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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ashiii333

amazing...

wonderful...
enjoyed it...
zoe is hiding her pain...
asad so mean,,,
thnxxx for pm...
cont soon...
do pm me...



thanks!!! He will be nice soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sasir

nice

hope asad will accept zoya n their baby soon



Thanks he will soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Heyyy its super damn awesome...

Great going... Expecting this from a sad..quite natural...

Liked rehaans entry...hope he is a nice guy...
N asad realize what he should do...

Lovely...

Thanks for the pm...

Plz do continue soon... Will be waiting...




Thankss! Rehan is a nice don't worry 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Asad felt jealous when he saw her with rehan
Hope he will accept her soon
Thanks for pm



Thanks he will!! 😊
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Thanks!! 😊
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Thankss!! Will do 😊
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Originally posted by: tinunaik2069

Awesome update

So asad is jealous
Looking forward to next part



Thanks! yes he is and will update soon 😊
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Thank youu! 😊
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Chapter 4

Asad was furious seeing Zoya friendly with another guy, he couldn't see it, If she can be friends and have fun with boys why cant he, like before. He saw Tanveer standing near the stairs talking to her friends; he came near her and stood right in front of her where Zoya could see them. He said "Hey Tanveer, what are you doing next weekend, it's the homecoming dance would you like to be my date?" She looked up and saw Asad standing their smiling, She looked up and said "Sure baby, ill be waiting, come by early so we could a little more, you know what I mean?" and winked at him. Zoya was talking to Rehan and she heard Tanveer's annoying voice and saw her talking to Asad, she was curious to know what they were talking about because they were holding hands and smiling at each other. Asad looked towards zoya and saw her staring at their hands, he was smiling inwardly, and his plan was working because he could see a hint of jealousy in zoya eyes.

Couple of days later, Zoya and Rehan had become good friends. Rehan had class with Zoya and he sat next to her. Even thought he didn't know her well enough he wanted to get to know her more so he asked "Hey, the homecoming dance is this weekend would like to come with me." Zoya looked at him and smile showing her dimples; She nodded her head in a yes. She liked his attention towards her, because she wasn't getting any from her parents because they were having their problems, and her friends were girls, she wanted a guy friend so she can feel relax and not care about girly stuff. She told him "Pick me up at 7" he smiled and said "Sure".

It was the day of homecoming dance, Zoya was getting ready, she wore a Champaign color dress that came to her knees, she put on mascara and eyeliner which made her eyes dark and visible. She looked outside and saw a limo standing in front of her house, and Rehan coming out of it. She went downstairs and looked at herself in the mirror, and the doorbell rang. Her mom came by, and kissed her forehead "Zoya darling you're looking beautiful." The bell rang again and she went to open the door and saw Rehan standing in a white and black tux.

Asad was living alone in his apartment that was above his work. He was putting on his cologne when he heard someone knocking on his door. He opened the door and saw his friends standing there all dressed up. "Why are you guys here" "Oh come on man, tonight is homecoming and we are going to go together." Asad let out a laugh, "oops I forgot, I'm taking Tanveer to the dance so I have to go and get her." Ayaan looked at him and said "Come on, Tanveer, she is so annoying, she clings on to everyone. How can you take her to the dance, there are so many other girls you can take." Asad mind went to Zoya, he wished that he could have taken her to the dance, but she was to busy with her "boyfriend". "It nothing guys, trust me I have no feeling for her, I'm just using her to make someone jealousy." Ayaan and Imraan mouth were hung open, he let out a chuckle "I will tell you guys everything after tonight."

