5/1 Part 7: Go easy on the brain !! Pg 16, Choomantar, A Sahil ff - Page 11

Soo guys, As i said, here's the part 7

Title : Go easy on the brain.. !!

Sanam's POV :

We've been driving through the city for a while and the view was beyond spectacular. As the car took another turn, and finally slowed down into a driveway, i couldn't help but stare at the gigantic building infront of me.
That was hu-ugee..
Long story short, We checked in, and were allotted our room..
So, now, here we are in the lift..just us, with no curious viewers..No, I'm not speaking about the viewers curious about the hotel.. I'm talking about the ones who looked at me with curious looks as i gazed at the building curiously!!!

"Sooo, you owwn this?" I looked at him as we stood in the lift.
He arches a brow "Hmm, So, I take it that you like it"
I couldn't help but nod my head. "Yeah.. Of course, who wouldn't. Everything here's shimmery sparkley. I wonder how people manage to clean all these without causing any damage"
"Sanaamm" he chuckles "Of all the things, you're worrying about how they cl-eaan these".
"Old habits die hard" I snap.
"You know what Sanam, Thats what makes these things more special.Yes, They are beautiful. But they are also very delicate. The art lies not just in adoring the beauty but understanding the delicacy and moulding ourselves to suit it."
I look at him, but he seemed to be else where lost in his thoughts.
But those words, they had a strong inner meaning. Were they intended at me or is it that I'm imagining things.. I stare at the blank space ahead of me trying to figure out things. There's soo much happening in the past few hours.. I do not know if i can sustain any longer !!
The lift doors open, bringing us out of our thoughts, and we were greeted by another attendant who pointed us to our room.
"Not exactly" He spoke into my ears as we walked across the lobby.
I look at him with a question mark stamped on my face.
"This isn't our hotel" he spoke., gesturing to the question i asked him earlier.
"Ohh.." I nod as he bent to insert his key into the hole. "I get it. International, exactly isn't your .."
I was cut off by his words. "We own like 80% of the shares here. Not the whole hotel", he smirks as he walks into the room, and turns back to catch the shocked look on my face.
"Well, That was soo modest of you. Why do you even have to leave the 20%." I roll my eyes.
"Umm, we need to take care of the hotel which was difficult from over there. So we decided to give the organisers a 20% of our shares." He says in a-matter-of-fact tone , placing his hands on the entrance door as he spoke.
"Woahh.. That was soo " i try to speak something to mock his so called generous ways actually, but i couldn't feel my words as i step into the room.
"Amazing." I found myself completing the previous sentence.
"Umm.. I always knew it." He shrugs rubbing his hand at the back of his neck and smirk plastered over his face.
I roll my eyes as i walk past him
"Not you. Its this" I say pointing to the room. "I have to admit, your taste wasn't soo bad afterall" I tease as my eyes travel around the hall finally ending upon the sofa set which looks more like a miniature bed !!
"Don't.. Don't sit on the sofa set" he warns me. "You better complete examining the whole house before sitting there, cause I'm sure you won't feel like getting up once you sit there" he winks.
"Sarcastic aren't we" i utter as I walk further in, to check the rest of the rooms.
There's a dining room to the right side of the hall, and a kitchen..
Seriously, who has a kitchen in a hotel. None that i know of. But I'm glad that i could at least get some time pass out of it.
And onto the left is a room full of mirrors and a shiny wooden flooring.
"Exercise room" i hear him say from behind me, and i find threadmill, few weights and few other machines that i didn't even know existed, ahead of me.
I have no idea as to what more rooms shall spring up here.
The bedroom's vast with a queen sized bed in the center. Sheer gold linens cover the bed with pillows of different sizes scattered across it. Well, i would dare not call them scattered cause they look more like arranged to feel like they are not arranged. !!

And then, there's the balcony with a miniature swimming pool and I hug myself, closing my eyes as a gentle breeze flows across my face.
"You like it?" He asks standing across me, Hands shoved into his pants pockets, looking at the vast ocean lying ahead of us.
The breeze knocks his hair and i couldn't help but stare at how beautiful he looks.
"Umm.. Yeah. It's great " I reply forcing myself to turn away from him and look at the waves ahead., taking a glance at the sun as it sets down.


