AsYa TS - Message in a bottle, EPILOGUE, Page 25 (17/11)

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Kaussar!

I just love this story..

The title is what got me hooked..

Zoya is a doc and Asad a lawyer..

I thought Part 1 was brilliantly written but Part 2 is even more AWESOME..

Now I can't wait for Part 3..

And also want Broken Wings update soon..

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

lovely update yr...

amazing...

plzzz post 3rd part soon i cant wait...

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ak020203

@ak020203

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Great story.. Loved it..

Hope,Zoe is Zoya ..

Thanks

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Hello...Kaussar...well iam commenting for the first time...on your work...and it is a very interesting and brilliant T.S...Asad as lawyer...i think this is the top second occupation for him in recent times...i really liked the characterisation...very well defined...his attraction and then confession of love towards zoya is beautiful...Zoya she is kind of a mystery here for me...waiting for the next update...and plz..do P.M me if possiblle.

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Liked this update too and am happy that we are getting updates so quickly.

Thank you kausar 🤗

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Nice story
Lovely updates
Zoya wrote a letter & put in a bottle. She throw bottle in sea & asad found IT. Both met several times & asad always felt connected with her. He once again visited goa for break & met zoya again. He wanted to make sure that Zoe is zoya whom he love. Waiting for last part soon. Thanks