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Originally posted by: MayurChan
UnRes.. 😉
Heyy Noe...😊
Well thanx alot for the P.M...😛
Is it the end ?😭...Like really , without an epilogue...😆 But surely it was a well deserved end to this high on emotions dealing with various personalitites of a individual story , though it was an unconventional ending to it but it was well timed... You know a few days back only i watched AISHA ( like finally... ) and was smiling seeing those scenes on T.V and then imaining and adjusting with your story ...😆Thank you very much. Yes, the end and sorry without an epilogue. And, I wanted to end it in unconventional manner. Zoya was an unconventional heroine. 😊I have loved hearing from people who watched the movie or read the book. I am happy and a bit touched that this story has found its own place in readers.😳
Well i do can dream about a proper epilogue ...can i ?😳
This was a brilliant and well written part... 👏 ⭐️
I was also curious what to expect next as you preveiously mentioned about the end...
So Zoya finally let her little ego down and asked Imran about the tips on Photography...even though the whole conversation was not priority at that time to her... 😆 i must say for the 2nd time i guess her matchmaking skills helped someone like really sorted them out... 😲 and it also fared well also...Tanver and Imran were somewhat united...😃Yes, she has skills but she never used them in right manner. That was Asad's major complaint. She worked bases on her whims and imagination. But, our dear girl has learned and her best friend-cum-lover is supporting her this time.
Asad for a change was Helping Zoya in her matchmaking and the whole setup he has to pull off was funny...😆Of course, ask Asad to act and it unnecessarily gets funny.😆
You have clearly and very smartly displayed and wrote the dilusion in which Zoya was...about her life , her future...and her marriage also...👏⭐️And how she came to know about the harsh and realties of life...about persons being snub and outright mean to her..Bravo...👏Thank you. I know for readers Zoya was an irritating character at times, but now I know why Miss Austen wrote Emma in this way. There is immense scope for the character and in turn immense scope for a writer.Tanveer !!! well sincerely it was pretty hard to imagine her as this dramatic , but after watching Shefali ( In AISHA ) i can so imagine relate to her character now... 😆Shefali was actually adorable. Plus, the actor was quite good.
I was actually giving a bit long attention to Asad throughout the chapt...i don't know why just wanted to read how he would be going through...all this events...and it was well potrayed by you... 👏 [:*]
The beach part was perfect buildup for an unusual proposal by Zoya to Asad...
# All and all a fantastic part...
Untill next time...continue soon...your other stories..
# And its a request , just think about an epilogue before starting on your other work..Thank you very much for being with this story. Hope that it continues to be so with the next story. Epilogue, sorry, I had no such plan and nothing of that sort is coming to me.
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