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Hi Dears! M here with the epilogue of this FS. Those who have demanded for a nikah, sorry I cant manage it. But a confession is there. So hope u all will like it n plz leave some lovely comments. 😊😊
Who is the real Zoya
Epilogue :
"Mujhe kuch time aur lagega Mr. Khan"
"Aur kitne time Mr. Dudey, aapko nahi lagta already bohot time ho gaya hai?"
"Mr. Khan please samajh ne ki koshis kijiye, photographs bohoti purine hai, isse kuch information nikal ne mein waqt to lagegahi. Aap please thora intezar aur kijiye. Hume jaldihi kuch pata chal jayenga, ek bar sketch ready ho jaye bas."
"Ok sketch ready ho jaye to hum milte hai. Khuda hafiz."
Asad cut the call n sat down on the couch. He was talking to the pvt. investigator he had hired for finding Zoya's father. It has been almost two months since the night when Zoya had confessed about her past to him. From that day he was trying to get any kind of information which is related to her past. Until now he have found a old house which is on the outskirts of the town, he had visited the house with the PI n found a similar photograph there, which they have. They also have collected some old newspapers, some bills etc. Asad have used his connections to know in which name the house was registered. Which oviously will take some time. Meanwhile they are trying to gather any information from the newspapers n all. N now the PI have suggested about the sketch.
Asad knew that the process is long, he have to be very oatient but he cant see Zoya suffering due to this, last night he have witnessed her crying once again holding a music ball. May be belongs to her father. He wanted her to gather in his arms, he wanted to console her, to tell he that everything will be alright, to tell her about his new foundation, but he cant. His hands are tied. He don't want her to think that he pitied her. So he did what he always does, he walked away from there. Till then he is thinking to tell her that he knows everything, he cant see her breaking like this he just wanted her to believe him like she said, "I trust u so much". Its just he don't know how to tell her.
He wished Zoya to remember everything...
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In between this two months Asad n Zoya's mutual understanding became more strong. They can understand each others feeling without even talking too much. Asad have became more concerned n more careful towards her whereas Zoya too found a solace, a peace around him. She too take care of his little needs. It is now ritual that Zoya will prepare breakfast n coffee for him everyday. Zoya couldn't understand why she is feeling more connected to him, as if she bears a part of her life while for Asad she has became a necessity...
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Zoya n Najma was watching some movies in hall when a song created some strange illusion in Zoya's head.
Choo mantar ho aja chal gum ho jaye...
Choo mantar ho khud se hi khud kho jaye...
She saw that she is walking on a bench, then sitting on a car bonnet, then falling down from the car roof. What is strange more is that Mr. Khan is there with her all the time.
This is not the first time she saw this, whenever she listened this song something happens to her. Another day, she was having ice-cream with Najma when a similar incident happened, only there she was siting on a bench probably crying n Mr. Khan holding an ice-cream.
First time she ignored it, but when it kept ringing back she become frustrated. May be this is a memory which she couldn't remember. May be it was something happened during that night when Akram had drugged her. She have tried to ask Asad but Every time he only gave the same answer.
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Today they are going in a picnic as Najma want to enjoy after her exams. Dilshad have suggested them to go to their farmhouse for the weekend. Najma n Zoya was too much excited, they together planned out the holiday, what to cook for the days ahead to how to dress evrything they have decide toghether. Asad n Dilshad was happy to see them happy.
Early morning they started their journey, Zoya have made Asad to wear a casual, in which he is looking ever so hot. Whereas she n Najma is in skirts. As usual in car Zoya starts to get bore, so she insists to play untakshari.
"Phoopi aapko bhi gana hoga, aur Mr. Khan aap bhi.."
"Ms. Farooqui, aapko dikh nahi raha hai main drive kar raha hoon? Chup bathiye aur mujhe concentrate karne dijiye."
"Off oh Mr. Khan aap hamesha itne spoilt sport kyun hai?"
"What? Ms. Farooqui I need to concentrate!"
"Haan to mai kounsa mana kar rahi hoon! Main to bas gana gane ko bol rahi hoon"
"Aap kabhi to aapne childish behaviour se bahar nikalie. Its dangerous!"
"Dekhie Mr. Khan mujhe pata hai aap mujhse har jayenge isilie bahana bana rahe hai aap"
"Oh please Ms. Farooqui aapne kabhi aapna gana suna hai? Masallah bahere ko bhi sunai de aapki gana!"
