiye app yahan se or meri memory aany ka wait kejieye...
Zoya faked anger and turned to go... she was near the door when she heard him crying... she turned and cursed herself for doing this to me...
Asad: don't leave me Zoya... I can't tolerate this again... plzzz don't leave me...

Mujhe Pyaar Do Mujhe Pyaar Do
Dil Beqaraar Hai, Pyaar Do
Barson Kiyaa Hai Maine Intezaar
Mujhe Pyaar Do Mujhe Pyaar Do
Zoya ran to him and hugged him tightly... Asad too pulled her closer and cried his heart out...

Ye Aashiqui Tujhse Shuru Tujhpe Khatam
Ye Shaayari Tujhse Shuru Tujhpe Khatam
Tere Liye Hi Saansein Mili Hain
Tere Liye Hi Milaa Hai Janam
Yeh Zindagii Tujhse Shuru Tujhpe Khatam
Ye Aashiqui Tujhse Shuru Tujhpe Khatam
Zoya pulled back a little and kissed away his tears... Asad cupped her cheek and dropped a kiss on her forehead...

Mujhe Pyaar Do Mujhe Pyaar Do
Dil Beqaraar Hai, Pyaar Do
Barson Kiyaa Hai Maine Intezaar
Mujhe Pyaar Do Mujhe Pyaar Do
Asad kissed on her forehead, on eyes, on nose and on cheeks turn by turn... he was about to claim her lips when she turned away shyly... Asad came behind her and hugged him... both remained in the same position for a while... Asad showed her his hand where the letter "Z" was engraved on his palm from a long time...

Tum Mere Haathon Mein Prem Lakeer Jaisi Ho
Main Deevaanaa Raanjhaa, Tum Heer Jaisi Ho
Tum Aisi Baaton Se Beqaraar Karte Ho
Mere Sabr Kaa Aanchal Taar-Taar Karte Ho
Zoya turned and kissed his palm... she tuned to go when Asad held her pallu and stops her...

Jaao Na Is Tarah Baanhon Se Chhoot Ke
Chaahoongi Main Tumhein Ab Sanam Toot Ke
Teri Vafaa Ke Badle Mile To, Manzoor Hai Har Sita..M

Zoya came back to him and pecked his lips...

Ye Mausiki Tujhse Shuru Tujhpe Khatam

Asad took her in his arms and made his way towards bed...

Ye Aashiqui Tujhse Shuru Tujhpe Khatam
Asad laid her down on the bed and came on top of her...

Mujhe Pyaar Do Mujhe Pyaar Do
Dil Beqaraar Hai, Pyaar Do
Barson Kiyaa Hai Maine Intezaar
Mujhe Pyaar Do Mujhe Pyaar Do
AsYa showed their love to each other on that night after 6 long years... Zoya drifted to sleep while hugging him... Asad had placed a secure arm on her waist... both were satisfied and happy...
After sometime, Zoya wake up and found him awake... she checked the time and looked at him again... he wasn't asleep at all...
Zoya: Asad app soye nahi...
Asad: nahi Zoya... I can't... I m scarred if...
Zoya: if we got separated again... she said cupping his cheek...
Asad: I m scarred Zoya... he said turning to her side...
Zoya: kuch nahi hoga Asad... we are together... forever n ever... she said hugging him...
Asad: In Sha Allah... he said pulling her closer...
Zoya: Asad app khush hain na... she said looking straight in her eyes...
Asad: I can't tell you Zoya how much happy I m thank you Zoya... thank you for giving me a chance... he said pecking her lips...
Zoya: Asad agar us din Aman hospital mai nahi hota to app mjhy sach nahi bolty haina... she said suddenly remembering their truth revealing talk...
Asad: you were Ayesha at that time... remember...
Zoya: phir bhi Asad...
Asad: nahi... main nahi btata... mene etna arsa tumhara intezar kiya or tumhy bta kar main nahi chahta tha k mjhy phir se naumeedi ka samna karna pary...
Zoya: don't think about that Asad... I m here now... she said wiping his tear...
Asad: you know what Zoya ghar main sabko lagta tha I forgot you but I can't imagine to forget you... you are my last breath Zoya and I can't let you go... I will die if I even...
Zoya: don't you dare to utter such words... I and Aman need you with us samjhy app...
Asad: sorry Mrs. Khan...
Zoya: apki sorry nahi chahieye... she turned to the other side...
Asad: but I need you Zoya... he whispered in her ear and hugged her...
Zoya: no...
Asad: plzzz...
Zoya: I said no... stop disturbing me... I want to sleep for a while...
Asad sighed in disappointment and came back to his side of bed... Zoya felt his unshed tears and turned back to his side...
Har Pal Tanhaai Mein Tumhein Yaad Kartaa Thaa
Apni Sooni Duniyaa Main Aabaad Kartaa Thaa

Zoya came on top of him and touched their noses...

