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A/N: This is the most painful part of this story. It took great efforts to write this part. A new twist will come after this. This is the most violent part I ever wrote in any of my stories. I had earlier said that this part will be a little bit inspired from the serial Paanch.


Important Dialogues:

1. "I can't imagine how much happy I am to get u back in my life, Zoya. U had made me realize wat all mistakes n wrong things I was doing all these years dat hurt many people. I want dat we always remain 2gthr like dis," said Asad in an emotional tone.

"Asad, ur getn very emotional. Of course, we will always remain 2gthr like dis. We love each other so much," said Zoya in a calm tone running her hands on his back.

2. "Asad, plz save me. I love u," said Zoya in a weak voice.

(Zoya's last words before d shocking twist.)

Part 37

In d morning, Asad n Zoya wakes up.

"Asad, lets go inside d house," said Zoya.

"How is ur leg?" asked Asad.

"Fine," replied Zoya.

AsYa got up 4m d bed n went inside d house. They met Dilshad in d hall.

"U both slept yesterday in d outhouse," said Dilshad.

"Ammi, Zoya's leg had sprained so I had to take her there as it was near n we decided to sleep there only," said Asad.

"Zoya, how is ur leg now?" asked Dilshad.

"Fine," replied Zoya.

"Well, u both get ready for breakfast," said Dilshad wid a smile.

AsYa nodded their heads n went to their room.

Before d breakfast, Asad was reading a newspaper on d couch in d hall. He was wearing a blue checkered shirt n black jeans. D headline was dat Tanveer will be produced in court on Monday. Zoya came n sat next to him. She was dressed in a simple yellow sleeveless top, blue long skirt and a blue scarf around her neck. She sees dat Asad does not notices her even she is sitting next to him. She wonders wat he is reading too much.

"U r so engrossed in ur newspaper dat u did not even realized ur wife is here," said Zoya.

Asad luks up 4m d newspaper n luks at her.

"Its not like dat, Zoya. U also read dis news," said Asad.

Others too came in d hall.

"I hope dis bitch Tanveer rots in jail. She is such a criminal," said Zoya.

"U r also a criminal cuz u had kidnapped a pregnant woman n tortured her," taunted Razia.

Zoya gets hurt while Asad gets angry hearing dat.

"How dare u call my wife a criminal?" asked Asad angrily, "How dare u even compare Zoya to dat Tanveer who did not think twice before humiliating Kajal, causing Zoya's wardrobe malfunction n even molest me? And u r calling Zoya a criminal?"

Razia was scared wid his anger.

"Mumaani, Zoya did right in kidnapping dat Tanveer. She did dat to stop her 4m creating anymore problems. Also, she tuk care of her eating as she was pregnant," said Ayaan.

"Lets get ready for d breakfast. We sud not waste our time like dis," said Zoya.

"U better watch ur mouth next time," warned Asad.

Dilshad smiled seeing how Asad n Zoya have moved forward in 5 months 4m d time they have met for d 1st time. She was happy to see Asad defending his wife 4m Razia's insult.

In AsYa's room, Asad was sitting on d bed. Zoya sat on his lap side-ways to tease him. She then turned to luk at him.

"U got so much angry on dat Razia," said Zoya caressing his cheek.

"She dared to call you a criminal," said Asad brushing her locks off her face.

"She was so scared cuz of ur anger. Her face was worth watching," said Zoya running her right hand in his hair.

"She even dared to compared u wid dat bitch Tanveer," said Asad wrapping his right arm around her waist.

"U know na, we both have no comparison. U did not got stuck up wid a wrong but got a right girl. And d proof is dat ur right is sitting on ur lap n teasing u," said Zoya wid a smile as she ran her 1 finger slowly 4 his forehead to nose to lips to his chin.

"My right girl was teasing me. Even I know how to tease my right girl," said Asad wid a smile holding both d ends of her scarf n pulling her more closer to him.

"I think we r getn late for breakfast," said Zoya in a normal tone.

"Breakfast can wait," said Asad mischievously n ran his fingers on her jawline.

He then kissed her forehead lovingly n hugged her tightly. She too hugged him back.

"I can't imagine how much happy I am to get u back in my life, Zoya. U had made me realize wat all mistakes n wrong things I was doing all these years dat hurt many people. I want dat we always remain 2gthr like dis," said Asad in an emotional tone.

"Asad, ur getn very emotional. Of course, we will always remain 2gthr like dis. We love each other so much," said Zoya in a calm tone running her hands on his back.

"Yaa Zoya, we love each other so much. Dunno wat happened to me dat I said all," said Asad wid a smile running his hands on her back n then caressing her hairs softly.

"Well, lets have breakfast now," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Okay," said Asad wid a smile.