"Mr. Khan u r so mean! Jaise aap koi Arijit Singh ho. Bathroom singer kahene ki bhi hasiyat nahi hai aap ki. Samjhe aap? Phoopi dekhiye na Mr. Khan mujhe dant rahe hai"
"Aap aise bacho ki tarah kyun hamesha ammi se complain karti hai?"
'Haw to kya hua? Phoopi hai meri! Aapse jada pyar karti hai mujhe. Samjhe aap? Hia na phoopi?"
"Aur aapko ye galatfami kabse hui hai? Wo mere ammi hai to jaher si bat hai wo mujhse jada pyar karti hai"
"Nahi wo meri phoopi hai"
"Aapse pahele wo mere ammi hai"
"Phoopi.."
As they started fighting Dilshad n Najma started moving their head once at Asad's direction then at Zoya's.
"SHUT UP!" Dishad shouted being tired of their fight, "Koi kuch nahi bolega. Asad kyun bechari se lad rahe ho? Abhi tumhara concentration kaha hai?" she scolded Asad while Zoya gave a victory look to Asad. "...aur Zoya, main mere teeno bacho se pyar karti hoon, Use tang mat karo hum teeno khelte hai." Now Asad gave a smile as his ammi's bechari Zoya got scolded by his ammi only.
Both looked at each other angrily n turned away their faces.
They reached there at afternoon. Zoya is the most excited one. She with Najma visited the whole house. Its a banglow patern house made with logs n there is a big garden surrounded the banglow with a pool. Zoya n Najma sat in the hall after visiting the house. They talked over some coffee n snacks. They planned to have barbeque in the garden n to their surprize Asad insist on cooking. After some more chit chatthey left to prepare things for dinner.
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The evening is enjoyable. A light breeze I flowing making everyone happy. Najma collected some wood to lit a bonfire. Asad is all set to cook dinner outside in the garden. Dilshad is reading some book at other corner of the garden, as she has been strictly forbidden to do any work. Zoya was baking some special stuff for dinner. She came in the garden with the plate n sat with Dilshad. After a while she got up to check the preparation. When Zoya reached the other side she saw the bonfire n got scared. No one was there. Suddenly due to a stormy wind the set up of the woods got disturbed n it reach near some bushes bunrning them too. Zoya caught in the middle of this mess. Shee stood rooted at the spot. Flashes of a building in fire comes in front of her eyes. She cried loudly, "Ammi aag. Ammi Bachao!"
Everyone rushed to the place, they saw bushes are burning n Zoya in the middle of it screaming for help. Asad rans toward her n hold up his hand, "Ms. Farooqui come with me. Its okay m here." but Zoya doesn't pay any hid. Asad under stands that she is in shock, "Zoya trust me, main hoon na"
"No, no! It will burn us. No Mr. Khan it will burn u!" she spoke panting, shaking like a dry leaf.
Asad caught her hand, "Nothing will happen to u I promise I will be always with u right? I promise I will never leave u alone. Come with me"
N it did the magic, she easily complied with him. But something triggered in her mind. "I will never leave u alone" she felt that she have heard it before but couldn't remember where. She is trying hard to remember but everything got black in front of her eyes n she loses her consciousness
Asad got her out from there n looked into her eyes, "Zoya r u ok?" but she didn't respond. Asad looked carefully when he understood that her eyes are blank n she is losing her consciousness. He caught her quickly before he hit the ground. He carried her to her room n made her lie properly, Dilshad Sat near her n sprinkles some water. She stirs n again got back in sleep. They left her to take rest concluding it happened due to shock.
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She hugged Asad tightly, "...Aap hi mere Mr. Khan ho..."..."Mr. Khan mujhe Ice-cream chahiye...".."ok I'll give it to somebody else..."..."Aap ko kuch nahi pata Mr. Khan"..."Aapko mujhe manana chahiye tha na?"...she sits on his lap n caressing his face...she stands on the car roof n falls from there...'choo mantar ho...'...Asad carrying her... "...Aap sharma kyun rahe ho? I have seen it all"..."..Aap bohot kushnaseeb hai"..."Sab ke pas family thodi hota hai"..."...Meri ammi bikul phoopi jaisi hoti..."..."Abbu ko hi to dhoondne ayi hoon iyahan"..."Kya main hamesha akele rahungi?"..."aap akele nahi hai, main hoon na aapke sath"..."Hum hai aapke family..."..."..aap bohot achi hai"...
"Aap hamesha mere sath rahenge?"
