Kal ho na ho (AsYa TS) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Aditi.

Welcome to the forum

Its a great effort if you are writing first and being a writer i can understand it very well.

Your first try is appreciabble. Please update soon

>Aditi


Thank you dear!😳
Its a pleasure that you liked it. 😃
Will update ASAP.
😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
celena wow...awsm yaar...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Cindrella3

Beautifully penned! It was so emotional. Please don't make Zoya die. I want a happily ever after for them.You're a brilliant writer. Do write more dear...


Thank You.😳
Well, i can't assure you about a happy ending.🤔 You know, its not like always everything has to end on a happy note😔. Sometimes, we have to accept the bitter truths of our lives.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Ami34

Welcome to the forum!!!🤗

Now time for your story!!!😊

Awesome!!!👏

That was sooo emotional!!!😭

I mean this really happens to some people!!!😔

I was crying while reading it!!!

Continue soon!!!!⭐️

PM me!!!😃


Thanks for the warm welcome yaara!!🤗
I'm glad that you liked the first part.😳
Yes, this seriously happens to some people😔 and the saddest part is it always isn't a "happily-ever-after". The harsh realities of the life...one has to accept them.
Will update ASAP!😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: p_s05

🥺


I literally teared when he began to sing, heartbreakingly beautiful, the song choice was amazing. Anticipate the next part.


P.S You should write more on AsYa!


P.S.S This was very poignant and extremely palpable.


Even thinking about Asad's situation and what he must be going through breaks me 🥺every time i try to imagine😭. Humdard i felt was more or less perfect for this situation...😊
Yep will surely write more on AsYa. Actually I've many a times got ideas but wasn't sure to post or not (homeground nahin hai na😆).
Will update soonish!😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: -ABI-



Agreed!
you should definitly write more on AsYa(kabhi)😉


Celu(That's what my friends call me) will definitely write more on AsYa. 😳
P.S. For me it has always been
AsYa = KaBhi and nothing else.😃...Without KaBhi...there's no AsYa.😡

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Andy_Loves_ASYA

Hey! thanks so much for PMing me!
Welcome!😊

I loved this story honestly i cried! reading this in school secretly. 😆😆😉
your a great writer!
Thank you so much!!🤗 And honestly, me too cried when i first got thinking about this story while listening Kal ho na ho song. 😭


I really love stories like this! 😳😳
And me too!! I like emotional and heart breaking stories more that the other ones...😳

It was emotional and sad and the technique you used of not letting us know the details of zoyas reason to have only 4 months, is really an amazing one! Proves your wirting skillss!
Ayaat is a beautiful name by the way!
Thank you shoo much dearie!!! Actually i even didn't mention the acurate medical disorder which she has coz I myself ain't sure of the disease...🤔😆 I find Ayaat name really very cute!!!

And this story is a really beautiful one ❤️
Hope you continue writing dear! 😳😳😊
thnx for the pm. continue to pm me :)
Will update the next part ASAP. and yes will PM you too!😃

Love___Andy


@bold replied😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankiecool

i m still crying
oh god how much pain
beautifully penned down!


Even i was crying bitterly while listening kal ho na ho and imagining what these two might be going through...
when life seems the most blissful blessing very, destiny plays a cruel game turning the same bliss into a curse...😭
Thank you dear or appreciating!😊


Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome update

update next part soon

Tfs for pm 👍🏼


Thanks Chitru..😊
Will update soonish!😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: ashiii333

u made me cry...

well update is wonderful...
asya in pain...
can't wait to read more...
welcome on QH forum...
continue soon...
do pm me...


😊
Thank you for liking it...😃
Thanks for the warm welcome too!😳
Will update soonish!😃


Originally posted by: sasir

no words to explain

awesome
beautifully written
too emotional
u made me cry literally
plz update soon


I'm glad that you like the first part...😳
Will update ASAP!😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

U made me cry

It was really beautiful
Update soon!


Thank you shooo much dear!😃
Will update ASAP!😳


Originally posted by: jas91

I m crying

very emotional story
I personally don't like heartbreaking stories
but u did amazing job dear
welcome 2 forum
& thanx 4 PM😊


Thanks buddy!!😃
I like emotional and heart breaking ones more😊...i know its strange😆
It's okay coz its quite natural...imagining AsYa in pain!😭😭
Thanks for the warm waala welcome..😳

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