Both of them were unaware of d storm dat is cumn soon in their lives which will turn their lives upside down.

Some days later, GaZiaRin r planning sumthn in GaZia's room.

"2day, we have to do d job," said Razia.

"It will happen," said Gaffur.

"Wat is d plan?" asked Shirin.

"2day evening, Asad will go to d mall to buy some things. Our plan will start 4m there only," replied Gaffur wid an evil smirk.

Scene shifts to AsYa's room. After lunch, Zoya was changing d bedsheets n pillow covers wen Asad walked in. Both then lie on their bed.

"Asad, 2day dat Tanveer's decision will be taken," said Zoya.

"Don't take her name now, Zoya. Otherwise, I will not be able to sleep peacefully hearing dat witch's name," said Asad.

"As u say," said Zoya wid a smile.

Asad wrapped his arm around her back n pulled her closer.

"I want dat these 3 people r soon out of our way. We will have get proofs of all their crimes n get them punished. Then we all will live peacefully," said Asad wid a smile.

"I want d same. We will put all our efforts in dis," said Zoya wid a smile.

They talk for some more time before sleeping in wach other's arms.

In d evening, Asad goes to mall to buy some things. While walking in d mall, Asad bumps wid a man n his cell falls down. D man's head was covered wid a hoodie jacket. Both sat down to collect their things.

"I am sorry," said d man.

"Its okay," said Asad.

D man exchanges his cell wid his which was of d same model. He then goes at a distance n types a message to Zoya- Meet me at Ruby Hotel at 8, Zoya darling .

He then deletes d msg he sent n goes back to Asad.

"Buddy, I think our cells got exchanged," said d man.

Asad tuk out d cell 4m his pocket n on checking got to know dat he was true.

"I am sorry," said Asad giving his cell to him.

"Its okay," said d man giving his cell to him.

D man went 4m there in a corner. He calls Gaffur. Gaffur who was outside d house wid Razia n Shirin answered d call.

"Hello," said Gaffur.

"Sir, ur work is done," said d man.

"Good job," said Gaffur happily n hung up.

Zoya gets happy on getn d message 4m Asad. She happily gets ready in an orange spaghetti top n black jeans. She comes in d hall smiling.

"Zoya, where r u going smiling?" asked Dilshad.

"Asad has called me for dinner date at Ruby Hotel," replied Zoya wid a smile.

"Okay, have a nice time," said Dilshad wid a smile.

"Bye ammi," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Bye Zoya," said Dilshad wid a smile.

Shirin who came near d main door of d house to check on Zoya sees her abt to come out. She rushes to GaZia.

"She is cumn," said Shirin.

GaZia were in d car. Gaffur was on d driver's seat n Razia was next to him. Shirin got in d backseat. Gaffur started d car. Zoya came in d parking n got in her car.

Zoya reached d parking of Ruby hotel n parked her car. She went inside d hotel n lukd for Asad. He was seen nowhere. She came outside n decided to call him. As she was abt to call, Razia comes before her.

"Wats so hurry to call Asad?" asked Razia wid a smile.

"Dats none of ur business," replied Zoya putting d cell in her pocket.

She moves past her but Gaffur n Shirin comes before her.

"U seem to be in so hurry to call Asad," said Shirin wid a smile.

Zoya did not said anything n moved to d parking to make a call. As she went to d parking, 4 men came in her way. She got tensed n got to drive her. She tried to start d car but it was not getn start.

"Its no use. We have punctured ur car, Zoya," said Gaffur wid a smirk as he came to her.

Razia n Shirin were wid him.

"Wats their problem?" thinks Zoya in frustration.

Before she ask anything, the 4 men grabbed her. She fought them off wid her fighting skills n started to run.

"Follow her," said Razia.

D men followed her in a car while GaZiaRin followed her in their car. Zoya was running hard n lukn back in between.

After Zoya ran a few distance, she got hit slightly by d men's car. She fell down n scraped her elbows raw. She got up n started to run again. She saw a godown n went inside. Only Gaffur saw her going inside d godown.

"She has gone inside dat godown," said Gaffur.

Razia calls d men to inform dat. After a minute, others too went inside d godown. Zoya saw them n hid behind d wooden boxes. Everyone started lukn for her. She tried to call Asad but signal was not cumn.

"Asad, plz pick up d phone," thinks Zoya in mind.

She starts moving slowly wen d men sees her. They drag her out n pushes before GaZiaRin. Zoya was not understanding wat all was happening wid her.

Scene shifts to Asad cumn home.

"Asad, how was ur n Zoya's dinner date? Where is Zoya?" asked Dilshad wid a smile.

"Ammi, wat r u talking abt?" asked Asad confusingly.

