AsYa TS 'A Journey From Bhaang Wali Night To Pyaar Ka Ehsaas' - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Concept👏😊
Asad n Zoya lost control due to bhang pakoda😲
Asad woke up n thought Zoya is kissing him in her senses😲
But wen he understood dat she came to her senses now, he stepped back😲
Zoya is blaming Asad thinking him a cheap playboy
She is right on how can someone fall in love in just a night dat also wid someone who he always judged n insulted 4m day 1😕
Glad dat Asad has not put blame on her or insulted her
Lets see how Asad convinces her dat he loves her


I am glad u wrote sumthn different. I have read some other stories on dis type but in almost every story Asad blamed everything on Zoya n insulted her badly teln her many cheap things. And then v have to read Zoya crying while Asad beiing a jerk. Glad dat u wrote sumthn different on Zoya thinking him wrong n Asad trying to explain her.


thanks for such a wonderful reply dear and i hope u like nxt prt...
also i m going to make totally new it for all asya fans
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sasir

interesting

update soon


yeah i wil surely cont. soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
OMG how could Zoya utter such words 2 asad...
my poor asad
bt it was interesting.
continue soon n pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
hay, Aashi continue this TS
ITS INTERESTING
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Nice start
Different type of asad & zoya
Asad planned to show her his true feeling & made her his wife
Continue soon after exam
All the best for exam
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Wow this is lovely
It is nice to see the rolls reverse
Asad accepts it but zoya is all in doubt and blame
She calls him a player he has experience and knows what to do
Waiting to see how he wins her
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start
Different type of asad & zoya
Asad planned to show her his true feeling & made her his wife
Continue soon after exam
All the best for exam
Thanks for pm


thank you dear not only for giving it a go but also for wishing me for exams...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Wow..
Superb
TS on asya bhaang night..
I wish yeh show mein hota..
Never mind.. Now u r writing for us
Continue soon
And wow.. I dont knw ki aaj kal examination hall mein aise ideas bhi aate hai..😆
PM me when u update
And title should be "Making Her Mine forever" or "Mine forever"
Just a suggestion
Waise u knw the story well
Good luck

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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: ImmortalLove

Wow..

Superb
TS on asya bhaang night..
I wish yeh show mein hota..
Never mind.. Now u r writing for us
Continue soon
And wow.. I dont knw ki aaj kal examination hall mein aise ideas bhi aate hai..😆
PM me when u update
And title should be "Making Her Mine forever" or "Mine forever"
Just a suggestion
Waise u knw the story well
Good luck


its my pleasure u like my work...
title is really nice yaar i m going to use it but with some changes...
Edited by falak333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Hiii... I m Ashii... thank you alll of you for liking my new story...
Actually i m having exams but your love brought me here so i m back with new part hope you like it...

Part 2:

Asad was waiting for her near his car when she came again in that saree and he was imagining their dance and all... Zoya noticed him smiling at nothing but ignore him and she was going to sit in car when she felt a tug at her pallu and she turned to see Asad who was holding her pallu with mischievous smile...

Zoya: Now what???

Asad came closer to her and places her pallu around her neck and spoke...

Asad: Wo actually... there are some marks on your neck from last night so I thought to cover it...

Zoya was touched with his behavior bcox he is pure gentleman but she is not going to fall for him too soon...

Zoya: Actually mjhy nahi pata chala thank you Mr. Khan...

Asad: Don't need to thank you Zoya its my duty...

Zoya: Excuse me???

Asad: Kuch nahi I think we should leave...

The drive to the Khan Villa was very quite but Asad never left a chance to glance his lady who was just sitting next to him... Zoya also notice that but pay no head... They reached Khan Villa where Dilshad and Najma were all ready to go Dargah bcox court has released Rashid but Asad does not pay attention and moves towards his room... Dilshad and Najma left while Zoya was really very nervous for being alone only with Mr. Khan again...

Zoya was in her room when Mr. Khan barged in her room that too just in his pants firstly she was shocked to see his shamelessness but soon she started drooling over him... Asad was very impressed with her antics after all she was coming back to normal and he spoke...

Asad: Zoya if your checking out session is over come to my room...

Zoya: Main apko nahi dekh rahi thi wo to bas six-packs no I mean main aap k room main kyun aon I m neither your slave nor your wife so plzzz leave my room...

Asad: Okay mene socha tha aap khud aa jayen gi but you left me no other way...

Saying so he came and took her in his arms and started moving towards his room...

