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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

I loved this OS except the ending How could you end such a beautiful story in a tragedy😭 Would you please a sequel or another part to it? Please Please. I have never asked anything from you, wont you fulfill my first wish?😳😉😆

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Such a cute OS..

N such a shocking ending...

Fari 😲

YE TU NE KYA KYA

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Reserved!

~~~

Unreserved!

Wow, an OS! This was a pleasant surprise. 😃

"Zoya Farooqi would never find out that his eyes sparkled only while looking at her..."

This is injustice! 🥺

But

Like you stated, tragic endings are more likely remembered for a longer time than happier ones' I coincidentally completed James Patterson's novel "First Love" today and it holds truth particularly if it were a lesson learned or a life changing experience gained.

I presumed Asad lied about the breakdown, and his reaction to them waiting along with him confirmed the lie, which in the context of the entire fiction, playing the "rebellious brat" was so damn sweet. Zoe as the average teen was perfectly written - I really loved your depiction of her, it kind of played before my brains' eye, like a video would.

An exceptional piece of literature!

Another fiction, I would read it if you promise to write fluffy fiction with them as parents afterwards. ☺️

Edited by p_s05 - 10 years ago

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Really so sad

Asad die not nice

I am so sad

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-RM-

@-RM-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Not A Closure I Needed :-|

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

It was so beautiful.. You made me cry so much.. I really wish it had a happy ending.. But anyway.. Beautifully written.. Thank you for the OS.. :)

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Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

It has been a long time since I read a sad OS on AsYa ! I still love them so much <3Even though u killed off Asad but I still loved it 😆

Loved reading it !

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PrettYSmile

@PrettYSmile

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Woow...like ur every other writing. It was awesome... Mind blowing...

I wanted to c asya united...

Please...

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Post blow. Sory double post.

Edited by nikki.171 - 10 years ago

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

How could you kill him off just like that? 😡
You're so heartless.

Seriously though, this was amazing, just like every time.👏 You just blow me away with your writing. It was so quirky and like Zoya to rush in late and then offer those absurd explanations. I miss Zoe. And Asad! So like him to admire and love her from a far and protect her in his own aloof way.
AsYa are Love. <3

Do you still watch Qubool Hai?

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