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OMG OMG OMG ANJALI! I am so giddy right now, this chapter was utter bliss. It's so romantic!

Zoya in this story is based on your likings isn't she?! The lights thing is so you and Hum Saath Saath Hain!

I am fangirling for two reasons because ASAD AND ZOYA and I KNOW WHERE THIS DATE IDEA CAME FROM! #reallifeotp #AnRa

The apartment is so bomb, so Asad-like. And the decorations are so pretty, and so you :P

Loved the beginning with the Ahmed Khan fam, LOVE THEM ALL TO BITS. They are the best! I want to be adopted by them, PLEASE.

I am getting mental images of Asad in that sweater, with a beard and slicked back hair, ugh, SO HOT.

I love the conversation flow between the two, the hilarious and witty back and forth, the honesty, the laughs and the seriousness. All so perfect.

Okay, I adore that you have Zoya wearing his shirt all the time! It makes me happy because I feel like Asad would be one of those guys that you hug for a long time because he smells good, you know what I mean?

And I love those little details you add about how they are sitting and their movements while they talk because it makes it that much more real and adorable.

MOVING INTO THE APARTMENT! #THANKYOUJESUS

"...well Zoya, you must know that I plan to marry you one day."

"You've thought about this?" I asked shocked.

"You're it for me Zoya, so obviously I've thought about it."

AHHH! Can they just get married now pleaseee?

Damn, things got hot, but it was also romantic!

Asad's POV killed me, I need to find my Mr. Right already. Your story makes me feel like I need a man like Asad. I hope you are happy Anjali, despite being a big advocate of feminism, you're writing a man that makes women feel like they need a man.

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Congratulations on the 2nd thread!

Seeing that gorgeous banner once again. *dreamy look* I think the color adds a dreamy effect to it, the "Holi Promo" pics' my favorite and all of the ones with the sexy stubble.

I'm a hopeless romantic and adore sincere fluffy indulgences. Here's my favorite dialogues and what I loved and thought was awesomely conceptualized.

"I refuse to answer any questions." "Without her lawyer!"

These guys are devoted fan-girls!

The entire greeting scene at the door was so so...very relatable, especially the "HI", "HELLO" and "wave of hand".

"Now tuck your head into my neck and no peeking."

"Exactly, it smells like you."

"It makes you smile and I watch you instead of the room."

"...the menu of Hum Saath Saath Hai appeared on the TV."

As Zoe said: "No Way" - Whats this guy made of sugar and spice and all things nice!

"A list of one." "Just you."

"I moved away from the pillows I was leaning on and got on my knees before straddling him, my legs on either side of his thighs. "...he looked at me for a second before he blinked and shook his head before his arms wrapped around me, his hands resting on my back.""

"Khan, I don't think you know this... but you are f**king gorgeous."

"Right, you are. But you are also smart and kind, loving, protective, independent, responsible, confident...I mean the only thing you don't have going for you is being funny but other than that, you are perfect."

"You know when I said I've been in love with you for so long that I don't remember how it feels to not be in love with you?" "I was never able to see anyone but you."

"...but then stopped again closing his eyes before his hand wrapped around my wrist. He opened his eyes and looked at me then. "Zoya, if you want me to talk you have to stop touching me." He said, his voice almost a whisper. He placed my hand on his chest, and reached over and did the same to the other one. "Don't move them.""

""And you carried it around for this long?" I asked shocked causing him to blush which made me melt yet again. "I love you." I said kissing his right cheek and then his left. He rubbed his nose against mine then causing me to giggle."

"Shedding light on recent events it seems like I was comparing all of them to a certain Khan without realizing it."

"But I am comfy here." I said moving my hands up from his chest and locking them behind his neck.

"You know you are boosting my ego way too much considering we just got here." "Oh true, I should stop since your ego is big enough as it is."

""Sure." He said pulling me over him again, so I was straddling him. I arched my eyebrow at him questioningly. "I can see you now." He shrugged causing me to laugh and wrap my arms around his neck.

"Scoot up a little." I said causing him to look at me confused, but he complied leaning forwards and away from the headboard. I wrapped my legs around his waist, crossing my legs behind his back and sitting on his lap. "Okay, you can lean back now." I said, I was now comfortable.

"What's on your mind?" He asked looking at me closely his hands resting on my back again."

"I know this is going to sound crazy but in just the past few days I've realized how much I love seeing you first thing in the morning and when I get home...it's like you've always been part of the family too."

"But think about it, it could be your apartment since I live at home and I work right downstairs so I'll see you on most days. I can even sleepover."