Aahils pov :

I have no idea what to look at. The beauty beside me or the beauty ahead of me.
Whatever, I just hope that I'll try my best to make her feel comfortable during this trip.
I may not be the exact company she wanted here but i can try to be a good one.. Or fine, lets make it as, not a bad company atleast.
I don't know the amount of time we stood there staring at the sun finally setting down across the horizon where the sky and the sea seem to meet.
Its these little times i spend with her, that i find more valuable, a memory worth treasuring for a life time. I don't know how our future will be like, once we go back home. It's just three months i have. But i don't want to leave any single chance i get unturned now. I never knew what happiness could be like. Never knew how spending your life with a single person for the whole lifetime could feel like. But now, standing beside her staring at the waves striking the sea shore, i get it as to how it feels. How it feels to wake up to her tunes everyday, wake up to see that she's beside me ... Forever. To have those petty quarrels with her, to grow old with her..
I don't want my life to be as the waves ahead of me. I want my life to be as a calm water in the middle of the sea of life. She settles me. She is IT for me, THE ONE. And if my life, reaches the waves, i just want to know that she'll be beside me, holding my han-ds...
My thoughts are interrupted by the ringing of my phone.
"Ammi" I say looking into it and go inside to speak to her.
How could i forget to call Ammi back. Damn me.

Tanveer : Haa Aahil beta, Aap teek hai na. Mein kabse tumhaare phone call keliye intezhaar kar rahi hoon.
Aahil : Ammi.. I'm sorry. I just forgot.
Tanveer : It's okay Aahil beta.Lagta hai Tumko mujhse zyaada aur kuch kaam aagaya .
Aahil : Ammiii... Ye aap kya bol rahe hai..
Tanveer : Its alright. I can understand. Fine, jo hogaya wo hogaya. Bas kal ka business meeting attend karna mat bhul jaavo. This is a good chance to improve our business there.
Aahil : Yeah, sure Ammi. Aap kaise hain?
Tanveer : I'm perfectly fine. Just take care of the meeting. It's a very important business de-al...

The rest of the voice is drowned by a scream coming from the bedroom.

Aahil : Ammi.. I'll just call you later.
Tanveer: Aaahil.. Wo awaaz kya hai?
Aahil : mujhe nahi pata, lagta hai sanam kaa awaaz hai. I'll talk to you later Ammi..
Bye.

I rush into the room, and run over to her.
"Sanaamm..What happened??" I ask her.

No reply

"Sanam just tell me what happened??"
I catch her shoulders and shake her.

Still no reply.


Sanam's pov :

I walk back into the room after Aahil goes to attend his Ammi's call and i find the suitcases strandled on the floor by the bedside. Being the cleanliness freak that I am, I decide to arrange all the clothes in the drawers.

It was then i opened this particular drawer..

Omg.. Alla mia..
What should i tell him?
I can feel his hands on my shoulders shaking me to speak something.
I gulp and look at him, trying to figure out some answer. But the close-ness between us is not helping.

"Sanam, for god sakes, speak something" he shouts again shaking my body.

I close my eyes and point my finger to the now open drawer and he flinches away.
God.. I don't even know where to put my head. If only the ground below would just open up and take me in.

scroll down for part B
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Part 7B: Go easy on the brain..

Aahil looks at me with widened eyes. "You shouted for that?" He points to it again looking at me in amusement? Pity? Shock? I don't know what that look was and i didn't even want to decipher it.

"Shocked i am. Seeing them there, I'm sorry" i stammer exchanging the shocked and sorry in the two sentences.
He looks at me now, I'm sure in amusement.

I scowl and turn away as he throws up into a gag of laughter.
Never did i see him laughing this much. And i couldn't help smile a little too. His laugh is soo intoxicating. I feel my cheeks warming up and turn a shade of pink and I'm glad that I'm facing away from him.

"Enough !! Stop it now" i scowl at him.
He looks at me and bursts down again into another fit of laughter.
"Condoms.. You shouted seeing them?" I flinch at his usage of the word.
"Seriously, Sanam, I'd have atleast considered cockroaches as a plausible reason !!" He cackles.

"Why are they here, and how come there are soo many?" I try to make a valid point as the drawer is full of them.
He looks at me,his eyes growing wider than before if thats even possible and walks towards me, stopping an inch away?

"What do you think Sanam? Don't you know why they are here" he speaks huskily with an edge in his voice.

I move back, and he steps front meeting my pace, maintaining the inch gap.
I gulp and drink my saliva, hoping that I wont loose my voice when i speak.
He moves closer and lifts my chin with his fingers to make me look into his eyes.
I hold my breath and look at him, as he traps me between the wall and himself.
I close my eyes as he brings his face forwards and he bursts out into another fit of laughter, a few drops of his saliva spill onto my face and he moves back, stretching his hand out to say that, that was unintentional and bend down holding his tummy as he laughs more.

