New ASYA OS: A Little Lost A Little Found - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Amazing work Choco
really loved it
Asya's convo was beautiful😃
U made me miss Asya😭
great job👏⭐️👏

My fvrt parts in d updt😊
the corners of his lips would curl up remembering how his name sounded on her lips when she had said it.
Aaj kal focus nahi hai tumahara kaam pe. You seem to be too distracted all the time. 😆
shouting out to his Ammi he told her he was leaving, making sure he was loud enough for everyone else too,😉
he felt was no less than a love struck teenagers "Allah miyan what's wrong with you Asad?"😲
"Hay!! kitni der se iss chand se chehre ko nahi dekha tha, saans hi nahi aa rahi thi"😆
Zoya, kya kar rahi hai, babbar sher ko pata chala naa, he will eat you alive and no one would know you ever exist...😆
Before she could realize what was happening she saw Asad scream her name and run towards her. And then she screamed. She found Asad by her side immediately holding her finger in his hand in a tight grip.."
"So do you know where my earring is?" Asad looked away feeling like a 5 year old who had been caught stealing chocolates from the fridge.😆


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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Tis is amazing...
Beautifully writen...
luv it...
fabulous...
thx fr the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Loved it!!!!!
Superb!!!!!!!
Loved it loved it loved it
!!!
Bolte bolte nahi thakne wali!!!!
I miss Old QH days!!!!
Asad speaking Zoya's takhiye kalaam!!
smacking his head !!!!
Dilshad and Zoya's bonding is amazing!!!!!
Ahh loved it!!!
Friendship !!!!!!!!
First step towards any relationship!!!!!!!
Loved it!!!!
Edited by AsyaManeet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: 1788shreya

Awesome os

Thanks for pm



Thank you Shreya. Glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

res!
Unres!
I Miss AsYa...Like anything right now!
OLD DAYS!
Beautifully written OS from one of the beautiful scenes.


Starting with a nightmare..
Zoya, the messy queen..
Asads' ah...woh..ammi..actually..
Dilshad and zoyas' bonding..
Asads' OCD
Zoya , the musibat magnet
Asad, her saviour and his concern for her..
They being friends, friends forever and Dilshads' reaction to it.
And finally, Hopes and promises of MUCH MORE.

WONDERFUL!
Loved it.



Aww I miss them too, all the time. Thank you so much for liking it 😊

Happy to see you liked all the details that I incorporated in this OS.

Thank you once again 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: -Sushma-

Unres... 😊

It was amazing!

Loved it a lot! ❤️

Kash, show mein bhi aisa hua hota...

I miss AsYa a lot right now... 😒

Thanks for the PM...




- Sushma



Thank you Sushma 😊. Yeah kaash show mein aisa kuch hua hora. I miss them too, all the time
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: jas91

Amazing work Choco
really loved it
Asya's convo was beautiful😃
U made me miss Asya😭
great job👏⭐️👏

My fvrt parts in d updt😊
the corners of his lips would curl up remembering how his name sounded on her lips when she had said it.
Aaj kal focus nahi hai tumahara kaam pe. You seem to be too distracted all the time. 😆
shouting out to his Ammi he told her he was leaving, making sure he was loud enough for everyone else too,😉
he felt was no less than a love struck teenagers "Allah miyan what's wrong with you Asad?"😲
"Hay!! kitni der se iss chand se chehre ko nahi dekha tha, saans hi nahi aa rahi thi"😆
Zoya, kya kar rahi hai, babbar sher ko pata chala naa, he will eat you alive and no one would know you ever exist...😆
Before she could realize what was happening she saw Asad scream her name and run towards her. And then she screamed. She found Asad by her side immediately holding her finger in his hand in a tight grip.."
"So do you know where my earring is?" Asad looked away feeling like a 5 year old who had been caught stealing chocolates from the fridge.😆




Aww sowee 😳 didn't mean to do that.


Am happy you loved the update 😃
Thank you so much for mentioning all the things that you liked most. It makes me happy to read how you specify what all you liked most in the story.

Thank you so much 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

Tis is amazing...
Beautifully writen...
luv it...
fabulous...
thx fr the pm...



Thanks Jaz am glad you loved it 😃

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