Amongst the Shadows - AsYa OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Oh god!

That literally had me in a fix...whether to laugh or cry...

Zoya's every reaction was hilarious but after the revelation it became so emotional...the last scene...it was mind-blowing!!

That's really cool...came as a surprise from you!

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Sis I am in awe of how you so effortlessly write anything... I loved this one too.

The mystery the uncertainty and all in all the whole feel of this OS was just what you wanted it to be creepy n scary.

I wish this was at least a ts with we getting to know what Zoya does next. But won't force you to write further if this is all you think should be there to this story.

Trust me sis, this one was way better than the other stories based on vampires that I have read on the forum. I loved it sis.

Mwah 🤗

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome Os...👏👍🏼

Just Love It...😊

Write More Stories Of This Type...😃

Originally posted by: p_s05

😆

🥺

❤️

"'Zoya from that very day I have been with you...like I always was, I was your shadow, where ever you went I went too...amongst all the shadows that surrounded you I was one too'"

"Asad rested his forehead against hers 'I need to go Zoya' he whispered 'no...Asad please...not now not like this' 'I promise you amongst the shadows somewhere I will be there...all you have to do is call for me...but for now...you will have to let me go' Zoya closed he eyes to let the tears that blurred her vision escape 'I have just found you...how can I...' 'Sshhh...I will comeback Zoya...' Zoya raised her head a little to look at him and as she did he kissed her again 'I love you Zoya Farooqui' 'I love you too...Asad Ahmed Khan'"

Poignant!

Originally posted by: marcoe

Even though I loveddd this os

Yet plzzz

Update ARL

Plzzz

Pretty plzzz😭😭

Originally posted by: BurstingBubble

This was an amazing OS Loved it a lot❤️ 'I promise you amongst the shadows somewhere I will be there...all you have to do is call for me...but for now...you will have to let me go' Lovely lines

The ending made me cry.

Beautiful OS

Originally posted by: jas91

Sam di don't say it was crazy

It was mind blowing👏

u reminded me of Twilight

I wish Asad is vampire not ghost

& u have have 2 write part 2 to unite them

Asya ki happy ending married 2gather wid lots of babies lolz😉

Originally posted by: pinks2911

Saima Di...!🤗

Been a long time... Hope you are well..😊

This OS is just AWESOME..⭐️ Definitely not crazy at all!😆

Poor Asad..😕 I thought maybe he was a goon or something..😆

Scared me but made me cry as well..😭 The way Zoya was pleading him not to go..

The last scene was just 👏 So emotional..😭

But what happened to him?? 😲😲

Need I say how wonderful it was..😃👏

Love you Di! Mwah! ❤️

PS : Eid Mubarak to you and your family!🤗

Originally posted by: love.asad.zoya

MAH GOD !!!!!!! 😲 how can u say that it is not good 😕
I really looovvveee ittt ❤️
Awesome work 👏
Asad is vampire and zoya a nerd ... I love the unsusal Jodi ... They r VAMPERD asya
It's just amazing to read asya in vamperd version 😳
Amazing OS 👍🏼
PS- hope u get vamperd 😆 [vampire and nerd ]

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wow its wonderfull...

luv it...

fabulous...

mindblowing...

thx fr the pm...