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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#401

Those who can read it post it again

Can;t read still

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123465

@123465

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#402

Unres...

Loved this chapter!

Asad shouldn't have hurt Zoya like that 😔

Thank god Ayaan stopped Zoya from going!

AsYa dance was really awesome!

Continue soon and thanks for the PM...

- Sushma

Edited by -Sushma- - 10 years ago

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: Chahanya
Those who can read it post it again
Can;t read still

I'll do it in some time...waiting for the mods to fix it

if they don't then i'll re-post it

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#404

res...

unres...

asya ka shock n nok jhok was good...

but asad unknowingly zoya ko hurt kiya...

my poor asya 😭😭😭

zoya was going 😲

thank God ayan stopped her...

song was M.A 😳

both r suffering...

hope they realize their actual feelings...

cont soon...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
NOTE

Heya Guys and Gals...😃

Glad to see me back!?😳

My exams are over and I am back again...and I won't let you wait anymore for the update.
We, that's aditi n me, have started working on the update.

I hope you'll be patient for a little while more...

Update may come upto this weekend...fingers-crossed!!😆

~SRASHTI ❤️

hi srashti
me bata nahi sakti me kitna khush hu tumhe dekhke
welcomeback dear

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#406

res
unres

wow amazing story srashti
and beautiful update loved it so much
first ASYA cute fight and zoya dailog agar mujhe pata hota ki aap aap hai toh me aapse hargiz nikah nahi karti
and caring asad i love it
ASYA dance was awesome
mere dono bache kitne pyaare lag rahe hai sooo cute
and last little zoya and dadi scene is very cute
really beautiful story
good job
i love u

Edited by PINky733 - 10 years ago

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#407

Hello Srashti & Aditi..😊😛
Well this was a Very Good , Wonderfully written update 👏 ⭐️
I don't appreciate what Asad did on their first night though whom so ever have started it...😡
The fight led to almost a big marriage failure in a night itself..both with each other words and actions AsYa were forced to remember bitter past memories...
Atleast Ayaan saved the Day' and their Marriage* for the time being.. 😕
Loved the song and the emotions going on between AsYa throughout that dance😳
Interesting and Brilliant comeback part..👏
Continue soonish... 😃

Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#408

mine

unres

superb updt Adu Srash😃

Asya ki ho gayi fight what a start😆

Zoe decided 2 move out but Ayaan ne Asad ka past btaya

& after meeting wid Dillu she got more confused if she should leave

their walima dance & song was amazing

in d end after a little flashback from her childhood Zoe decided 2 stay

good decision girl this will b worth it😉

but u 2 miss writers plz I want an apology from Asad 4 shouting at Zoe han Thanku bhi 4 still staying making his Ammi happy😃

cholo TC

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#409

Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Ending Scene Was Heart - Touching...⭐️

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#410

It's a beautiful one...and the song...i still remember it from the show...and both of them decide to move on with the relationship for the sake of their families...the true love...both can sacrifice anything for those who love them...i always loved such a beautiful relationship and people who aren't selfish ...adorable couple and I am sure that the story is about them identifying each other their true self and worth