Main Bhi To Honthon Se Paighaam Likhti Thi
Kore Se Kaagaz Pe Teraa Naam Likhti Thi
Asad smiled at her and pecked her lips...

Dard Ke Vo Sabhi Sakht Mausam Gaye
Ham Mile To Lagaa Pal Yahin Tham Gaye
Zoya creased his face and kissed his dimples...

Ab Na Judaa Hon Sapne Hamaare
Jab Tak Rahe Dam Mein Dam
Asad pulled her closer and hugged her tightly...
Ye Bekhudi Tujhse Shuru Tujhpe Khatam
Ye Aashiqi Tujhse Shuru Tujhpe Khatam

Zoya came back to her side and held his hand out for Asad...

Mujhe Pyaar Do Mujhe Pyaar Do
Dil Beqaraar Hai, Pyaar Do
Barson Kiyaa Hai Maine Intezaar
Mujhe Pyaar Do Mujhe Pyaar Do
Ye Aashiqui Tujhse Shuru Tujhpe Khatam
Asad came on top of her and pulled up the quilt over them...

Mujhe Pyaar Do Mujhe Pyaar Do
Dil Beqaraar Hai, Pyaar Do
Barson Kiyaa Hai Maine Intezaar
Mujhe Pyaar Do Mujhe Pyaar Do
Asad woke up around 7'o clock and smiled at her sleeping beauty... he kissed her and left for the washroom... he came back wearing out track suit and came back to his wife... he touched her cheeks with his wet hair... she frowned in sleep... Asad wanted to wake her up so he started kissing her jaw line... Zoya opened her eyes and adjusted to the light... she realized her extra romantic hubby's antics and smacked his hands away that were around her waist...
Asad: what was that???
Zoya: for waking me up...
Asad: haan to... I m up na...
Zoya: come on Asad I just slept 2 hours ago... spare me...
Asad: I m missing Aman... he stated...
Zoya: you are impossible... Aman yahan hota to bhi problem hoti or nahi hai to bhi problem hai... she said sitting up...
Asad: ab kya karon he is my only friend... I miss him Zoya...
Zoya: mere liye kya hukam hai... ghar chalen kya... she said getting his point...
Asad: nahi you wore out something... I just go and bring Aman... what's say???
Zoya: okay... she said buttoning up the top two buttons of his shirt which she wore after their love making...
Asad: I like you in my cloths only... but for Aman you have to change...
Zoya: I know Asad... you go na...
Asad: you go to the washroom na... I will after you...
Zoya: I can't go in front of you... I m wearing just a shirt...
Asad: so what...
Zoya: Asad...
Asad: kya Asad... you are shying from me...
Zoya: Ya Allah... kahan phass gayi... okay fine... you stay here... main shower lekar aati hoon...
Zoya was about to enter in washroom when Asad came from behind and hugged her...
Zoya: now what...
Asad: do you prefer a company wifey... he whispered in her ear naughtily...
Zoya: no way Asad... She freed her seld and ran to washroom...
Asad: that was so rude Mrs. Khan...
Zoya: everything is fair in love n war Mr. Khan... be back soon... love you... she shouted from the washroom...
Asad: love you too... I will be back in a while...
Asad left for SM while Zoya got ready and prepared the breakfast for them...
Precap: AsYa n Aman... History repeats itself...


Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes...
hit like n leave ur replies...
Ashii...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 4 arzoo, jas, afu, aroo, amu, abi, asif, mayur, anopama, nilu, niya, jillo, bf (sara), cinderellaa, hena, yumi, yashi, aish, ridhi, mags...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res...
unres...
loved the update aashii...
akhir tune AsYa ko alone tym de hi diya...
asad is so insecure bcz of the past... zoya k jane k naam se hi he begins to cry!!!
aman ko missing n going to get him to KV!!!
finally past left behind ... should i say 'for now' bcz precap says history repeats itself 😔
continue soon ashii...
Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
UnRes...😉
Salaam Ashiii... 😊
Thanx for the P.M & Res'... 😳
Well a well written & nice update... 👏
ASYA reliving their past moments...again after 6 long years...with some tears...and preparing , planning & promising for many more years... 😆
Asad was more emotional in this part...i guess the fear is always their in the back of his mind...😕
But i still didn't got the song you used in this update...from where you took this..😳
Zoya was very good here...😊
Precap😲...
Continue soon...😛
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago

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