New ASYA OS : Life's Second Chance - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ZoyaAsadKhan

awesome :)
can u continue this i want to see dilshad's reaction on finding asad and zoya in zoya's room :) maybe u can make a TS or something?????
teasing session of dilshad and najma :) ... i know too much of imagination right ... ya but i would want to read something like that :)
but this OS get's a VERY BIG LIKE from me :)



Aww thank you so so much dear 🤗 as much as you loved the os, I loved your comment too.


Continue it, umm I've not thought about that at all. Will see if I can. Not promising 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: pinky06

Lovely lovely lovely os...ufff the after affects of mangalpur 😳

What I liked the most was...

Asad getting a chair and blushing when he said he can't sleep on the bed..

'I would have never let that happen',his answer to Zoya s quest abt forcefully being married..

And then Ofcourse the I love you...with goofy smile(not to forget)...just amazing 😊

Amazing...



Hey Pinky, glad you liked it 😃

Yes the aftereffects of mangalpur

Thanks for the appreciation dear 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Amulya9

awesome OS choco ...

aww how much i love mangalpur track in QH ..best track
loved d way asad took care of her
confession is lovely ...
feeling nostalgic



Thank you Amulya, glad you enjoyed reading my version too 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

maine bola tha na app mast hai 😎


Hay thank you ankie 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: MayurChan




Hiii.. 8-) Choco...well good that you wrote something after so many days...well about this update it was emotional , brilliant , i don't even have proper words to define how satisfied and happy iam after reading this update...iam definetly going to read it again and again...about this part, you know we are getting so many new and better scenarios with our favourite ASYA scenes...and this one is one of them...that scene where Both ASYA thought they still are Handcuffed was just great and unforgettable...and this O.S has given it a completely new and kind of more deserving end to that Mangalpur incident...Asad and Zoya were still under shock and Zoya had nightmares about it...but now she has Asad by her side who will support her , heal her and most importantly love her...but i really must mention that part where Asad made all efforts to keep a distance between Zoya and him during that sleeping thing because it was clearly what had happened even it was suppose to happen in show also...not that i don't like him if he would have straight away slept by her side...but what he tried was actually what Asad would had done in real or in the show...so logical and practical...and the end CONFESSION...woohoo...just very very beautifully written...Asad's confession about wanting Zoya by his side always then his dissappointment when Zoya said she doesn't know what to say...but then i think she was so overwhelmed to even form a proper confession but she managed well...just mindblowing dear...now i should request you to start something new soon...continue soon...and thanx for the P.M dear...Take care.



Aww Mayur thank you for all this appreciation. Am so happy that you enjoyed my version 😃. I was actually scarwdnto touch something as beautiful as mangalpur, as I didn't know how all asya fans would react to it. Its like sacred stuff 😳.

But glad its been accepted and loved. Thank you for reading it dear ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Ah...those 'post mangalpur' days...I dont think anyone can get over that :-(

The emotions, their hearts, their tortures...all were so dense! Loved your OS!



Thank you Smitha, glad you enjoyed it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: maha70

Awesome OS..Please continue writing on our AsYa..😳

Thanks for pm..😊



Thanks dear, glad you liked it. I will keep writing as and when I have a good idea to play with 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

wow apiya...!! it was so beautiful

it reminded me of Asya😭 ❤️
i really miss my asya...
i loved this OS so much...really...
beautiful n perfect...
thanks for d pm



Hey Aroo glad you loved reading this 🤗. Aww me too miss asya all the time 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: noesha

Beautiful!

I cld actually imagind this happening.
sigh! the asya feels!



Aww that's the best compliment a writer can get, that the reader picturized it all. Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: ankiecool

it was lovely
i just love mangalpur and it's aftermath
aww asad tool care of her so cutely
n they confessed too
very well written



Thank you dear. Am happy you liked it 😃

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