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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Aishwa09

Hello Di ,

How are you ??

Finally we have got your work after a Long Time...

Loved it ...

Asya Mangalpur ... 😳

I cannot imagine my life without you in it Zoya. You have come to mean so much to me. More than what I had wanted, ever... But now that you do, now that I know, and now that you know too, will you be with me always?" -
Asad , Asad ..

Loved these lines ..

Asya confession beautiful ...

Asad taking care of Zoya ..Very lovely ..

Mangalpur Trip did magics for Asya ..

Completely a Lovely Read ! ..

Awesome Concept ..

Beautifully Penned..

Mangalpur yaad aagayi going to watch the Episodes now ..

Thank you so much for Writing !

and also Thanks for Pm !

Di, Keep Writing when you have time ..

Love you <3...



Hey sweetie, am well hope you are well too. Am happy you liked the os. I was actually a lil scared touching something as beautiful as mangalpur.


I will keep writing as and when a good idea or concept strikes 😃

Thanks for reading and liking it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

if i dont get the first page i will cry




YAYAYAYAYAYA First PAGE YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAAY




U wrote after Mangu

The part which I LOVE THE MOST

How much I love you


Awh Asad took care of Zoya so lovingly

And He even confessed his feelings


AWH! This was so FLUFFY


REally really really loved the fluff


PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more of Fluff

I AM THIS >




Love Me



Lol Ankie, your comments always make me smile. No matter how low I feel your comments just do the magic 😆

I agree mangalpur a part every asya fan just loves. Mein darr bhi rahi this to write on something as beautiful as this. But am glad it was liked 😃

Will write more soon 😃

You don't need to say it ankie, I love you already 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

yayayyaya first page aaayaya


Lol yea. I love the way you express your eagerness for the first page.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: -ABI-

unres
well its absolutely Amazing OS
Just loved it
&
please try to comtinue this OS



Thank you lil bro. Glad you loved it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: cutie15

That was soo beautiful. .!! :)
It was written soo well..!!
Loved it..:)



Thank you dear. Glad you loves it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: arshi.zoha

Wow ..👏

This was magical ⭐️
And Beautifully written ...😳
Thanks for the PM ...😉
Keep writing ...😊



Thank you dear. Glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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damn good yaar...
loved it...
beautifully written...
great work...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Update (wats ur name)👏😊

Both were still disturbed wid d events😲

Zoya was too scared n had horrible thoughts

Glad dat Asad comforted her😃

I did not expected them to confess too soon

I only expected them to be cool friends for some time before confessing😉

Well, jo bhi hai it was nice to see them confessing

Rather than d nonsense shown in d show😡

I hated how things were shown in d show which made Asad luk jerk n heartless. Zoya was in trauma due to Akram but after few days, Asad showed his aukaat n threatened Zoya to kill her jokingly n then at gun-point made her do some works in d house. Then he thought her wrong n told her to leave d house. He then threatened to kill her actually for kidnapping Ayaan for him n tore d paper which contained some info leading to her father. Dat was s mean of him of behaving like dis wid a female guest. After Mangalpur, cvs made Zoya dumb for trying to hide Mariam in many ways. Asad who was affected wid Zoya being buried n was crying as if he really loved slapped her...he raised his his hand on a girl. He then manhandled her, threatened to kill her if she goes near his mom n told very cruel things dat its good she don't have family n she don't deserve them. Cvs made him a sadistic monster. I hated how Zoya forgave him too easily after he made dat bloody coffee n then acted cheerfully wid him as if nothing happened. Not only me but many wanted Zoya to blast Asad for his actions n leave d house. But cvs showed Zoya a dumb girl widout any self-respect.

Glad dat u did not showed these stupid things. In d show, I did not wanted them to fall in love n confess so soon but wanted them to become cool friends like BFF types but nothing happened. Instead, things becoming worse wid Asad getn more n more intolerable n Zoya getn more n more dumb😡. But ur OS was very awesome😊.



Request- Can u write an OS on Seher(I know u like her). My idea is Rehan finds Seher in d ganesh mandir n sees her crying while saying how her chance of leading a normal life is snatched n how she vl do bad works again as she can never live a normal life n Shishipal uncle n Rosy aunty were right. Rehan feels bad hearing it n confronts her. She tells him ant her painful past including d scene of her eating bread 4m a garbage. Rehan apologizes for not listening to wat she wanted to say n proposes her in d mandir. Can u write on dis in ur way if u get time? 😊




Hey, glad you liked my version. Thanks for reading 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: mona12345

Okayy so I've read it. But I'm not leaving you with a comment until tomorrow. 😆

Will tell you what i felt about this tomorrow.

Night Choco di :*



Yea yea I know already 😉, but comment update karo jaldi. Love you sweetheart 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: sabrinsz91

Lovely os

The way Asad took care of Zoya is sooo heart touching
Loved the os



Thank you for reading and liking it 😃

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