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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Hey Choti Bajijaan, sorry for being so late, I was at my mum's with no internet for 2 whole days. Sorry dear 😳

OK coming to the update. It was super cute. Asad was so not like our Asad but definitely had a charm of his own and I loved this version of Asad too

Zoya poor her, kitna mushkil hota hai to write without inspiration, am sure we know 😉 😆

But a very good read with all the making babies talk making me giggle like a teenager. It was just so cute 😳

Loved it dear ❤️

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Aww that's was so cute..

Lovely

Zoya, a writer

Too good..

Loved it a lot

N asad ka to kuch pata nahi h..

Hahaha

Cute one but

Lovely talks...

Baap re his teased her so much

nice 1

N she finally got wat she wanted...

Loved each n very bit of d os..

Can't stop loving it

Each n very core was amazingly penned

S big hug from mW!!

Loved it

Awesome

Amazing

Splendid

Tooo cute..

Fabulous

Fantastic

Loved it

Thanks fr d pm

Do write more n keep pming me

Sorry for late commnt

Edited by riddhi1206 - 10 years ago

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PrettYSmile

@PrettYSmile

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Awesome os

Different concept. .

Loved this asad

Nice job

Write more. ...

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Amandeep

@aman1605

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Hey Bano🤗

it was such a beautiful os

Loved it❤️

Naughty Asad☺️☺️

Tnx 4 pm😃

Love Aman❤️

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

sorry for the late comment

this was a amazing os loved it so much

thanx 4 the pm

😃

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

very very very nice Bano.. this OS proves how much you have proven to be a better writer 🤗 Belated Eid mubarak 🤗

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Awesome OS
Eid Mubarak to u as well.
Asad zoya convo & moments were beautifully written
U can make it two shots or three shots to show more abt asad & zoya
Thanks for PM
Sorry for being late as I was sick & enjoyed my Eid on hospital bed but now I m much better.