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Mylifeisblooper

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Posted: 11 years ago

#971

Originally posted by: jas91
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So Asad ne Zoya ko bcah liya

dono 1 bhi ho gaye it was hot hot scene Jilu

Asya ne puri car hila di

than Asad ka past revelation

it was sad & understandable now

but main bhi thinking same woh apna studio kyun jalayega

koi aur hai iske piche shayad kabir

Asya ko saath dekh ke jello ho

ab dono ko 1 hote bhi dekh liya ho

I m looking 4ward 2 nxt part

sorry 4 late comnt😳

hmmm ab jaake samji tu 😲😲😲

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#972

Jilu kahan hai tu zara saamne aa mere😡

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Mylifeisblooper

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Posted: 11 years ago

#973

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Jilmil I am speechless yar

well first part was dam hot&erotic

finally the moment have come&AsYa become one as hubby&waify in every true sense.

In second part U disclose about Asad's past.

feeling sorry for him,have gone through so much

and Jilmil I am loveing the twist U r bringing on Twisted Fate:

1st Asad's MPD

Kabir's re-entry

I am not sure about if Asad have kill Imran

but I am sure Asad haven't burn his studio,I mean why would he do that.

So, I guss its Billo-Rani.

Anyways I

[/QUOTE accha huva ki teko pasand aaya

warna yaha par baki kisiko ithna pasand nahi aaya aur

main tho soch rahi hoon ki discontinue hi kardoo

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Mylifeisblooper

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Posted: 11 years ago

#974

Originally posted by: jas91
Jilu kahan hai tu zara saamne aa mere😡

kya hoing🤢🤢🤢🤢

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#975

Originally posted by: jilmil.1
kya hoing🤢

kya PM karing mujhe discontinue ka

Himmat kaise hui teri😡

Itna naaraaz ho gayi kya

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#976

Originally posted by: jilmil.1

hmmm ab jaake samji tu

Haan toh pehle mujhe story thoda pata thi

but Murder mujhe abhi bhi Qubool nahi

Don't make my Asad killer plz

acha nahi lagta ki he killed some1

maare pite woh chalega but no murder

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Mylifeisblooper

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Posted: 11 years ago

#977

Originally posted by: jas91

kya PM karing mujhe discontinue ka

Himmat kaise hui teri😡

Itna naaraaz ho gayi kya

meko laga teko pasand nahi aaying

aur amu ne bhi bola it was erotic...

so i felt i didnt show asya pure nd blissful

nd made a blunder showing thm erotic

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#978

Originally posted by: jilmil.1
meko laga teko pasand nahi aaying
aur amu ne bhi bola it was erotic...

so i felt i didnt show asya pure nd blissful

nd made a blunder showing thm erotic

pagal hai kya she means ki tune kabhi aisa likha nahi toh she thought humari wajah se aisa mat likh cuz she thinks u r not comfertable writing it aur kuch nahi hai bewacuf

She & we all love u & ur story pagli aisa mat soch Asad ke murderer hone se problem hai woh bhi bas mujhe aur heenu ka

Hum hero ko as killer nahi dekh sakte na is liye We thought koi aur hoga so hume shock laga

Erotic ka toh sawal hi nahi & u wrote fab itna over nahi tha

chal ab smile kar

abhi Amu yahin thi ab shayad nahi hai warna usi se puch leti tu