ESHAAS - SAAHIL SS UPDATED LAST PART on PAGE 25G / 3-12-2014 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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this FF is lovely!!!! please do update soon!!! just read all the 6 parts in one go
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PART - 7


A wife, woman may cant compromise but mother always bowed before the need of her children. Like wise Sanam bowed down before Saanya's wish. She allowed Aahil to slept with them. Aahil laid at the corner and Saanya hugged encircled her tiny arms around her father to make sure he wont leave her. Aahil caress her head softly so she slept soon. The moment he felt she slept he tried to get up from her side.

'isi wajhse main tumpe trust nahi karti.' Sanam remarked suddenly and he glanced her in confusion.

'excuse me.' he wont get her.

'she wants you on her side and when in morning she wont found you here,how will she affect have you any idea?' Sanam scold him.

'but Sanam i am leaving because i know you wont like my presence.'Aahil explained.


'dont forget Aahil we are here for Saanya not for you and me. Jab main tumse nikah kar skti hu to ye bhi bardasht kar lungi.' Complaints,rudeness and hatred are still there,but she bearing for her daughter. She turn off the light and turned her back to him. Aahil do slept besides Saanya embracing her in his arms.

Next morning when Sanam awake she found both Aahil and Saanya on her side. Both slipped towards her in sleep. Both's hands were on her. First she grew angry but then realization calmed her. Gradually she removed both's hand and come out of bed. She take bath and went to kitchen area for cook a meal for Saanya. Lateef family servant helped her. Sanam told the requirements and she helped her.

'are ye to Aahil baba ka b fav hai. Hmm Saanya baby ko b woi pasand hai jo uske papa ko hai.' she remarked.

For a moment she lost somewhere. Because it wasn't first time. Several times Rehan too noticed many qualities in Saanya similar to Aahil and unintentionally he revealed to her. Lateef's voice broke her trance. 'kuchh nahi. Lateef main sirf Saanya k liye breakfast banaungi or apne liye baki tum dekh lena.' she commands her and she nodded in yes.

Sanam still lost in another world. After cooking she went to awake Saanya. Saanya was sleeping and Aahil was nowhere. But he placed pillows all around Saanya so she may not falls from the bed.


She felt happy unknowingly seeing his care for her. She is moving to wardrobe to pick up clothes for saanya when Aahil came out from the washroom. Both collapsed and she was faling but pair of strong arms hold her. Sanam's eyes were closed hard but soon she realized she wasnt fall down. Gradually she opened her eyes and found Aahil's dark intense eyes gazing her paniced face constantly. Sanam's sharp nails dug deeply in Aahil's flesh as he was bare above waist. His cold hands sending shiver to her body. And warm breath caressing her face. Her breath chocked. Though she is feelingvery uncomfortable but cant able to voice out,so she turn her face to other side,which was clear signal for Aahil to leave her. Aahil pulled her and make her stand on her feet.

'i am sorry. But you are falling.' Aahil apolozised for holding her without her concent.

Sanam moved without saying anything. Aahil too moved. But from his back Sanam noticed the scratch mark given by her on his neck. Which is red and fresh. Before she said anything Aahil wear his shirt and left the room. Sanam snatch back her raised hand and get involved with her work. First she awake saanya and took her for bath. Then both came down for breakfast. Seeing her Aahil leave his all work and took her in his arms. He kissed on her both cheeks and so she do.

'good mrng my princess.' he wished her.

She to wish back and he moved to breakfast table with her. Sanam brought apple pie for her. 'wow my fav.' both shout together.

'papa apka b fav hai?' When she asked innocently,Aahil hit with reality. He got that it was his daughter's favourite so she cooked only.

'yes princess. Jo meri princess ko pasand hai wo papa ko pasand hai.' he replied.

She placed pie on Aahil's plate. 'firr aap kha lo.' she offered him.

Aahil feed her. 'princess ne khaya papa ne khaya ek hi baat hai.' meanwhile latiff brought breakfast for him. Aahil is feeding her so Sanam relaxed a while. Both done their breakfast. Afterwards sanam gave medi to her and due to its efffect she slept again. When she done Aahil came with a plate and offered it to Sanam. She look at him in amusement.

'pls kha lo. I know tume subah se kuchh nahi khaya hai. Sanam i know you only bearing me for Saanya and i dont know mera kuchhh kehne ka haq hai ya nahi but please khana peena mat chhodo. Apne liye na sahi humari bachhi k liye hi sahi. Jiske liye sab kar rahi ho to khud ka khyal b to tume rakhna hoga na.' Aahil offering her a plate but she wont take it from him.

Seeing her indifferent behaviour he left the room. Think for a while Sanam took the plate and eat from it.



