I am finally home and can read Chapter 10. I love how you snapped with the updates while I was gone! :) Bless your soul my child.
Oh hooo, Asad checking Zoya out. Man, with the way he's describing her I am developing a woman crush. Surbhi Jyoti is so gorgeous thoughhh!
Okay, I love how Zoya gets him, she obviously likes him but is in denial. She knows how to get him to talk, how to make him smile and what he needs, she's so tuned in to him, just like he is with her. It's beautiful. I love how you use the little details and conversations to show this stuff, it's just so amazing. I hate you for being such a good writer, like girl, having known you for so long I have concluded that there is nothing you can't do...except play instruments LOL.
I almost kissed her but then I stopped realizing that this was not how I wanted this to happen, not while we were semi-intoxicated, I needed the both of us to be fully coherent and iron out the little details, because if I kissed her now, I knew I wouldn't be able to stop.
Ughhh, why would you do this to me? Currently melting into a puddle of goo, gah!
The euphoria I felt from the night before all but washed off, leaving me angry and above all, disappointed. I was tired, I spent five years pining for her thinking that she didn't like me. And then she came back, and it seemed like she did like me after all, I was almost sure of it, but I guess I was wrong because it seemed like she didn't want to like me. I didn't know what happened last night, but it apparently didn't mean anything for her, and if it did, she didn't want it to mean anything.
*Cries*, *sobs*, *drowns in own tears*. KYUNNN? That one paragraph was so heart breaking like how do you even do it?
UPDATE PLEASEEE. I am going to bombard your phone soon. 😈
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