Zoya: Allah Miyan... What's wrong with you Mr. Khan... kal raat ke bad aap yeh to nahi soch rahy k you can again come to me and hang out with me so let me tell you Mr. Khan main aisi larki nahi hoon or agar aap ne kuch kiya na to... to main phupi ko bta doon gi...

Asad: Apko jo btana hai bta dejieye ga but first of all you go and fresh n up I know aap ko meri advice ki zaroorat nahi hai par mene apny washroom main aap k liye sab arrange kar dia hai you just go and relax tab tak main kuch ly kar aata hoon...

Zoya: Seriously ap mjhy apna washroom offer kar rahy hain but no way main apny room main ja rahi hoon or mjhy jab fresh hona hoga ho jaon gi aapki permission nai chahieye mjhy so excuse me...

She was about to go when Asad block her way and spoke...

Asad: App khud ja rahi hain ya main apko khud washroom main chor k aon and I m damn sure aap aisa nahi chahti haina???

Zoya: Zabardasti hai kya???

Asad came close to her and whisper in her ear...

Asad: Jab aap khud meri baat lengi to zabardasti kesi or haan kal raat ke bad to aap ke sath zabardasti kar bhi nahi sakta bcox I know aap bhi vohi feel karti hain jo main feel kar raha hoon and he drop a wet kiss near her ear...

Zoya just forgot to breathe at that moment...

Zoya: Asaddd...

Asad: Aap kyun mjhy se door bhaag rahi hain or main janta hoon kal raat job hi hua aap bhi ussy galat nahi manti or...

Zoya: Main washroom ja rahi hoon apko or kuch karny ki zaroorat nahi hai...

She left at that instant leaving a smiling Asad behind...

In Washroom:

Zoya was in shock bcox Mr. Khan has arranged a lot for her like water tub was filled with hot water and a variety of shampoos and conditioners for her use were there... She was really impressed by her Akdu who was becoming a Majnu...

Zoya: Allah Miyan... yeh Mr. Khan ko kyaa ho gya hai aik hi raat main etna change kesy ho gye or to or mjhy apna washroom offer kar rahy hain sooo sweet na... eska matlab wok kal raat ko galti nahi samjhty yeahhh...

Asad was in his room when he heard her screaming...

Asad: Zoya what happened??? Do you need any help???

Zoya: Nahi wo mera favorite shampoo dekha na to bas aisy hi excited ho gai or aap kyaa bahir hi khary hain room se bahir jaiye I need some privacy Mr. Khan...

Asad: Haan to door lock hai na or main bas iss liye room main hoon shayad apko koi help chahieye ho...

Zoya: Okay never mind aap bas bed side pe rehna idhar mat aaiye ga...

Asad: Okay but I m here only...

Zoya: Allah Miyan... aapne mere Mr. Khan ke sath kyaa kar dia yeh to total new piece hai or etna sweet kyun bol rahy hain mjhy diabetes ho gayi to no way apko kuch karna hoga mjhy vohi Akdu Ahmad Khan pasand hai or yeh valy to hain bhi Besharam Ahmad Khan but andar ki baat pata hai I love him moreee...

She was lying in his bath tub relaxing just then she closed her eyes to remember last night... Her cheeks automatically turned red by just imagining them in each other arms that too totally naked and she spoke...

Zoya: Hayeee Allah main yeh raat to chahty huway bhi nai bhool sakti... I know mene subha kafi over react kiya but main or kyaa karti iss se pehly Mr. Khan sara blame mjhy pe dalty mene unhi ko expert and all keh dia but seriously I m impressed he was trying to make it perfect I know kafi budhu hoon main par kyaa karein Mr. Khan ko aisi dobara dekhny ka moqa mily ya nahi... agar mery man;ny ke bad wapis Akdu mode pe shift ho gye to na baba main aisa risk kyun loon I just love to tease him but yeh Romance naam ki chiriya Sher Khan k paas kab ayi I mean is he was really romancing with me some moments ago or I was dreaming... Naaa he waswith me that too for real and more over he was in his senses bas ab thora time or phir main bhi bta doon gi k I too like him no I love him... I love Asad...

She was again enjoying their moments when a knock on door disturbed her... She thought to tease him more so she spoke...

Zoya: Apki problem kya hai Mr. Khan subaha se keh rahy thy fresh ho jao or ab disturb karny lag gaye...

Asad: Actually I was wondering do you need anything I mean may be some ladies suff and all...

