ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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Kanwal4salman

@Kanwal4salman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#481

M' loving it...😊.

plz update soon next part i cant wait more...

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#482

Really awesome story.

loving it so much.

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Heena

@aarzoo50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#483

lovely update sadia...
zoya has seen the harsher side of lyf bt still she doesnt let it steer her lyf into nothingness...
asad is abt to go back...
n nw may b aftr us he vl come to kno abt her past...
his reaction would b interesting to see...

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

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Posted: 10 years ago

#484

Loved it!

Zoya has to move out!

She has only a week to find her stay!

Asad and Zoya didnt interact that much both were busy!

Zoya went to Khan Villa and sat on the bench in the garden

It was raining

he went to her

she was wet becasue of the rain!

Zoya passtt!

Thanks for the PM

Please continue soon!😊

Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago

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Amulya

@Amulya9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#485

Swapno...🤗🤗

Finally read last 3chaps..

I loved how zoe made him smile wth her world famous blabbering when he was crying...

Oh my baby asad ...his song😭 i never heard it bt lyrics r so so beautiful😭

He left her in rain...akdu always run away from his love...

Oh my zoee n her past😭 kinna pure soul mere baby ka... thats y i love them so much...

Aw..my baby came to khan villa..right place...she belongs to it😉

I do love rain fr two reasons..it gives happiness..n sometimes it hides our tears from others...

Was it rain that soaked them or was it the grief that completely absorb them. New feelings are yet to come... Almighty knows! When...!😳

Both r meant to b ...coming chaps me ...its all in ur hands sweets...

Btw i must say ..im really loving this story of urs...u r so gud at emotional scenes...bachoko jaldi make them fall in love..pehelse bahut EC hai

Continue soon..

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#486

interesting concept will love to read more

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#487

What i say dear...Beautiful...Perfect...👏👏

Zoya's past is finally reveal...she accept the things as it is & come out to be a strong woman...

She first time cried feeling his pain...& for the first time he feel peace with Zoya...

There again the new challenge for her...the way she tried to smile in that situation also...try to stand strong...I loved this Zoya u portrayed...

The end of this update...perfect...last time he left her there in rain alone & this time he is there to collect her...rain that soaked them or was it the grief that completely absorb them...loved it...

Now I want to read more & soon...so plz come soonish...

take care...