Okay. I am NOT going to RES.😆
Straight away going to comment. I keep RESsing everywhere and never UNRES. And it irks me than it couild irk anyone else.
Btw, dearie... may I know your name?😊
My name is Mahwash, but you can call me Mahuu, as most of the Forum does. 😳
Well. I don't know whether I commented earlier but I'll start all over again.
I really like this story. I find it very mellow, very calming and serene if that's possible.. Especially Sanam's POV and all... No "NAHIII" Drama thankfully. xD
Aww, first of all thank you for such a long review. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and the fact that you had a few questions. I'll try my best to answer them and do tell me if it makes sense to you afterwards.
For the last two or three updates, since you started this blind date thing, I haven't really got the point actually. The VERY first time Aahil went on Rehan's insistence I thought it would be Sanam but turned out to be someone else. So it happened quite a few times. Why is Rehan or was doing this? Was it preparing the battleground when he meets Sanam or simply? O.o
I FIND IMAAN DAMN CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chooo Chweet she is... Wear the black shirt with white buttons it seems... Smarty Rehan... LOL
Kids ALWAYS work don't they? LOL
Another thing... When Aahil went out on dates earlier, why didn't he say no to Rehan like properly? Without asking him the reason as to this sudden hook up exercise?
And Aahil went on dates for the heck of it right, not to go find a Mom for Imaan or did he?
So let's start from the beginning. Thank you so much for the overly kind words. I always had the idea that I would start the story with a touch of calmness. But soon we'll get more SaHil scenes - I promise!
Coming back on the previous update: The reason for Aahil attending the dates was only because of Rehaan telling him to do so. Like you said, he only went there for the "heck of it." Also for the fact that Aahil was kind of hoping he would find Sanam there - which he eventually did at the end.
Rehaan was just slowly getting him ready for the final date with Sanam, or else his dear brother wouldn't agree because he would keep thinking about Sanam and what she wanted. Hmm, does that makes sense?
You have no idea how much I enjoy writing Imaan. She is such a cute lil' kid and I really adore writing the father-daughter bond. <3
So why was he so upset about the daughter thing? You cannot NOT go on a blind date with someone who has a daughter... Not that you are gonna marry the dude the same day... *confused*
Coming back to this update, I found it SHORT!!!!!! Why!!!! Me demands. :P😡😛
I promise you I will keep the upcoming updates longer! I know they are short but I will try to work on it, okay? <3
So Aahil and Sanam go on a date or meet on a date. Whatever that means... I don't know myself. What do I ever know?
Sanam didn't walk away. I understood why Aahil did not walk away. He wanted to talk and he wanted to go home with a filled tummy not ditchers again.
Why not Sanam? She feels something for Aahil and because she still does, she SHOULD get away right?😲
Why are there so many stony silences?😆
Darling, this story loves stony silences LOL! 😆
There is one thing I must add though. You are a brilliant writer coz the previous one, both Aahil and Sanam were headstrong and strong in a different way and always stood at odds and it was, well, they exuded power!
This one is completely the opposite till now... Both are calm, and well, the story is moving slowly albeit steadily.😃
I know of people who write a lot but the characterization is essentially the same since it's the same writer. But in your case, it is polar opposites. It is amazing how you can do that.👏
Thank you so much for noticing the differences between my stories. Wow, you sure are an awesome reader! You are really making me blush. *Sends love across the net.* ❤️☺️
Coming to the end of it, she finally didn't want to talk and she left Aahil stranded yet again😆
The Imaan interaction was cute. When Sanam said, women would fall in love with her...😳
Don't mind the questions sweets... I am kinda disoriented.. I read all the updates but didn't have time to comment so my doubts remain not clarified. LOVED IT!!!!!
Keep these loving reviews coming and feel free to leave questions, because it just gives me the idea that I might not have written it in a certain way. Thank you for pointing it out for me.
I hope the update makes sense now. 😳
Thanks for the PM
Love❤️
Naj