"Asad, u only texted Zoya to come to Ruby Hotel for dinner date," replied Dilshad.

"I did not texted her anything," said Asad shockingly.

He then recalls bumping into dat man in d mall.

"Wen did dat message came?" asked Asad.

"At 7: 45," replied Dilshad, "Then Zoya got ready n went outside."

"Around dat time only, I bumped into dat man," thinks Asad.

He got more shocked. He called Zoya but response came which made him worried.

"Ammi, I am feeling dat sumthn is not right," said Asad, "I need to go n find Zoya. I will track her number."

Dilshad also got worried.

Scene shifts to d godown. Zoya had luckily kept her phone on silent while hiding behind d boxes so it was not heard ringing.

"Wat do 3 of u want? Why u 3 r after me?" asked Zoya getn up.

"U think urself so smart na? Wat u thought dat we will not come to know ur identity, Zoya Ahmed Siddiqui?" asked Gaffur staring at her.

Zoya was shocked. She tried to fought wid d men but one of d men pushed her hard n she fell on some wooden boxes. Due to hard push, her hands n knees started paining. She got up wid difficulty n went forward. She removed her pepper-spray n sprayed on 2 men. As she was abt to spray on others, Razia pushed d bottle off her. Zoya pushed Razia into Shirin making her fall wid her. She then started fighting wid the 2 men. Razia n Shirin got up. One of d men pushed her on d ground. As she was getn up, Shirin kicked her hard on her stomach making her fall again. D other 2 men recovered 4 d pepper-spray attack n cornered her wid d other 2 men. Zoya got up n tried to punch one ofd men but he twisted her hand behind her back. Before she cud struggle, other men held her.

"I have learned karate 4m age 8 n even have a black belt in it. But I am not enough to fight wid so many well-built men n these 3 people. But I can't give up so easily," thinks Zoya.

"It was not Asad who messaged u. We had set dat man(pointing to 1 of d man) to do dat," said Gaffur on how he carried out of d man making Zoya shocked.

"So, u all trapped me," said Zoya.

"Yes, we trapped u. They r efficient thieves na. So, he was able to do d job perfectly. Then we waited for u to come to d hotel. Razia came to know abt ur identity wen ur photo flew out of ur room dat day. She saw all dat n told us," said Gaffur.

"U all r criminals," said Zoya angrily trying to free herself.

"May be," said Razia wid a smile.

D men pushed her to a wall. She got hit on head hard forming a bruise. Gaffur came behind her n pulled her up by her hand. He then slapped her hard n then threw her at some chairs causing d chairs fall along wid her. She got some bruises n scratches on her hands n legs. She found a hockey stick nearby n hit 3 men wid it. Wen she was abt to hit d 4th man, he held d hockey stick n pushed her along wid it causing her her to dash on a pillar. She was in pain as she got dashed hard. D man pulled her by her hair n pushed her before GaZiaRin. Razia tuk out a knife 4m her purse. As she got up, she slashed her right hand wid d knife making a cut. She started bleeding as she recalled her mother being stabbed by Razia.

"Ammi," cried Zoya in pain as she recalled her stabbing her mother.

"U r missing ur ammi a lot na. Don't worry, I will send u to her only," said Razia wid a laugh.

Razia then tried to stab her in her heart like she stabbed Zainab but she held her hand, tuk out d knife 4m her hand n threw it far away. D man came behind her n tripped her making her fall on d floor. Zoya cud not get up as she was too weak n the knife wound was making her weaker. D other men too got up recovering 4m d hockey stick hits 4m Zoya.

"U all go. We can handle her now," said Gaffur.

D men went. Zoya tried to get but Razia kicked her hard on her head. She fell at a wooden table. Gaffur grabbed her hair n smashed her head on d table. Shirin then punched her twice in d face causing her bleed 4m d side of her mouth. Razia then pulled her by her hand n pushed her at a wall. She got a little cut on her forehead.Shirin then pulled her up n made her stand. They cornered her. They were smirking at her injured state.

"Tum sab ne meri ammi ko maar diya. I will kill u all," said Zoya angrily.

Razia held her jaws tightly n said wid hatred, "Its u who will be killed not us."

Zoya was too weak to struggle n fight back anymore.

"U have married Asad so dat u cud reach us n take revenge 4m us na?" taunted Gaffur.

"I came to know abt d truth much after our marriage," replied Zoya angrily.

"Oh," said Razia wid a laugh, "Well, we have to kill u otherwise u will result in getn us hanged n we have to get ur dat property also na which we can get only after u r died."

"U all sud be ashamed of urselves," said Zoya angrily

"Shut up, u stupid girl. U r going to die now," shouted Shirin.