"Hamesha"
"Promise?"
"Hmm promise"
Zoya woke up startled, sweating continuously. She got up from the bed n ran towards Asad's room.
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Asad was thinking about the fire incident standing beside the window. He had a strong feeling that Zoya's phobia regarding fire may be due to her past. He wanted to find out what happened with her in her childhood due to which she became pyrophobic. But how? He was thinking all this when Zoya ran into him n hugged him in a force that he almost lost his balance. He quickly steadied himself n tried to understand what just happened. When he feels that Zotya is crying uncontrollably n shaking he became concerned, "Zoya What happened? R u ok?"
"No! Mujhe sab kuch yaad aa gaya Mr. Khan."
"Kya yaad aa gaya?"
"Uss rat..."
Realisation dawned upon him. He tightened his grip n led her to the bed. He tried to free himself but Zoya shook her head n hugged him more tightly. Asad was fearing her reaction, but this made him really shocked.
"Aapko sab pata tha aapne bataya kyun nahi? Main aapse naraz hoon!"
"Zoya main aapko batana chahata tha, par mujhe laga ki aap mujhe galat samjhenge. Aur main nahi chahata tha aisa ho, main nahi chahata tha aap ye samjhe ki mai aapko sympathy ki najar se dekh raha hoon. Aisa nahi hai Zoa...I really care for u...main...main aapki sach mein madat karna chahata hoon, dil se, aapko agar mai ye batata to aapko lagta main aappe taras kha raha hoon, but aisa bilkul nahi...aap.."
"I love u..." she cut him off in middle.
"Nahi aap galat samajh...one sec...what! Aap.."
"I love u Mr. Khan...main janti hoon aap emotionally challenged hai par aapke akhein nahi. Ur eyes spoke it all which is in ur heart. Aap ko kya lagta hai mujhe nahi pata aapko meri kitni fikar hai? Aapke har dant mein, har care mein mere liye Mohabbat chupi hai? Mujhe sab pata hai. Aapke akhein mujhse aapki mohabbat ka izhar karta hai. N I know aap hamesha mere sath rahenge hai na?"
Asad couldn't understand how to express his happiness, he is shocked litteraly. He didn't know that his emotions were so easily readable. He just caught her hands n kissed them lightly, "Zoya..." his eyes got moistened, "I love u too..."
"Kya! Bas itna hi? Aise karenge aap propose? Aise nahi hoga. I need a proper proposal!" She snatched her hands from his grip n pouted cutely...
Asad face palmed himself, who will say now that she is being so sensible just a moment ago? "I think it is what people called proposal!"
"Allah miyan whats wrong with u Mr. Khan! Aap ise proposal kahete hai? Isse acha proposal to koi robot bhi karta hai. Aap kis jamane men hai Mr. Khan? Aapne nahi dekha filmo mein hero kitne romantic tarike se propose karte hai heroin ko? Mujhe bhi waisa proposal chahiya bas! A beautiful candle-light dinner, rose petals ke baris, soft romantic music, mera favourite pizza...aw how romantic! Proposal aise ho jo is dunia se juda ho. Samjhe aap? Allah miyan whats wrong with u! Kaise insan ko mere pas bheja aapne? Aapko to kuch bhi nahi pata! Ab ye bhi mujhehi sikhana hoga aapko? Aapko tp basics bhi...mmm...mmm.."
Asad caught her soft lips with his hard one n kissed her softly...
"Aap kitna bolti hai Ms. Farooqui..." saying so he left from there, smiling at her shocking self as if she have seen a ghost!
"Allah miyan whats wrong with me! Kya ye sach tha ya mai abhi bhi neend mein hoon..." a shocked Zoya thought looking at Asad's retreating figure...
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So this is the final end! Kaisa laga? do tell me plz...😊😊
plz ignore my mistakes...
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Heyy...H.E.N.A...thanx for the P.M...and epilogue also...atleast we got a better closure...to this wonderful story...ASYA growing into their relaionship...the part where Zoya remembered everything and ran to Asad's room and hugged him was lovely...and then their confession...iam content with this end and loved it...do continue soon with other stories.
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well Hena it was a Awsome Epilogue
the perfect ending
Glad that U make Zoya remember the hangover incident
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I LOVED IT❤️


Hope to catch U with a New Sotry
KABHI story offcourse
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Res for: Aroo,Affu,Fari(princess),Jas,Shivani,Saima&Tamara aapi & my dear Choti(Bano)😉

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