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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: anopama
Very cryptic
But it brought tears to my eyes

Seriously...it did

It wasn't even meant to be sad...am I the only one laughing at my craziness 😆

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: rajsmi
Your intro to the OS was scary...nothing else was :-)
Beautiful OS! he is her shadow...wish we all had a shadow like that!!

Thank you so much

Hope you are well 😊

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: keyahira
Whoa
TVD all over again

Am going to sound dunce but what is TVD?

😳

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Niya_789
And you say I am scared to write anything new 😲

Appi seriously you write so well and still you a scared .. Hum readers pe itna toh trust karo 😆

Coming back to the OS

VAMPIRE LOVE STORY ❤️

Its one of my fav concepts and you wrote it beautifully 🤗

Write more OS's I want to read more and more😳

And yes "Dar se mat daro.. Kyunki Dar ke aage Jeet hai " 🤣

Lol

I do trust you...I don't trust myself 😆

Thank you so much Niya, I really appreciate it

🤗

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: gowtu
Huh !!!!

Emotionally beautiful updt it was
Loved it,,.

''I promise.. Amongst the all shadows.. I ll be there for u..'' <3

Thank you Gowtu

How are you sweetie...it's been ages, hope all is well with you

Lots of love

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: falala333
Ok first of all forget crazy... That was AMAZING!!
I'm gonna go with he's a ghost or vampire.. Other then that I have no idea what to make of him.. And I love these type of stories!! That are mysterious, and get your heart beat racing while you read.. You should write a part 2.. Maybe he comes back or something like that..

Hey

Thank you so much, am glad you liked it.

You can take your pick vampire or ghost, I didn't specify as I couldn't make up my mind lol

Best wishes

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Badi Aapu what was dat?
What happened to Asad?
How did he die?
I want answers Aapu!!!
Eid Mubarak🤗...

😆

It's an OS I do to have answers you can use your imagination to create them

And to answer your first question...I have no idea...random craziness I guess

Khair Mubarak, hope u had a good one 😊

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: asyafreva
OMG!
That was just so... WOW!

How can you call that crazy?

I want this to be continued with them living happily ever after...!!

It reminded me so much of twilight!

I was totally into the Twilight Series once...!

You better continue this...!

Make her what he is!

Make them get married...!

Make them have kids!

I want them together side by side...

I know in their hearts they will be but in physical sense also i want them!

Loved it!

Don't forget to give us the next part!

Please?

Thank you so so much, am glad you liked it

Lol...I was crazy enough to write this...not brave enough to write another part to it...I think this is enough for now

But you can continue if in your head and take them where ever you want 😉

Lots of love

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Amin21
Firstly Eid mubarak to u ur family n friends
What a concept yaar👏
Splendid job
Beautifully written.
Hey if not ff or ss can u please make it ts .
Its really wonderful n want to read about it more .

Thank you so much Amin

Eid Mubarak to you too, hope you had a good one

Lol I do to think I could make it into anything longer

Best wishes 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Sis I am in awe of how you so effortlessly write anything... I loved this one too.

The mystery the uncertainty and all in all the whole feel of this OS was just what you wanted it to be creepy n scary.

I wish this was at least a ts with we getting to know what Zoya does next. But won't force you to write further if this is all you think should be there to this story.

Trust me sis, this one was way better than the other stories based on vampires that I have read on the forum. I loved it sis.

Mwah 🤗