NOTE:-SORRY GUYS I KNOW ITS TOO LATE BUT WHAT TO DO TIME HI NAHI MILL RAHA THA. HELL BUSY WITH MY OTHER FFS AND MY WORK. SORRY ONCE AGAIN... PLS GAVE A LONG COMMENT AND HIT LIKE.
Edited by richadhami - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
lovely update. thank you for the PM. pls continue soon.
feeling so bad for aahil, hope sanam forgives him soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you for pm 😉...I really like this chapter even though it is short ...it's very touching to see the father and daughter have the same preference ...it's really beautiful ... I wish you a good continuation and pls update soon
Edited by sara7iris - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Such a beautiful update👍🏼...loved loved loved it.
Thanks for pm..nd plz update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
thnxxx for pm...
update was awesome...
loved the way aahil slept with his girls...
falling scene was too good...
cont, soon...
can u pm me for ur other work...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
FINALLY you updated superb update you showed beatifully their growing relationship. sanaya is the only CHILD i loved she is sooo cute and loving. sanam scolding aahil for getting up after sanaya slept loved that part. and apple pie whole sacene is also tooo GOOD. you know bhttt wait karwaya but your beautiful update rewarded our wait 😊 the other FF/SS you are involved in are on SAHIL or on someone else
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Nice update
Cute scene them three sleeping together
Thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
waiting for update :) take your time I know you are working on other stories too as you said last time but I commented just to tell you we are waiting and so much interested to know what will happen next 😊
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PART - 8


SANAM and Aahil were leading their relation no where. Though he really want to and trying harder to prove himself a good husband and Father but its not an easy for Sanam to forgive him. He took her dignity and gifted her a lifetime wound.


Love needs to grow up till. Aahil was repying his deed but what about love? Is he realy love her? That was a big question which raised by Rehan and Aahil turn mute. He wasnt sure about that. Neither he think in this way nor he wants to till Rehan shaked his senses. What exactly he feels for her? Is his only his guilty which connects both or there is something which hidden and untold. What his expection from this relation? They married because of Saanya,but is this the only reason for which he was ready to spend his life with her? Aahil was lost in these question when the giggles of Saanya broke his thought session. Soon Saam's sound to joined with her. He peeped out of the window to know what his daughter and wife doing.


Saanya was playing in a garden area with a water pipe and when Sanam trying to stop her,instead of obeying she drenched her mother completely. Her suit turned transparent and skimpy,revealing her perfect curves. Aahil's gaze struck on her. He scanned her from tip to toe and get hard instantly. A silent growled scaped under his throat. First that questions and now his tempting wife making him complete insane. His whole body wants her underneath him and without clothes. Last time when he used her,he was only satisfying his ego. It wasn't love and moreover he wasn't in his senses. Now he really wants to feel every bit of her.

Aahil spell bound moved towards her. Sanam was angry and she is scolding Saanya for soaking her. Saanya giggled and running here and there. Aahil turn off the tap and catch his princess. 'hey sweety pie mumma ko aise pareshan nahi karte. Come with me i have some thing for you.' Aahil was coming for her but his guilt struck his feet and very soon he overpowered his wild imaginations. He took Saanya away from there. 'Sanam dry yourself or you will catch cold.' He said softly gazing at her face.


Aahil's worry proved right. By the evening Sanam catch feaver. Her body was burning. She cant even able to move at herself. Aahil called the doc and he gave injection to her.


'doc is there everything alright? I mean ghabrane wali to koi baat nahi hai?' His dim voice and squeezed forhead clealry reflecting his concern for her.


'mr. Ibrahim right now i gave her injection. Now we have to wait till morning. Agr to bukhar kam hota hai then good or else you must admit her at hospital.' he gave his view and leave. Aahil come and sit near her. He putting cold bandages on her head. Saanya wasnt ready to eat anything. Lateef tried harder but she threwing tantrums. Sanam cant even able to speak so she manage with her but Aahil handle everything.

'lateef give it to me and leave. Saanya papa k hath se khayegi right?' He took the plate to feed her.

'Aahil baba aap baby k sath jaiye tab tak main Sanam k pas rehti hu.' Lateef wants to help him.


'nai i will manage. Tum jao or baki karo.' he send her away and start feeding her. Saanya troubling while eating vegetables. 'ye nahi khana? Par princess apko pata hai papa ki fav hai ye tabi to papa jaldi jaldi bade hue.' Aahil making stories to make her eat.


Even in her worst state Sanam able to see Aahil's patience. He was never like that. Sanam observe him in collage but the man standing in front of right now wasn't the same one. He handle Saanya not even with patience but also made her finished her dinner properly. Lateef changed her clothes but she slept only in her father's protective arm. Aahil roamed taking her in his arms and her eyes turned heavied soon. When her head falls on his broad shoulders,Aahil put her dwn on a bed and covered alal sides with pillow as today she was sleeping in seprate room. Aahil don't want her to catch viral from Sanam.

When he returned to Sanam room was empty. He get worried for her and looking everywhere. In last he checked d washrum. Sanam was there but due to weakness and dizzyness she lost her balance and falls in water tub. Aahil hesitent first but he hear a slight sound making by her. He went inside as washroom's door wasnt locked. He found her struggling. Aahil paniced and brought her out of the tub. He wrapped her in towel and brought back in room. He went to lateef for help but she was slept. Aahil had no time to waste. Change of clothes is required. He took out her clothes and asked weather she able to change or not. Aahil patted her cheeks but her eyes falling again and again. She was not in her senses. Without wasting a minute he quickly removed her all wet clothes and dried her body with soft towel. then he made her wear fresh warm clothes and tugged her under duvet.



note:- sorry i know i was late 😛 but here is your update. Pls gave comment...😊
Edited by richadhami - 10 years ago

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