I shake my head and stare at the sight infront of me.
As if shouting over condoms isn't embarrassing enough, he had to make such a big issue of it.
Seriously, who would expect that you'll be meeting a whole drawer full of condoms awaiting to spill on you when you open it. Well, not me atleast.

I fold my arms and look away from him, trying to control both my anger and laughter at the same time.. Well, lets put it as, control my laughter and express my anger !!
His phone buzzes and he straightens up, looking into it.

He walks towards me.
No, please not again. Go and burst out into another fit of laughter. But don't come close. I can't get hold of myself. I want to tell him.

He stops a few inches away and i release my breath.
"Well, this is a honeymoon suite, if and in case you haven't noticed and there might be hundreds of people before you who might have f**ked in this very place., or for that matter, at the very place you are standing against the wall" he smirks.

I shudder at the thought and ponder over cleaning this entire area before sleeping.

"Don't worry. They might have cleaned it. So, don't try and strain yourselves." He giggles as if he knew what's going on in my head."My hotel's got the best service, incase you don't know"

I roll my eyes. Still, the very thought makes me cringe. His phone buzzes again and he excuses himself. I'm glad to finally have a lone moment and sit on the bed.

Honeymoon suite with Jallad Jinn !!
A honeymoon in maldives.
Walking into a room full of condoms.
A room where no place was left un-f**ked?
An almost kiss with Jallad Jinn, himself in the plane.
Jallad Jinn being nice.
Sharing my parents stories with him.
Jealous of a plane attendant.

I sigh and settle down on the bed as i list all the things happened today.
What's the most awkward, what's the most embarassing thing i couldn't know.

The day feels soo long and its just 6 in the evening.

"Alla mia.. I'm seriously as in realllyy very seriously not ready for any more surprises today. Do you hear me. I AM NOT READY. Come on... Gimme a break. " i speak to the roof, hoping the god hears me and shows some concern.

"Well, you can take a day off now. The god heard you" A voice replies back as i lie down closing my eyes.

I nod gently. Wait.. WhHatt.. The god heard me? I spring back and sit straight to see the reincarnation of my very own devil himself standing infront of me beside the door, leaning on it, hands folded.

"I .. I was..." I stammer, searching for appropriate words.. But what could be more apt. He heard me. I must have woken from the wrong side of bed today. But how could it be possible. I always sleep on the left side. Then i must have seen jallad jinn's face the first thing in the morning.
'You always see his face, the first thing in the morning Sanam' my conscience mocks me. But i decided to ignore it. This could feel like a valid enough reason.

"Well, the god heard you. You can relax. There's nothing more to do today. And i have a meeting to attend too.. So, calm down. I'll be back by dinner time, so we can go down" He speaks, and the ever lasting wicked smile still on his face.

"And make more fun of myself" I speak under my breath - or perhaps a little too loud than i wanted.
Well, today's not my day. I sigh
Maybe, if i could erase today from the calendar?
Wait.. Would i want to do that? Not every day, would i find Jallad jinn being nice to me.
It feels good. Only if i stop acting like such a fool.

"Sanam..Did you say anything?" He asks.
Well, I'm not going to talk about that bad-ass smirk on his face anymore. Lets consider that with every conversation of ours, he has that smirk on his face.
But I'm still not used to it. It looks soo good on him.

"Sanam?" He asks again.
God, the way he says my name.
"Umm.. No. I just don't want to go out any more today." 'And make more fun of myself' i add silently. As if he's going to listen my words anyway.

"It's fine" he shrugs. I look at him with shock.
"Is it reallyy fine?" I ask him back.
"Um.. Yeah. I kind of expected that. And your talks to god helped confirm it" he winks." So, you want me to bring some parcel or will you make some food yourself. The kitchen has a store of some vegetables too." He finishes.

I ponder a while about deciding what to do. I have no idea how the food outside looks like. This is not even India anymore. So, the taste differences are for sure.

"Well, you can't get totally Indian food here. But the food's not that bad either."

Not that bad doesn't feel like a good word, i think. Maybe preparing food myself is a good choice. It also helps in removing these thoughts from my mind for a while. But are the vegetables fresh. I'm soo confused.

"If not-so-bad isn't your preference ., Well, i take your silence as an yes, for that. Then you can cook food here."
How do i ask him if the groceries are fresh. I nod but still look at him confused.

"The groceries are fresh too and yeah, the kitchen's clean too" he giggles and walks towards the wardrobe.
How in the world does he know what I'm thinking... Godd..

