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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy! I need to comment in detail on your Asad POV chapters but had to post a quick comment to say that they were amazing to read. It was different to read something like this and as always, you write so well. Also loved the extra scenes (of him with his family).. These chapters have added so much clarity. Cannot wait to know what happens next.thanks for updating!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Anjalii dear its fabulous update dear
I love it

Asad knew Zoya very well

Poor guy

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm loving the storyline so far :)
I hope Asad confesses his feelings soon
Please update soon and please PM me when you continue :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
exams over pheww😃
loved all the pov's of asad in the 3 updates😳
missing zoyas subconscious
update soon..i mean fast😉


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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderfull n amazing...
luv it...
fabulous...
asad was not that drunk...
really hope zoya realise her feelings for asad soon...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am finally home and can read Chapter 10. I love how you snapped with the updates while I was gone! :) Bless your soul my child.
Oh hooo, Asad checking Zoya out. Man, with the way he's describing her I am developing a woman crush. Surbhi Jyoti is so gorgeous thoughhh!

Okay, I love how Zoya gets him, she obviously likes him but is in denial. She knows how to get him to talk, how to make him smile and what he needs, she's so tuned in to him, just like he is with her. It's beautiful. I love how you use the little details and conversations to show this stuff, it's just so amazing. I hate you for being such a good writer, like girl, having known you for so long I have concluded that there is nothing you can't do...except play instruments LOL.

I almost kissed her but then I stopped realizing that this was not how I wanted this to happen, not while we were semi-intoxicated, I needed the both of us to be fully coherent and iron out the little details, because if I kissed her now, I knew I wouldn't be able to stop.

Ughhh, why would you do this to me? Currently melting into a puddle of goo, gah!

The euphoria I felt from the night before all but washed off, leaving me angry and above all, disappointed. I was tired, I spent five years pining for her thinking that she didn't like me. And then she came back, and it seemed like she did like me after all, I was almost sure of it, but I guess I was wrong because it seemed like she didn't want to like me. I didn't know what happened last night, but it apparently didn't mean anything for her, and if it did, she didn't want it to mean anything.

*Cries*, *sobs*, *drowns in own tears*. KYUNNN? That one paragraph was so heart breaking like how do you even do it?

UPDATE PLEASEEE. I am going to bombard your phone soon. 😈




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plz update soon
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