New ASYA OS: A Little Lost A Little Found - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Loved it!!!!!
Superb!!!!!!!
Loved it loved it loved it
!!!
Bolte bolte nahi thakne wali!!!!
I miss Old QH days!!!!
Asad speaking Zoya's takhiye kalaam!!
smacking his head !!!!
Dilshad and Zoya's bonding is amazing!!!!!
Ahh loved it!!!
Friendship !!!!!!!!
First step towards any relationship!!!!!!!
Loved it!!!!



Lol thank you thank you thank you... Me too bolte bolte nahi thakungi. You made me smile so so wide with your comment 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
it was such a beautiful story...
could u pls pls pls write a sequel to it...
and do pm me!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: p_s05

Retiring to bed with a big smile on my face.


😃


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Reserved!



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Unreserved!


"A little lost A little Found" - The little Found - Was magical!



"The strong fragrance of his cologne seemed to be reaching out for her, slowly engulfing her. She closed her eyes and took in another deep breath feeling her body relax, her stomach summersaulted and her heart did a funny flip flop."



This was so profound in context of love, yet not so because this is just the beginning of their journey.



"Is it better... Does it hurt now?"


I don't know why, maybe because I saw the picture recently but I imagined the expression on his face when he kneeled before her after breaking the musical memento to the quoted dialogue.


The sort of mechanical Q & A was endearing.



"Yes, I did. The same place you told me it could never be"



As brazen as Zoe was on the show, AsYa always kept little moments between themselves clandestine, sometimes even from Ammi too, this was one of those intimate ones and Zoe's explicit dialogue was a refreshing change. Though when she was searching for the earring with Dilshad I wanted them to find it together but it was her discovery to make alone.


Friends! 🤪 I guess that's a good place to start! 😆



Hey Prashni,

Hope you are well. Am sure everywhere you leave a comment all say the same... I JUST LOVE READING YOUR COMMENTS 😳


Title... I agree, the best I could get and all thanks to Sis Saima 😃


The way you notice little details and highlight your favorite parts... I love reading it.


Am glad you liked and enjoyed this os too 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

it was such a beautiful story...

could u pls pls pls write a sequel to it...
and do pm me!



Hey am glad you enjoyed it 😃. Sequel 😲. I will try , not promising 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
This was absolutely adorable!! You have to continue this!! Pleaseee! Lol (:
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful os...
loved it...
well i guess nothing at all was lost here...
it was all profitable fr both asad n zoya...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
choco..u literally made me cry...
now I miss ASYA terribly 😭 😭
from starting 2 d end it is so beautiful...

how she had said his name for the very first time, or rather the only time she had said it till now. "Asad". ... loved this moment in show.. only once she called him asad... y gul 😡 I always wanted her 2 call him as asad ..

pls do continue if possible... kyunki asad want 2 confess his love...
n do write like this on ASYA..

every minute emotion is beautifully described 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Nice OS
Zoya being zoya, hurt herself. Asad took care of her finger. Q&A from zoya to asad was nice. Finally they became friends. First step of relationship.
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you 😊

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