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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

unresed on pg 32😳


i have checked that out dear and replied also...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashiii333



hey i have not planned asad ayesha nikah that poll was just for checking out the expectations of my readers from the story...
i have planned a great twist hope sabko acha lagy ga...
zoya will be back soon...



yaya thak you
n i m the one with the id ankiecool
i have two IDs
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cutestar12

Lovely update continue soon.


thnxxx dear...
i will update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ankiecool



yaya thak you
n i m the one with the id ankiecool
i have two IDs


okay dear ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Adhoori Mohabbat



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Part 11:

Next Morning, Asma told that Aman is fine now doctors are going to discharge him after few hours... Asad was also there with Aman as he promised... Soon they discharged Aman and Arman was asking Ayesha to pick him to the car and till then he pays the hospital bills...
Ayesha: Aman hurry up mamo is waiting...
Aman: mama app jao mjhy apna promise pura karna hai...
Ayesha: kya matlab???
Aman: mama mene Mr. Khan se promise kiya tha k main wapis un k sath aonga...
Asad: Mr. Khan wok al ki bat thi you should go with your mama...
Aman: Mr. Khan apko pata hai Khans never break their promises so I m coming with you only...
Asad: Ayesha I think you should go Aman mere sath aa jaye ga and don't worry he will be fine...
Ayesha: I trust you Asad... shona be a good boy... come soon... bye... she placed a kiss on his cheek and left...
Asad and Aman came at Khan Mansion and all welcomed Aman with open heart... Aman was behaving like he is the part of the family... Arman was really happy,,, he was seeing Aman this happy for the first time and the reason was Asad... He was seeing a perfect father in Asad but he can't let his desire open because he knew Ayesha will never give a thought to marriage... In evening a Qazi came... all were confused and Ayesha came forward to erase the confusion...
Ayesha: Qazi sahib ko mene bulaya hai actually kal Aman vaja nikah nai ho saka to...
Dilshad: par beta hum log kuch din bad bhi aram se nikah kar sakty hain aisy achanak kyun...
Ayesha: aunty nikah aaj ho ya kal kya fark parta hai bs sab ka hona zaroori hai...
Arman: par aapi Rehan bhai...
Ayesha: I know tum un se bat nahi kar rahy par main unhy samjha dongi... aunty app log Nuzhat se poch lejieye...
Asma: Nuzhat ko koi problem nahi hai bas hum sab ready ho jaty hain...
Ayesha: okay done... Qazi sahib app comfortable hain na I mean...
Qazi: beta app log tyar ho jaiye main tab tak nikah nama tyaar karwa leta hoon... bas koi larki ki side se aa jaye...
Ayan: ji Qazi sahib main aa raha hoon...
Arman: aapi... app bhai ko sorry nahi kahengi...
Ayesha: Arman...
Arman: mjhy acha nahi lagta jab app bina galti k sorry kehti hain...
Ayesha: phir kya karon???
Arman: aik idea hai Asad bhaijan se kehty hain bhai se bat karny k liye...
Ayesha: its not fair Arman yeh hamari problem hai...
Arman: I m not listening bas app ready ho jao Asad bhaijan se main bat kar longa...
Ayesha: okay but Mr. Dulha you have to get ready soon so hurry up...
Arman: okay aapi...
After sometime, the nikah took place in front of family members... all congratulate the newly wedded couple... they celebrated the occasion while enjoying family time... Aman and Asad were enjoying their moments by staying with each other because Ayesha and Maliks were going back to Mumbai later that night... Ayan was entertaining them with his world's best poetry...
Arman: bhaijan app na jesi bhi poetry kar lo appi se compete nahi kar sakty...
Ayan: oh really... Ayan Ahmad Khan ki poetry pury Bhopal main famous hai larkiyan aj bhi jaan deti hain...
Arman: or meri aapi ki poetry boht classical hai or etni deep hoti hai k app to shayad samajh hi na saken...
Ayan: haan to Ayesha ko bulao abhi pata chal jaye ga tumhari appi kesi poetry karti hain...
Ayesha was on call and after finalizing a welcome surprise for Nuzhat she was entering in the living area where all were enjoying and then she heard her name...
Ayesha: mera naam lia or main aa gai btao kya kaam hai...
Arman: apko har waqt kaam kyun yaad rehta hai... mene sabko btaya hai k app boht achi poetry karti hain to...
Ayesha: no way Arman sab bhaag jayen gey... or wesy bhi mood nahi hai...
Arman: aapi plzzz it's my wedding na plzzz...
Ayan: Arman let it be Ayesha ko dar lag raha hoga tum ne bhi to bina pochy challenge accept kar lia...
Ayesha: oh to yeh bat hai so Mr. Ayan Ahmad Khan apko nahi pata k I m also a Khan and Khans never break their promises and turn back from challenges right shonaa... she said looking towards Aman...
Aman: right Khan go for it...
