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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: sasir

aww

loved it
stupid asad
poor zoya
how can u stop it there
plz update soon
cant wait for next one
hope asad wont take wrong decision


thnxx dear...
or aisy moment par hi stop karny ka maza ata hai...
acha dnt mind i m typing nxt update worry not...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Aashii what anemotional update yaar

Poor Zoya she was waiting to tell him the good news

And whats Asad doing.I just hate him.

Why cant he understand her plight?

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm


yaar dnt hate him u will love him in nxt update bas zoya koi mistake na kar dy...
nxt updates bhi emotional hngi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Amulya9

awesome update..
yayy Zoe is preg..
awww ASYA my poor babies in pain coz of their dads...
continue soon aashi


thnxxx dear...
both r in pain me too getting emotional but u will love the future story for sure...
i will cont. soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: H.e.n.a

Yaar aisi point mein koi rukta hai kya!!! 😡

Kitna wait karna parega😭...
Okay so update was fantstc!! Loved it. Misundrstndg...nice. What to do will wait for next update😕...
Plz update soon


i know boht galat time pe stop kiya but blv me mjhy boht maza aya sab log nxt update k liye wait kar rahy hain na or main typing so acha hai na,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: jas91

so Zoya is pregnant

yeh Asad ko achanak kya hua
I m waiting 4 nxt part 2 know what happen nxt
continue soon Ashi😊


asad ko jo hona tha ho gya or nxt update main kaho gi ab zoya ko kya ho gya...
be with me nd u will love nxt update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

lovely update...
zoya is pregnant n wants to share the news with asad...
but m getting negative vibes...
wt does asad want to tel her ... he wants her support in something... n is this something gonna stop zoya from telling asad abt her pregnancy...
plz continue soon...


actually i love separation tracks and emotional updates...
its not going to be negative one but thora separation phir reunion as my title says na...
it depends on zoya what she wants...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: chaithra02

I just read both the parts..This story is amazing.. continue soon and pls pm me for the updates


thnxx and welcome to my work..
for pms buddy me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

So zoya is pregnant yay
So what is asad saying he can't live with zoya bcuz her father destroy his family
But she will not use her baby to bring asad back
Wonder what decision asad made and he want her to stand with him in his decision
I hope it is a decision for them being together
He did promise he can never leave her
Plz write in more english hard to understand
So will he learn of her pregnancy or will she hide it
continue soon


actually i think english main emotions achy se explain nahi hoty...
but i wil try and asad is noy going to break his promise...
u have to stay tuned for nxt update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: ashiii333


asad ko jo hona tha ho gya or nxt update main kaho gi ab zoya ko kya ho gya...
be with me nd u will love nxt update...


what 2 do we r greedy Asya fans😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Separation... No Moreee

Part 3:


AsYa were going through the outskirts of Bhopal and throughout the journey Asad had intertwined his hand with Zoya's hand... Asad brought Zoya to the same farmhouse where they confessed their love for each other for the first time... but Zoya was confused that why they came here...
Zoya: Mr. Khan hum yaha kyun aye hain???
Asad: Mrs. Khan it's a surprise...
Asad and Zoya were standing on the gate from 5 minutes...
Zoya: Mr. Khan agar andar jana hai to bell bajaiye...
Asad: andar koi nahi hai...
Zoya: apko lagta hai last time ki tarha abhi bhi yaha koi nahi rehta...
Asad: nahi yeh ghar jinka hai wo yaha shift nahi huway or...
Zoya: apko kesy pata Mr. Khan???
Asad: app etny sawal kyun poch rahi hain ja kar name plate check kar lejieye na...
Zoya: kyun???
Asad: apko andar jany main aasani hogi...
Zoya came to the left side of the gate but there was a cover on name plate when she removed the cover from name plate it read...
"AsYa Mannat"
Zoya: Mr. Khan yaha to AsYa Mannat likha hua hai or main enhy nahi janti I think humy wapis jana chahieye...
Asad: okay chalieye... he agreed half heartedly...
He was going to move towards his car when she screams... and he smiled because his wife got the point...
Zoya: Allah Miyan... what's wrong with you Mr. Khan... app ne mjhy btaya kyun nahi k yeh hamara ghar hai...
Asad: shukar hai apko samajh aa gya... kesa laga surprise???
Zoya: I love it... thank you Mr. Khan... she hugs him and he reciprocates... They entered the house hand in hand...
Asad: actually its your wedding gift Mrs. Khan par kuch kaam rehta tha to late ho gya but you know its never too late wesy aaj koi occasion nahi hai but mjhy laga k aaj apko gift dena chahieye...
Zoya got emotional after hearing this and tears brim in her eyes...
Asad: you are not happy... ammi abbu sahi keh rahy thy main apko bina galti k saza dy raha hoom I m sorry Zoya but believe me...
Zoya placed a finger on his lips...
Zoya: ssshhh... jab tak hum dono sath hain main khush hoon Mr. Khan or ammi abbu ko mene mana kiya tha but unh one meri baat nahi suni or apko sorry bolny ki zaroorat nahi hai...
Asad: phir app ro kyun rahi hain...
Zoya: Mr. Khan I m not crying it's just a stupid way to show happiness... app se sekha hai...
Asad: oh really... he said pulling her towards him...
Zoya: oh yeah... she said sneaking her arms around his neck...
Asad: Zoya I want to tell you something...
Zoya: go ahead Mr. Khan today I m going to listen to your talk without any interruption... she said creasing his cheek...
Asad: but you have to be with me... he said leaning in her touch...
Zoya: I m always with you...
They made coffee for themselves and settled opposite each other on the couch in the living area...
Asad was getting nervous and Zoya sensed his uneasiness so she took her mug and settled to the right side of Asad and placed her head on his upper arm...
Zoya: Mr. Khan don't hesitate I m hear just for you remember... she said controlling her emotions...
Asad: Zoya I m sorry... mjhy apko iss tarha SM main nahi chorna chahieye tha par mere pas or koi rasta nahi tha I needed some time...
Zoya: I understand Mr. Khan issi vaja se mene apko ghar aany k liye force nahi kiya...
Asad: par main apko KV ly k ja sakta than a...
Zoya: Mr. Khan jo hona tha ho gya app kyun guilty feel kar rahy hain main app ke sath hoon or mere liye bas yehi bat matter karti hai... she said forcing him to face her...
Asad: but I don't deserve you... actually you deserve much better partner than me...
Zoya: where did that come from???
Asad: Zoya meri vaja se app apny abbu se dor hain or apny abbu ki galti hoty huway bhi unhy maaf kar dia... I know it's a big step but apko nahi lagta yeh app ke sath eyadti hai I mean mene dekha hai apko apky abbu k liye roty huway par meri vaja se sab...
Zoya: Mr. Khan main manti hoon mene apni puri life apny abbu ko dhonda or wo mjhy mil bhi gaye but unho ne meri ammi k sath jo kiya wo sab main nahi bhool sakti issi liye mene unhy maaf nahi kiya...
Asad: par abbu wo bhi to galat thy...
Zoya: Mr. Khan unki galti ki saza unhy mil chuki hai infact ammi, najma or apko bhi uss galti ki saza mili hai or mein nahi chahti k meri vaja se phir se...
Asad: lekin mjhy acha nahi lagta k app meri vaja se yeh sab Karen I mean app abbu ko bhi...