"You are going to sleepover all the time." "Are you telling me to or are you assuming I would?" "Both?"

"You're it for me Zoya, so obviously I've thought about it." "God, I love you so much. And I will still pay the bills even after we get married."

"For what you probably went through in the past five years. I know it must have been painful to be in love with some stupid oblivious girl that left you without even telling you when she was leaving. And for running away from you when you tried to reach out. I needed time to think about why you affected me so much, to realize the feelings I always had. So I am sorry."

"I have realized that I always felt something for you. I remembered little details about you, I sometimes annoyed you on purpose just to get your attention, I loved messing with you, I always felt safe around you, I- I just never realized what an integral part of my life you've always been Asad. A part of me always knew that I felt something for you, because I felt like I could trust you, depend on you, and god, don't even get me started on how long I've been attracted to you for."

"How long?" "Out of all that that's the only part you want to know?"

"In shorts." "I'll remember that for next time." "Anything else?" I said running my hands through his hair. "I like it when you wear my shirts." "Well you're in luck because I like wearing your shirts. But you have to wear them first so they smell like you." "I am sure I can manage that."

"I love stubble and beards, on you." "I am going to have to shave once court hearings start."

"For the Love of Stubbles and Beards" #AAK This is injustice!

""I can always hide them with make-up." I whispered, because holy hell, I liked him kissing my neck, and his scruffy face nuzzling my skin."

"You know when other people say I am beautiful I play it off, but when you say it...it makes me feel beautiful." "But you are beautiful, so so beautiful."

""Well obviously, since I've pretty much been in love with you my whole life." I said tapping her nose and she broke out into a smile wrinkling her nose cutely. I hadn't missed the too in her question either and I smiled to myself, we were probably a good five to eight years late, but it was worth it."

"I don't like it when you cry." "Okay, lets just watch the first half of the movie, I don't like the second half anyways."

""Move you arm up." She instructed and I complied confused for a moment. But then she tucked herself into my side and wrapped one of her arms around my waist leaning against my chest. I smiled and put my arm back over her shoulder as we sat there and watched her favourite movie."

There goes not wanting to quote most of the update! *tear*

Oki Chici this story is amazing!!!!

My husband thinks I'm losing it cus I've been stuck on the phone at crazy hours reading your story. Started two days ago and just couldnt stop. Oh my goodness it is too good. I kept wanting to write comments but greedy me kept on going and going :)

Hmm where to start...the characters...

Asad -he is just gorgeous in this. The way you/zoya describe him I don't even think I found him this hot on the show. The towel scene plus her half naked uff! The drunk scene and him giving her a hickey. The romantic date and their first moments of love conversation sooo nice! and the fact that he's been attracted to zoya since childhood was adorable! And he shares such a sweet relationship with his family. I'm especially happy he's happy with his dad in this.

Zoya -always liked her. But having her more emotionally challenged then asad hehe too funny. Best part is her subconscious! This "person" just speaks her mind and her un-filtered dialogues are the best! I loved how they remembered all these little details about each other. She was also super funny and goofy at times. She definately had loads of spunk which is perfect for her constant bantering with asad. I loved how at the end when all their feelings were out she couldn't stop telling asad I love you. Plus her obsession with his abs and stubble uff

Dilshad -loved her on the show and in here. Her relationship with asad is just beautiful. I hope mine is like that with my kid when he grows up. He shares everything everything with her and she helps him in his relationship just beautiful. Plus her teasing him and giving them freedom cus she's a "modern mom" loved it. I could almost hear her squealing with happiness when she saw asad/zoya together eating pizza

Najma and nikhat -so glad the siblings are living together in this version. Ofcourse I love their teasing. And I like how you gave importance to each character equally.

Imran and gufoor - wow! I was not expecting them to be this evil in this but it totally suits them but poor zoya

Humeira and ayaan -they're so cute. So so glad they're together. They're the reason asad/zoya first met again after so long plus they're the reason behind the whole farmhouse scenario. Definately the cutest cupids I've ever seen

Ok I don't think I've ever written a post this long but can't stop!

The little stories within the romance were really well-written as well. Liked the whole rape case (Loved najma's line of zoya needing her lawyer by her side to talk.) the whole background of dilshad and then as youngins was great. I'm so glad zoya got to know about her mother through them.

The stories being told from asad and Zoya's point of view very clever and creative. I thought I would find it boring and repetitive but no no no it was brilliant.

Ok finishing up now. I loved loved loved this story and the characters and the writing. You first attracted me to your writing with that story about zoya finding modern ways to make asad express his feeling and now I'm officially hooked to your writing! Thanks tons!!!