Ayan: yeh hui na bat... so can I hear out the most classical poet of Mumbai...
Ayesha: Ayan agar samjh na aaye to plzzz poch lena... she giggled...
"Wo Khayal Tha Koi Dhanak Numa...
Ya Koi Aks Tha Mere Roo-Ba-Roo...
Mujhy Har Taraf Se Tu Laga...
Ya Koi Or Tha Tera Hoo-Ba-Hoo..."
Ayan's mouth was in perfect O shape after hearing such type of poetry...
Ayan: Ayesha do me a favor plzzz...
Ayesha: favor???
Ayan: mjhy na aisa poetry sekhni hai...
Arman: aapi abhi koi keh eaha tha k wo Bhopal ka famous poet hai and all haina...
Ayesha: haan Arman log boht jaldi party change kar lety hain... she said eyeing Aman who was continuously engrossed with Asad... she was feeling jealous of Asad...
Aman: mama don't act smart haan main apki side pe hi hoon or ab Mr. Khan bhi hamari side pe hain... haina buddy...
Asad: right partner... and they hi-five...
Ayan: yaar koi meri bat to sun ly mjhy aisi depth vali potery sekhni hai Ayesha help me na...
Ayesha: Ayan its natural art koi seekh nahi sakta... Arman flight time par hai I think we should leave now... aunty app logo ko Nuzhat ki fikar karny ki zaroorat nahi hai she will be happy or yeh mera promise hai...
Dilshad: I trust you Ayesha or wesy bhi aik maa dosri maa pe aankhen band kar k bharosa kar sakti hai...
Ayesha: thank you aunty... Aman sab ko achy se bye kehna...
Ayan: acha boht jaldi hai apko jaaney ki... mjhy apki poetry k notes chahieye...
Ayesha: mere pass time nahi hota koi notes prepare karny ka haan agar time mila to tumhary liye zaroor try karongi... I promise...
Ayan: okay but jaaney se pehly aik oe shayari ho jaye...
Asad: Ayan behave... Nuzhat ja rahi hai ussy milny ki bajaye tumhy poetry ki fikar hai so mean...
Khans blessed Nuzhat and Arman a happy future with teary eyes... all were emotional... Asad was extra emotional because Aman was also going but he promised to be in touch...
Ayesha: Ayan is emotional moment par aik sady sady shayari yaad aa rahi hai...
Ayan: irshad irshad...
Ayesha: It's a dedication to all love birds jo ab sath nahi hain... I hope wo sab jald hi sath hoon... In Sha Allah... she said looking straight in Asad's eyes... and he thanked her by blinking his eyes in gratitude...
"Inhi Baaton Se Aksar Bichar Jaya Karty Hain Apney...
Usey Kehna Itni Man'maniyan Achi Nahi Hoti'n..."
Asad was silently crying on his destiny and Ayesha had seen him wiping his tears and she really felt bad for AsYa and prayed to God to unite this couple as soon as possible... Ayesha and Maliks left for airport and soon they boarded their flight... but Ayesha's mind was going back to Asad's teary eyes and she can't understand why his eyes were troubling her... she just wanted to erase his pain and she don't know why??? She feeling a pull towards him and she can't understand why??? But her heart was aching for him... she knew that Aman and Asad share a wonderful bond and she had seen the spark in her son's eyes when he was with Asad but its not possible... she took a deep breath and calm herself and decided that she has to keep her thoughts in limits after all he is married and she is also a mother and she don't have the right to imagine such things...
On the other hand Asad had appointed a Private Investigator to find out Zoya as soon as possible because after his recent eye lock with Ayesha he doubted himself... he can't do this to Zoya... he have to avoid Ayesha... she just look likes her and nothing more... but why he felt a pull towards her... he prayed to God to give him strength in finding Zoya... but Aman... he deserves more in his life... and he really needed a father... because he knew the pain of living away from a father... but what can he do so he left it on Allah Who definitely help them out from this mess...


Sooo that's it...
Kesa laga????
Ignore my mistakes...
Hit like and leave ur precious comments plzzz...
Next update till 45+ likes and 25+ replies...
With Love Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awe so Zoya left wid Aman
Armaan & Zoya r noticing d bond btw Asad & Aman
but still keeping there desires in check
Asad is also controlling thinking about Zoya
Jaldi Asya ko milao Ashii
atleast kuch clue toh mile unhe

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
loved it
amazing
plz update soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update...
aman is discharged...
oh zoya ki shairi became intense after her accident...
all hv some thoughts running in their minds...
where armaan is thinking abt aman n asads bond ayesha n asad r thinking abt staying away frm one another... but aman wud b the link between them...
hope the investigator comes up vd result soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful and lovely update
amazing

I cant wait for next part

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aashii meri pyaarii i love this update so much
Its just amazing

pls update soon

Thanks for pm

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