AsYa TS - Message in a bottle, EPILOGUE, Page 25 (17/11)

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Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

it was simply superb...
It was an enjoyable read...
I loved it...
Zoya also had sum feelings fr him,..
Loved the way asad approached Zoe/zoya...
Nd I loved zoya expressions when she find the lttr again...
So beautiful prt that was..
Feel gud ts dear...
Waiting for epilogue :-)

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
res...
unres...
mai phir tapak gaya 😉..
timing isse kehte hai Ms. Kaussar...😆
hehe yea😆.. thats good.
another lovely update...
Asad went to Goa to relax but deep down the reason was to meet Zoya...
wo to nahi mili but his subject of attention n attraction Zoe mil gayi.. 😳...
yea Zoe was definitely his subject of attraction and attention.
n m glad she also remembers all the tymz they had met... 😊.. yep.. she has also noticed him.
chalo thodi hi sahi but the ice broke n they had a talk... kam se kam next tym vn they vl meet it wud b different frm other tyms 😃...
asad miya to gaye... lol... and fr being a lawyer he did a good job in guessing Zoe n Zoya could be one person... mjhe uski qualification pe koi doubt nahi 🤣 🤣.. haha... i didn't think of his qualifications.. his love filled mind drove him.. but i guess being a lawyer helped.
so happy that sad knows now that he loves Zoe ... yea he realized it before it was too late.😃
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waiting from their next meet...
tonight it is... hope b4 midnyt ... bcz i want to b here vn u update...

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
i m good!!
u?

i'm also good... was just too busy and then went on a vacation.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Lovely update!!!!!!!!
AsYa met again!!
Asad accepted he is in love!!
And came on conclusion that Zoe is Zoya!!
Why does people say their pet names...
Waiting for next part!!!

thanks Afu.. glad you loved it... hehe yea why do people use pet name all the time.. especially when getting introduced to someone isn't it?😆

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: p_s05
I celebrate my birthday on the first day he saw her. 😆

This was an absolute pleasant read, look forward to the upcoming parts.

Aww thats so nice... then this story became yours... glad you loved it.. Thanks Dear.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: p_s05
Part 2:

"He finally accepted that it was love, he had fallen in love with Zoe a little each time he had met her and today he was sure of it. She was the woman whom Allah had created for him and she was his destiny."

❤️

Loved the tranquility of this chapter and Asad's realization that Zoe and Zoya are the same women. That moment of frustration where he concludes that he subconsciously wants both Zoe and Zoya to be the same women was very palpable.

thank you Dear...i had hoped it to be a tranquil chapter where they both sort of find each other in true sense even though they parted after meeting... so i'm glad you found it so... yea even though Zoe is the one whom he was attracted to he had liked the girl Zoya too.. he had liked her thinking and her nature and because of the way he found the letter, he wanted the two woman to be the same because then everything really fell into place and he would be more sure of how much connected she was to him.😃

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

loved it...

awesome yrrr...

asad's letter scene was my favorite...

thnxxx for pm...

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: jas91
res
Kitu mujhe u didn't PM😡😡😡

Actually Dear i didn't PM anyone... thought you all were around and then will PM after 3rd update since i was planning to update soon.

unres
2 good things happened in this part
Asad met Zoya & concluded she is same Zoya
& he realized that he loves her
Yea it's a good thing he did not take forever to realize things..😉
I loved d updt😃
D whole beach scne was beautifully written👏
its ur forte that u describe d scene so well that we can picture it easily⭐️⭐️⭐️.. Aww.. thanks Jas.. so happy to know that.😃
D way Zoya entered & they met was so serene
both were hesitant at 1st but got comfortable 😃
both remembered there all meetings😛
yea even though they didn't talk about anything personal, they were still so drawn to each other.
Asad didn't wanted her 2 leave
& when he realized back in hotel that she can b same Zoya his reaction were like he will jump & shout like a teenager in love😆.. hehe yea he was really happy and wanted to meet her immediately.
It was fantastic Kitu😃👏.. thanks.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: maha2012
Kaussar this story is beautifully written😳❤️
totally new concept..⭐️
my mid terms start on tuesday so im a bit busy with studies
thus gave a small comment..
i loved it❤️

thanks Maha... i understand.. exams are more important.. happy to know that you loved the story.

Best of luck Dear.😃

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

res

unres

what do i say it was magical😛

I m totally awed

thanku so much Kitu 4 writing thins on Asya🤗

I Love u more❤️

Asad sent Zoya msg in bottle😃😉

D letter was superb loved it😛

d dinner date was perfect⭐️⭐️⭐️

& i can feel d overwhelming feelings of Zoya while reading d updt😃

Great Job buddy👏👏👏

2 fvrt parts of mine

he felt that meeting Zoe in Goa might be his last connection with her unless he did something and somehow found her. He felt that he should no longer leave everything to destiny. Destiny had guided him and even made him realize his feelings and it was up to him now to do something about it.

But the moment he opened his door and their eyes met, she felt as if she had come home. She was sure that this was the man for whom she had been waiting. She had finally fallen in love just like she had always dreamt. She had found her Prince charming. He may not be perfect, he may be carrying a lot of baggage; nevertheless he was her prince charming, he was her knight in shining armor and he would be the person who would hold her hand even when her hair turned all white and she had no tooth once again.

Hamein epilogue bhi milega❓😳

Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago