ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143 - Page 53

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Swapno...😊
Thanx for the PM... 😛
Well this was a Well Written 👏 and a Very Good Update... ⭐️
It was like those filler update which takes the story forward...with gradual increase in the story... 😳 though still no change in AsYa's relationship.. 😕 I wonder what significance the Title of this story has it to the plot... 😆
Liked first part...Asad's and Nikhat relationship was shown...a first of his step siblings part in this story...it was nice to see their understanding..same like show. 😊
Second part...Zoya's monologues...were funny 😆 yet logical...any girl would worry and fear like that...😊
Third part...they started living with eachother under a roof...and unknowingly and unacceptedly started taking care of eachother also...like that candle part...which was in prologue also.😳
Both revealed eachothers past..to eachother... 😉 then to also...no growth in feelings... 😕
Uncle Aftab got Heartattack ... 😲
Asad left abruptly and Zoya got the college accomodation... 😕
What Now..?
Interesting update... 😊 enjoyed reading them after a long time.. 😳
Continue soonish. 😃

Originally posted by: Tunailuvsahil

What asad leav bhopal for forever

It was a really good update...Asya learnt about each other...
Asad will leave? Will Zoya move out of KV too...?

plz update soon

I dont think so it was bad..it was absolutely perfect. .!
It was written so well..
Loved reading this one..
awesome..
asad left so abruptly. .he had to though..
excited about what will happen next.

update sooon plss..:)

Missed you Swapno

Nice update

Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

So Now What Asad Is Gone Zoya Is Alone...😔

Update Next Part Soon...😃

awesome part

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Superb update. Thanx for the pm. Pls update the nxt part soon