Zoya was going red with such type of question that too from Asad but she composes herself and spoke...

Zoya: No Mr. Khan I don't need anything and thanks for asking...

Asad: Okay...

Asad was shocked with sudden changes in him but he loved to do such things that too for her Miss. Zoya Farooqui no correction would be Mrs. Asad Ahmad Khan...

Zoya: Ya Allah... kahi yeh khwab to nahi par agar yeh khwab bhi hain to main kabhi bhi jagna nahi chaho gi... par jo bhi ho main Mr. Khan ko etni aasani se nahi chorny vali its my turn to rule over him...

Zoya came out from washroom wearing a baby pink colored bathrobe with wet hears... Asad heard the click of knob and turned backwards but froze... He looked at her from top to bottom and his eyes went wide bcox bathrode was just reaching till her mid thighs and she was looking like a new born baby... His intense gaze was burning her cheeks so she cleared her throat to get his attention...

Zoya: Wo Mr. Khan mere kapry yaha nai thy to main...

Asad: Beautiful...

Zoya: Ji???

Asad: Mera matlab hai app khari kyun hai come sit na...

Zoya was now sitting on his bed when Asad gave her a tablet and handled her a glass of juice... She raised her eyebrows on amusement...

Asad: Its pain killer or main janta hoon apko inn cheezo ki zaroorat nahi hai but for my sake take it plzzz...

Zoya was really touched with his behavior and gulped the medicine...

Asad: Actually ammi or najma abhi nahi aany valy I think you should rest or unky aany ka bad apko time nahi mily ga to acha hai app yeh time thora relax ho jayen...

Zoya: Mr. Khan aap aisy behave kar rahy hain jesy main abhi abhi baby deliver kar k ayi hoon just relax haan humny bas kal raat...

Zoya stoped bcox reality hit upon her and she cursed her big mouth for uttering such stuff...

Zoya: Wo mera matlab tha k...

Asad: I know apko abhi etni jaldi nahi hai par iss se pehly k hum kuch karein like you said in the heat of moment I hope you should go and rest...

Zoya was about to go when Asad grab her hand and flushed her against himself...

Zoya: Mr. Khan yeh...

Asad keep his index finger on her rosy lips she felt a current pass through her body and he spoke...

Asad: Ssshhh!!! I know apko boht sense hain kapry pehn'ny ki and all but aj aap kuch extra pehnain gi I mean like scarf with your jeans...

Zoya: Kyun???

Asad: Aap shayad bhool rahi hain kal raat... He said while creasing her right cheek with his thumb...

Zoya: Yaad hai mjhy kal raat hum dono I mean wo sab...

Asad: Exactly so I just wanted to say that you have some marks like...

Zoya: Love bites kehty hain unhy marks nahi or etni aqal hai mjh main k kesy cover up karna hai...

Asad: Ohhh experience haan???

Zoya: Aisa wesi larki nahi hoon main... that was my first time...

Asad: I know...

Zoya glares him but he composes himself and spoke...

Asad: I know hum dono ka first time tha or apko bhi yeh bat pata thi par phir bhi aapne kaha k main kafi expert hoon and all but you were also right at your place...

Zoya: Matlab aap pehly bhi...

Asad: Zoya you were my first and will be my last "Forever"... and I wanted to say that I m in love with you from day one... I know apko laga k main kal raat k bad but no Zoya its not true or jaha tak main janta hoon you also love me but I m ready to accept your challenge and do whatever you wanted to do bcox soon you are going to be "Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan" and don't worry apki marzi bhi shamil hogi...

Zoya checked his forehead and spoke...

Zoya: Apko koi chot to nai lagi jo aisi baty kar rahy hain main or aap ne shadi no way... saying so she turn aroung ut Asad back hugged her and spoke...

Asad: Ohhh to apko gussa bhi aata hai Mrs. Sher Khan but I promise apka yeh gussa aaj raat tak khatam ho jaye ga... he said while placing a wet kiss on her nape of neck...

Zoya: Asaddd...

Asad: I love you more when you call me by my name or haan baby that was not our last and that's a promise from Romantic Ahmad Khan...

Zoya was blushing hearing these words from Asad and she just ran to her room to scream on top of her lungs on her victory after all its not a easy task to turn her Akdu Khan to a Shameless Khan...


Sooo hows it???

Ignore my mistakes bcox i have to for tomorrow's exam...

Hit like and leave ur precious comments...

Title in progress...

With love... Ashiii...

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