"If you plan on kissing, go for it, I swear I am sleeping."
I will come back to that later...😳
..I'm crying for some reason after having read the update. I don't know how to express just beautiful this was. It was so heartfelt! 👏
The emotions, the promise, the love was just so heart touching. I literally cannot get over this beautiful piece of writing. I know for a fact that I would never truly get over this - ever! I really mean it.
Well Juliet! You had be clinging to the phone AND laptop when I read the update THRICE, because I just couldn't put it away from me.
""AND YOU ARE HURTING ME! HOW DARE YOU?" He roared. Her lips quivering, her eyes wide with alarm."
- What even.. My mouth was wide open when I read this part.
"Aahil's lips cut, his own teeth suck into his inner cheeks, blood filled his mouth. "MORE! MORE! MORE!" his mind demanded."
- I absolutely loved this scene. It was filled with action and I could so feel his inner turmoil on wanting to be punished for what he did. Poor Aahil!
I was touched by the conversation between Aahil and Sanam when she came to patch him up after the fight. The words which you used were so apt.
I laughed out loud at the scene where they were watching the movie. Oh god, I could totally imagine Aahil behave like this.😆
"Aahil could not let this go." You okay there Sanam. You seem very hot and bothered." He snorted. Her jaw dropped, did he say that. She grabbed the same pillow flinging it at him running out of the room utterly crimson red. Aahil caught the pillow laughing harder. The best laugh he had in years."
"If you plan on kissing, go for it, I swear I am sleeping."
- God! I have no words to express just how beautiful this is. ❤️
AND that passionate night after they confessed! I'm turning crimson over here.
""MINE! Just mine! I love you Sanam!" He said before he captured her lips."
Juliet - my darling! You are something! So dear, so pure and so damn talented! I fell in love with this and I am so glad that I got a chance to red this.
I love you, Juliet! You are so utterly wonderful. 🤗❤️