Zoya: Mr. Khan main app se boht pyaar karti hoon or yeh bhi janti hoon k app apny abbu se etny arsay bad mily hain or main apny reasons ki vaja se apko saza nahi dy sakti... or apki family meri bhi family hai to main jo chahy kar sakti hoon...
Asad: why did you love me so much??? He said cupping her face...
Zoya: ab iss main bhi problem hai kya???
Asad: nahi problem to nahi hai par app shayad bhool rahi hain k mene apko boht pareshan kiya hai etny din apko vaha akely rehna para or... tears made their way from his eyes...
Zoya: wo hamara karma hai Mr. Khan vaha apka ehsaas mere sath rehta hai main akeli kesy hoon... she said wiping his tears...
Asad: I love you Zoya... I love you so much... he said while hugging her...
Zoya: I love you too Mr. Khan... she reciprocate the hug but soon broke apart...
Zoya: Allah ka shukar hai apko yeh sab kehna tha pata hai main kitna dar gai thi???
Asad: Zoya yeh sab to mjhy confess karna tha or jo baat mjhy app se karni hai wo kuch or hai... par apko bhi mjhy kuch btana than a pehly app btaiye...
Zoya: no way Mr. Khan pehly aaj app apni sari baty complete karengy koi guilt nahi rakhengy samjhy app???
Asad: Mrs. Khan app btaiye na...
Zoya: app bta rahy hain ya main baqi ka ghar dekhny jaon last time apki vaja se reh gya tha...
Asad: yeh ghar ab hamara hai jab chahy app dekh sakti hain pehly mjhy wo baat btaiye...
Zoya: pehly app...
Asad: Zoya...
Zoya: kya Zoya Zoya kar rahy hain btaiye na plzzz...
Asad: Zoya mene aik mall ka project final kiya hai...
Zoya: don't tell me k apko KV main rehna hai Mr. Khan abhi apny sab kuch confess kar liya na ab app ghar aa rahy hain that's final...
Asad: Zoya main ghar par hi rahonga app ke sath par 2 mah k liye Australia jana hoga...
Zoya: apny mjhy pehly kyun nahi btaya??? She said with teary eyes...
Asad: don't you dare to cry... kabhi meri puri bat sun liya kejieye...
Zoya: main nahi ro rahi... she lied...
Asad: achaa listen na mene sab finalize kar dia hai hum dono kal subha Mumbai ja rahy hain vaha se direct Australia... how's that???
Zoya: are you alright Mr. Khan??? She said while checking his forehead...
Asad: mjhy kya hua hai...
Zoya: Australia jany k liye visa lagta hai main aisy hi nahi aa sakti kuch bhi haan...
Asad: I m Asad Ahmad Khan... remember na... apka passport mere pass hai or mene Prasad se keh kar app k liye visa apply kar dia tha...
Zoya: par main nahi aa sakti...
Asad: app ne promise kiya tha k app mere decision main mera sath dengi...
Zoya: par mene Australia aany ka nahi kaha tha...
Asad: Zoya main apko khud se boht din dor rakh chuka ab or nahi hum ja rahy hain and tha's final...
Zoya: or ghar pe sab ko lagy ga k hum un ke sath nahi rehna chahty...
Asad: main ammi abbu se baat kar longa... koi problem nahi hogi...
Zoya: Mr. Khan app samajh nahi rahy Najma pregnant hai ammi akeli hain yahan Nikhat Nuzhat ka college chal raha hai wo akely yeh sab manage nahi kar sakti...
Asad: to kya chahti hain app???
Zoya: app akely Australia jaiye...
Asad: iska matlab app ne mjhy maaf nahi kiya... Zoya main manta hoon meri galti thi par ab app vohi galti karny ja rahi hain...
Zoya: Mr. Khan aisi baat nahi hai app mjhy galat samjh rahy hain... apko vaha kaam k liye jana hai or main vaha kya karongi sara din akeli bore ho jaongi...
Asad: mere liye apki presence matter karti hai or main app k bagair nahi ja sakta...
Zoya: app kyun emotional ho rahy hain hum daily Skype karengy na...
Asad: mjhy app se bat hi nahi karni...
Zoya: Mr. Khan mene apki sari baty suni now its my turn... apko kya lagta hai app se dor rehna mere liye boht easy hai... main bhi app ke sath rehna chahti hoon par hamari family ko hamari zaroorat hai Mr. Khan...
Asad: or mjhy???
Zoya: app k liye to meri jaan bhi hazir hai...
Asad: Zoyaaa... and he made his way towards the gazebo where they had danced on "Bol na halke halke"...
Precap: AsYa romance...




Sooo hows it????
Kesa laga????
Ignore my mistakes and errors...
Plzzz leave your precious comments and hit like...
Do me a favor...
Should Zoya go with Asad or not??? and what about the good news???
I know i have my story but app sab ka opinion mil jaye ga na sooo let me know haan...
Next update till 35+ likes and 20+ replies...
With love Ashii...

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