"And Sanam, by fresh, i don't mean that people didn't f**k on that kitchen counter." He laughs looking at my shocked face, crumpling the new set of clothes he just took out from the wardrobe.
"Don't.. Don't worry.. The staff here is known for cleanliness." He giggles and leaves to the bathroom still laughing.

I attempt to relax but those last words were still reverberating in my mind.
"And Sanam" he walks back into the room again.
Now what? As if all this isn't enough.

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Heheh... so how's that guys.. hope you like it too..

And surprise... there's another part too.. Part C ;)
it's small but that sort of completes the set of activities for the day..
And wait, there's a night too 😉 maybe not in this update..
but the day's still young.. especially when the night's around the corner 😛 and a honeymoon night at that 😳

Heres.. your part 7C :

He pauses to look at me. "I might be late today. Have to finalise a few deals. And hey, you can close your mouth. And also, this is purely a business deal I'm going out for. I'm not going to f**k any one. Don't worry" he cackles, and picks up a towel.


I nod and its followed by a giggle.
I look at him.. What now??
Wait.. Why did i nod. I wasn't thinking of it even. Well, perhaps i might. But that surely isn't the thing that's on my mind right now.

"I didn't mean to nod. Why would i care where you go. Go and f**king treat yourself as you wish. Now f**k off and f**king leave me alone" I speak.

What the f**k... Shit.. No.. Allah.. How did i use soo many curse words in one line. I've never even used those before. I was just soo annoyed.. And.. Gosh, he's such a bad infuence.

"Gee.. That's soo unlike you " he blinks and looks at me astonished.

"Don't.. Don't look at me like that. I'm surprised that i said them too okay. Blame yourself." I snap.

He shakes his head and leaves to the bathroom trying to stifle his laugh on the way in.

I swear i heard some muffled laughs from inside and i threw one of the pillow from the bed onto the bedroom door and sigh..What's seriously gotten into my brain.

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Soo, that's it for part 7. And yeah, no more sub parts 😉
And i hope you guys like it
And if you like it, do leave likes and comments too.

And i have a question for you guys this time.. Heheh.. those were soo many Ands.. !!! Anyways, here it goes.. Take a moment and try to answer. It feels good to here all your views. 😊

As a part of the story Sanam thinks about what's the most difficult part of the day for her ..
I wanted to know what according to you could be the most difficult situation for her., it could be either an emotional one like the almost kiss or the further embarrassing stuff she has put herself into..or even an important thing for her, like sharing her parents stories..
Fine.. I guess it's better we put it this way..
A few years later, when she looks back to this day, what'll be the first thing she's reminded of.


Honeymoon suite with Jallad Jinn !!

A honeymoon in maldives.

Walking into a room full of condoms, and creating a scene out of it.

Having to stay in a room with Jallad Jinn, where no place was left un-f**ked?

An almost kiss with Jallad Jinn, himself in the plane.

Jallad Jinn being nice.

Sharing my parents stories with him.

Jealous of a plane attendant.

or any other thing i skipped?

And yeah, as i said the day might have ended but there's a night.. and it's going to be a promising one..
So, stay tuned...!!
And leave your likes and comments..
belated Christmas and new year too guys...
Hope you had fun 😊

i guess finding awkward stuff & creating the scene part
was memorable

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Awesome and sweetest update will be back

Hey read all the parts! Such a fun n quirky story! I swear I thought she saw a roach too 😆 But def the condoms scare will be very memorable for them in the future 😆 Thats something to think back n laugh about! Cant wait for the night scene 😉 Also loved Aahil wanting her grow old with her! Aww thats super cute! I hope Sanam doesn't do say say anything to hurt him cuz he does love her! Great job! Plz pm me if possible!

Originally posted by: navk

awesome update

Thank youu 😊

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

Awesome and sweetest update will be back

Aww.. That's soo sweet !! Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Raingoddess

Hey read all the parts! Such a fun n quirky story! I swear I thought she saw a roach too😆But def the condoms scare will be very memorable for them in the future😆Thats something to think back n laugh about! Cant wait for the night scene😉Also loved Aahil wanting her grow old with her! Aww thats super cute! I hope Sanam doesn't do say say anything to hurt him cuz he does love her! Great job! Plz pm me if possible!

Hahah.. i knew you guys will think of something like cockroaches.. That is why i mentioned it later in Aahil's dialogue.. 😉
Yeahh.. Aahil is soo in love with Sanam..
Sanam's beginning to have feelings for him too, though she doesn't realize them..
And Thanks 😳
will definitely pm you 😊