He walked in to the dance with his friends and Tanveer, who had her arms wrapped around his arms, and first thing he saw was Zoya in someone else arm; he fisted his hands and his eyes getting dark. He looked at her and saw her smiling and swaying along with him. He asked, "Who is he, the one who dancing with the girl in the Champaign dress." Imran said "Oh he is Rehan, he has been hanging a lot with her lately." He calmed himself down, and then took Tanveer to the dance floor and he took her right next to where Zoya and Rehan were dancing, Zoya saw them holding each other closely, she was feeling sad, she dint know why, but she wanted to be in his arm right now, and dancing with him. Asad saw her expression change and he told Tanveer "Hey Tanveer can you go and get me a drink." "Yeah sure ill be right back babe." He walked towards Zoya and Rehan and just than Rehan pulled Zoya close to him, they were chest to chest and rehan hands were on her waist and that was it for Asad, he had been ignoring this feeling inside of him for quite some time and seeing her having fun with another guy, he got angry. He saw Rehan saying something to Zoya and started moving towards the food table and he went to Zoya.

Zoya was going to go get something, but she felt a tug on her hand and she turned around and saw Asad looking at her, she gulped looking at his eyes, which showed anger. She said, "Let me go" "Why should I, so you can go back to your boyfriend." She looked at him wide eyed "you think he is my boyfriend? Well no we are just friends, I'm not like you that plays around with girls feeling and then leave them." That was it for Asad he couldn't take this insult from zoya because of her he had kept distance from girls; he took her by her waist pulled her close and kissed her on her lips. Zoya was shocked to respond, he was fierce so she could stop from kissing him back. Zoya started nibbling on his upper lip while he was nibbling on her lower lip. He bit her lip that made her gasp and Asad took the opportunity and pushed his tongue inside and starting exploring her mouth. Zoya was the first one to break from the kiss. She looked up into his eyes and saw him looking at her with care. He caressed her face, and said, "I'm sorry for whatever I said to you couple of week ago, I was scared and nervous that I wont be able to take care of the baby, and trust me Zoya I have no feeling for Tanveer, I just used her to make you jelouse because I was getting jealous with you being with Rehan" Just then Rehan came and saw a guy cupping zoya's face, he went forward and said "Hey what you doing she is my date for tonight." Asad just glared at him "Your date, last time I checked with her, she came with you here as a friend and it was not a date, she is mine so stay away." Rehan got shattered he was hoping he had a chance with her but all went in vain. He looked up at zoya, and she nodded her head in a yes saying, that he was just a friend and nothing more. "I'm sorry Zoya, I didn't know you liked him." "I didn't either, when I saw him getting close with tanveer, I felt jelouse, I felt my world being destroyed." "I hope we can still be friends." Asad glared at him, and he gave a laugh I'm kidding man, chill"

Days passed by, Asad had finally told his friends about Zoya and the baby, at first they were shocked but they knew Asad had bad past, and this was the only way he can overcome his fears totally, and they knew Asad would be a better father than his dad was.

2 Months Later

Zoya woke up early in the morning feeling sick, She went out and try to eat something that would make her feel better. Zeenat was coming out of her room, and she saw zoya sitting down at breakfast nook eating something. She went towards her and sat down. Zeenat saw her face, and she was tired and saw her crying. She asked, "What happened Zoya, why are you crying?" "Mom, I am so sorry, but this wasn't my plan, and you know I'm not like this. Please forgive me." Crying her heart out Zeenat patted her back and told her to continue. "Mom, I'm pregnant." "Zoya are you out of your mind, are you in your senses?" Zoya was left stunned at her tone. "Who is responsible for this, you are not even married Zoya Farooqui" Zoya was just crying, Zeenat stood up and pointed towards her room "You go inside and start packing, and I don't want to hear anything from you." Zeenat was angry; she didn't know that her daughter could do something like this. Zoya just stood there quite, she didn't want to fight back with her mom, she went to her room, and shut the room behind her. She took out her cell and called Asad.

Asad woke up at the sound of his cell. He saw the caller ID and woke up. He picked up the call and heard Zoya crying. "Hey, what wrong is everything okay? Why are you crying?" He was worried and she spoke "Can you pick me in the morning, I told my mom about the baby, she is mad.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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res 4 me...
i m 1st
unres...

amazing update...
asya kissed... 😳
hayeee...
finally asad accepted his feelings...
so zoe coming in asad's house...
thnxxx for pm...
update soon...
do pm me...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago

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