Razia left her jaws roughly n slaps her hard on both d cheeks. Gaffur pulls her hair hard making her scream in pain. Shirin punches her on d face n then in d stomach. Zoya collapses on d ground wid her head n side of her mouth bleeding even more.

Asad was in his car on d road. He tracked Zoya n was driving fast to reach her.

Razia pulls her hair lifting her a face a little while saying in a hateful voice, "20 years, u survived but 2day u will not survive. Asad n others will only get ur dead body."

Zoya gets angry n hurt hearing wat she said. She takes some sand n throws in GaZiaRin's eyes causing them partial blindness. She then gets wid great difficulty n goes outside d godown. She tries hard to walk. GaZiaRin gets up n comes out of d godown. They see Zoya some distance away. D road was deserted n no vehicle was seen around. GaZiaRin got into d car. Gaffur started d car n hit Zoya hard wid d car. Zoya fell on d ground n rolled at d side of d road. She got hit on her head n hands which started bleeding. GaZiaRin got out of d car to check her. They saw her motionless. They laughed happily.

"She will die in some time," said Razia wid a laugh.

"Yes, we shall leave 4m here," said Shirin happily.

"Allah iski aatma ko shaanti de," said Gaffur wid a smirk, "Lets go 4m here."

They went in their car n drove away. Zoya who was slightly little conscious hearing everything had opened her eyes seeing their car 4m a far distance.

"Ya Allah, I don't want to die. Plz, save me. I want to live n enjoy life wid Asad n others. Asad n everyone will be shattered seeing me dead. Plz, save me. U can't let d evil win. I don't deserve to die like dis. Plz, save me," prayed Zoya in a weak voice.

Asad reached d godown. He lukd around n was shocked to see Zoya lying at d side of d road. He ran to her. D state she was in shocked him even more. He sat near her n tuk her head on his lap. Zoya saw n lukd at him. She felt her voice going weak.

"Zoya," said Asad shockingly caressing her face.

"Asad, plz save me. I love u," said Zoya in a weak voice.

She cud not speak more. Tears starts cumn 4m her eyes as she kept lukn at Asad n started recalling her ammi playing catch catch wid a 5 year old Zoya, Farooquis taking her to their house after adopting her, herself hugging her ammi, abbu n aapi as an adult, herself hvng fun n teasing her appi-jeeju, her n Asad's 1st hug at her house, her 1st date-dance-kiss wid Asad, her 2nd marriage wid Asad, her n Asad's moments 4m their honeymoon(standing in Eiffel Tower balcony, writing their names on a lock n locking it on d love bridge, dancing at d ball, romancing in d rain wen she was in s red saree), Asad wiping her tears n hugging her after cumn to know abt her father, her happy moment wid Asad-Najma-Dilshad, her n Asad dancing in holi, Asad taking care of her n feeding her wen she was sick, her n Asad dancing on their Walima, Asad n others punishing her for hiding n eating sweets alone during Holi, Madhubala dance wid Asad n others while having fun in Holi, Asad singing song for her on his birthday, Asad putting ointment on her sprained leg, Asad saying her emotionally dat he always want them to remain 2gthr as she was sitting on his lap n her assuring him d same. Zoya eyes gets closed after she recalls all these moments. Asad finds her not moving a bit. He shakes her while patting her face.

"Zoyaaa," shouts Asad in hurt n pain as tears falls 4m his eyes as he luks at Zoya wid sad Mitwa playing in d bg.

Precap: #Dilshad gets a call 4m Asad. As she listens to Asad speaking to her, d cell 4m her hand fell down as she got very shocked n tears started falling her eyes.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb part
Omg gr8 twist
I just want that gaaziaarin got their punishment
I hope zoya got fine
Assad is there
Excited for next part
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy Juhi..
Tough and well written part...
Gaffur , razia & shirin are so excuse for the human race also... 😡
Just hope Zoya is well...
Excited for the twist...
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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a Heart-touching&emotional Update
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definatly a Awesome one
I LOVE IT
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh...very tense ending :-( I am sure this is hard to write, to strike all the emotions in the right notes.
Hope Zoya is alive!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I thinkaww asad gets emotional
asya moments are so cute
omg gaziarin are so cruel
Gaffur. Hurt zoya so much not caring she's her daughter
I think.oyster go into coma
Wonderful update pm me wen u update next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
I thinkaww asad gets emotional
asya moments are so cute
omg gaziarin are so cruel
Gaffur. Hurt zoya so much not caring she's her daughter
I thinkzoya go into coma
Wonderful update pm me wen u update next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Hope zoya will be good
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Moving, touching, poignant as well as heartrending! Wish those perpatrators will suffer dire consequences for their crimes immediately!
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nice update awesome thanks for pm

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