Asad-Zoya FF: Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes Thread III Last Chap Pg 52 - Page 39

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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE...👏

JUST LOVE IT...👍🏼

EVERY SCENE IS MIND-BLOWING...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update
luvd it
cont asap
thanx for d pm
cont asap
t.c...
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all.. M very very sorry fr commenting dis late dear, actually was busy vid exams n all
Back to story
I really can't think of a word dat wud do it any justice. It was dat GOOD 😊
Finally Zoya realised imraan to b a perfect partner for tanveer.. Happy happy
Haha Mr. Baig's n Amit Bansal's convo was too hilarious n asad in between was too good as well 😆
Best part.. Asad's dilemma in front of zeenat.. Loved it
And d most imp part.. Ur NOTE.. I guess fr me coz I was d 1 to ask dat 😉
N d proposal u really did dat.. Thank youuu sooo much.. Loved d unique proposal of a gal on knees 👍🏼
M so much in love vid both of dem.. Will really miss dis story a lottt 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
After she was given the news by Zoya, she had been angry at her. She had paced in her room, thrown things around, but all the drama had ended very soon. She had started crying and cursed her fate that nobody loved her. When tears dried up, she decided that she was going to become brave like those heroines in movies. She didn't need anyone by her side. She was not going to love anyone. Even if a man threw him at her feet, she wouldn't budge. She had made the decision and after washing her face had joined her aunt for lunch. Her resolution lasted till next day evening, when a romantic movie aired on TV. She got lost in it and started crying seeing the hero and heronice dancing in snow. She ended up eating a tub of ice cream and got bad cold. Actually, it did save her from her aunt's questions. Red and teary eyes, runny nose and love for bed didn't need any justificatio

^^^^^ this lines 🤣 i know we should all feel bad for tannu madam but really, imagine billi bitch's face and feeling pity, so not happening. i am taking pleasure in her broken heart😆

i missed quite a lot of chapters, will read them later and reply. thanks for PM.




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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww...I am in LOVE with AsYa...I can't think my love for Asad Ahmed Khan will ever cease, it will only increase...Especially after this...
Don't ever stop...I love the way you write, what you write...Amazing as always...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
26...

Dilshad reaction to asya... so cute...

well zoya be honest and tell tanveer... bad for good

asad teasing zoya... little hug

the dinner time... anwar teasing

and plan for imran and tanveer
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 26

Sorry, after long time I am able to reply to your comments, but reply I shall.

Originally posted by: Ankahee

RES 😎

If fluff was like this, then all spring mornings should be spent reading this sort of fluff. Such a lovely update and such an adorable couple. AsYa are completely, disarmingly charming in this one. It was a pleasure to read about them being together. The belonging is so entirely beguiling, specially the newness and oldness of them all coming in one big circle. 😳

Thank you very much. As I said, I loved writing this fluff and I don't like to write much fluff, but it seemed for this Asad and Zoya fluff suited so much. That is just too much fluff in one sentence. 😆

Absolutely loved how Zoe was full of joy and how Dilshad instinctively knew that something was afoot. And how it unfolded to her was so perfect, the fleeting, elusive thought of them together from once upon time suddenly took form and shape right in front of her. And then it all clicked together, all the pieces. ⭐️ And she knew that Anwar would be the one to check with first. She is truly attuned to all her loved ones so completely just as mothers do. I really like how this part was written Noe, a pleasure to read it. 👏 The best part is Zeenat saying that she needs to go change Mahek's diaper, nonchalantly without missing a beat Dilshad says in the upper bedroom, in midst of her finding out about AsYa. 😆 This is what makes it so readable. The relatability of it all. ⭐️

I can completely trust you to notice such things.😃 All in the flow of everyday life...that has always been the attempt.😳 Dilshaad is surrogate mom of everyone first. And, moms as everyone knows are multi-taskers 😃

Finally Zoe has to confront Tanveer, and with the whole truth, not the half unsaid ones. Tanveer is tenacious in holding on, and that can be a good thing many times, and yet the same tenacity can be draining too. Zoe has found out the hard way, and all her matchmaking enterprises have come back to leave a bite of distaste in the new truth that has come out. This was tough. She went through it and is now past it, like Asad said, let's look forward and think of what next. I like it how he teams up with her in subtle ways, right from Ghar to photography. The little things. And that last part of haan main bhi.😉 Them sharing their dinner, Anwar giving his best shot at annoying Zoe before everyone finds out, the terrace, just some of the things that makes us want to read this again.

Zoya and Tanveer had to turn ugly at some point of time and as you already know what happens in next chapter, it gets worse (in a way better) than that. Thoda sa Zoya-Tanveer ka show ka dynamics bhi lana tha...just thoda sa.

I am glad you liked Asad-Zoya moments. Yes, warring-sparring friends are now teaming up. There are changes. 😉


They will find a way to make it, they have always done it, and they will do this again. Looking forward to next chapter, it is getting closer to the end. 😒

And yes there is something about Dilshad as a mother and her relation with her children in QH, it begs to be returned to again and again. This part is truly cherished in many ways in your stories, even if she is not Asad's mother in this one, she still is in so many ways. 😳

Dilshaad as any character's mother will shine, but Asad and Dilshaad - that was a special bond. In next story too she is Zoya's mother. Now I will have to write a story where she is back where she belongs as Asad's mother.

Thank you for wonderful review. Sorry for the delay.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

26...

Dilshad reaction to asya... so cute...

well zoya be honest and tell tanveer... bad for good

asad teasing zoya... little hug

the dinner time... anwar teasing

and plan for imran and tanveer


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Thank you very much for reading and commenting. Well-summarized!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...adin...

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Aad zoya moments were best ,, promise me that you will write their after marriage life ..😒


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Glad that you liked their moments. Sorry, this story is to end even before they get married.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

aah!! Loved it too much Noe...

As I wrote before AsYa version of Emma impresses me in every way!!
I feel it is a refresh story not an adapted one!! So much like Asad and Zoya!!
Though it was a filler type update as you said but believe me this update is something I wanted to read from the time they had confessed.
The small gestures of Asad and Zoya with their changed relationship..wah wah wah!!!
I love how Dilshad realized it through her observation and how Anwar filled the news to her!! That was to good to read!
Well as for Tanveer issue, Zoya handled it too carefully, she asked forgiveness!
The office scenes and Asad's care! I just loved the you portrayed! Aah!! Already I am in love with AAK so much and your stories forced me to love him more!! I know I am blabbering!! but I LOVE ASAD AHMED KHAN!!
And in Asad's house!! Their life already entwined is not it showed that!! So love it!!!

okay! I watched Emma adaption series. The proposal scene I found in 1996 version not the BBC 2009 one. So I am posting the link of that particular proposal scene. If anyone interested to it.


Chapter 26

Thank you so much for appreciating this version of Emma. I am very happy with all the book-lovers who have been with this story. They mean a lot to me.

Glad that you liked Dilshaad and Anwar's part. Another two of my favorite characters to write.

Aah...love for AAK? Don't we all feel that. I can never get tired of saying this: He was a man...aah...gentleman in his own league. 😳

Thank you very much for lovely comments. And, also thanks for sharing the video. 😊

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