Twisted Fate.. asya( kabhi ) 21st chaptr updated links given - Page 101

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

71.4k

Users

26

Likes

1.2k

Frequent Posters

Amulya9 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Mylifeisblooper thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9



ha yaar jillu...I thought u wrote that hot stuff fr us exclusively.. n ur just in teens so I thought u vl b uncomfortable.. isliye Aisa bola...
n ask jas r gowtu they know... I'm very poor at understanding such stuff also
I'm sry..ur d writer...pls write d way u planned...
I'm happy with this FF.. n pls jaldi update chahiye
🤗 jill

maine bhouth muskilo se refer karke tum logo keliye voh hot stuff diya..coz tum logo ne bola
i never show steps ...just show asya ek hogaye thy climax blah blah
issliye tum logo keliye refering kiya ...waha par tho aur bhi zyaada erotic stuff thain
anyway kuch stuff maine edit kiya tereliye amu..
Mylifeisblooper thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
lov u all fab 5
karan singh grover animated GIF
Mylifeisblooper thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
karan singh grover animated GIF
Amulya9 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jilmil.1


</div>maine bhouth muskilo se refer karke tum logo keliye voh hot stuff diya..coz tum logo ne bola
<div>i never show steps ...just show asya ek hogaye thy climax blah blah

issliye tum logo keliye refering kiya ...waha par tho aur bhi zyaada erotic stuff thain

anyway kuch stuff maine edit kiya tereliye amu..


I know I'm really sorry jil...u know I personally like that Asad n Zoya became ASYA SR.. I loved ur line to b honest.. n sachi me gowtu knows I don't read mature stuff much I skip it coz I really don't understand ...though I'm married...

I'm really sorry yaar sachi me 😭 😭
Mylifeisblooper thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9


I know I'm really sorry jil...u know I personally like that Asad n Zoya became ASYA SR.. I loved ur line to b honest.. n sachi me gowtu knows I don't read mature stuff much I skip it coz I really don't understand ...though I'm married...

I'm really sorry yaar sachi me 😭 😭

kya😲😲😲😲😲
sorry nahi chayiye yaar
dosti main no sorry no thank u...🤣🤣
hum tum humesha frnds😆❤️
Mylifeisblooper thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

jillu..I swear I vl kill u if u do anything like that...
😭 😭 replied 2 ur pm... check out n gtg ..urgent kaam hai...
I want update 😒

oye like button kam nahi karing...
Mylifeisblooper thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

''Zoya-r we gonna di here...

Asad- nai.. Par tum mujhe ek din maardogi '' *Rolf* :-P


Asad-i n very.. Wht ;-) me-ssseeexxxyyy :-* :-*
Haha itna lamba confession ki... Ye srf waha atakgaya :-P loll


Uuummm car mein... *blush*

Arsalan !? 1st tym sunnrahi hoon ye name...

Grrr acha hota main n jas k kuch nai bataya hota chrctr k baarenein...
Ab tho woh tension se maarhi jaayegi...
Yaar plz zoya pe attack mat karwa...

Updt was gud... Mera bhi wahi sawal hai...
Khud k studio aag kyon lagay asad ne !!!!!

Kabir k reentry... Uuummm jas baby... Khush hojayegi...
Loved the updt,..

Continue soon

arsalan naam google main check kar
kya yaar tum pehli baar sunning🤣🤣🥺🤣
Edited by jilmil.1 - 11 years ago
Amulya9 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jilmil.1


<div></div>oye like button kam nahi karing...


ha its OK...mera bhi like button work nahi karta sometimes...
acha teek hai no thanq n, sory
bt still I really want 2 say that I'm sorry...
update plsss 😃
Mylifeisblooper thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Chaptr 21

Asad's concert gets cancelled due to studio being burned.

And asya come home holding hands nd smiling at each other...

Dillu tensed nd worried waiting for asad...sees asya toghtr smiling , holding hands

Dillu: asad tum teek ho na...

Asad ; haan main teek hoon ...muje kya huva hai...

Dillu : tumari studio main aag lagi thi

Zoya : ammi usse kya pooch rahe ho...muje poocho ..i was the 1 trapped..i had gone ther to surprise asad but kudh hi surprised reh gayi narrates the whole story to dillu...

Dillu : zoya tume kuch huva tho nahi..

Zoya :muje kaise kuch hotha jabki saat thain mere mr asad ahmed khan

Asad :smiling ammi I'll freshen up...nd moves to his room

Dillu : zoya I need to talk to u beta...

Zoya : ammi..kaisi baat ???

Dillu : ek serious baat karni hai mere kamre main chalo...

dillu ; voh zoya...zoya's cell starts to ring...

zoya : ammi ek minute let me just attend this call nd sees the name flashing humaira

zoya ; humi kya hai .bolo jaldi

humi : aapi sniffing nd crying..iam in trouble aapiii jaldi se zingo nightclub main aao... aapi plzz...nd hungs up

zoya ;humi listen...humi..

dillu: kya huva beta

zoya : muje jaldse jald zingo night club main pouchna hoga yeh baat baad main bhi tho hosakti hai ammi... now I need to rush and hurries frm ther.

dillu : par zoya thinks muje tume asad ke bharemain bolna tha...

asad : overhears yeh zoya ithni tension main kaha jaa rahi hai...

zoya : rushing through the car, she reaches the spot aftr 20 minutes and sees humi running nd behind her goons running..bhaag dk bose dk bose dk bose ...zoya thinks yeh kya ho raha hain...allah miya whts wrong wth u meri masoom si behen ki peeche gunday plz allah miya meri behen ki zindigi main koi adventure aur action math lana...zoya stops the car seeing humi she says...humi jaldi aa mere ghadi main aaja...

Humi : she sees zoya nd goes running to the car nd enters the car...nd zoya starts to speed up the car...

Goons see humi entering the car...thy enter into their black car nd a chief goon says follow tht gal..kuch bhi ho voh ladki zinda nahi bachni chayiye..

zoya: kya huva hai Humi...ithne gunday tere piche..tu ithni famous kab huvi angrily

humi : aapi ..yeh sab kya mazak lag raha hai aapko maine unlogo ko uss night club main yeh kehthe huve suna ki voh log ladkiyon ko utathe hain...They traffick gals to goa and sell thm...unka danda hai innocent ladkiyon ko utakar goa main bejna...can u believe tht...aur unka haath hai imraan ko marne main...kyonki voh bhi issi racket ka member hai..

zoya: kya imraan ko unlogo ne mara...gets shocked ya allah tuje hi iss musibat main padna tha...tu waha uss nightclub main kya kar rahi thi gadhi.

humi : bas apne frnd ke kehne par attend karne chali usne bola fawad khan anne wala hai...tho main excited hogayi usse milne keliye...

zoya : teri tho..ab tho mera mann kar raha hai tuje blue lays samjke tera piece piece karke kha jaao...

Humi : imagines herself as blue lays nd zoya eating her up ( no one can eat just 1)..noo aapi...

Goons come following thm...bhaag dk bose dk bose dk bose bhaag dk bose..

Asad sees zoya moving very fast nd he sees a car following thm..he sees the number plate something in him strikes seeing tht number he gets furious and his mpd triggers.. he transforms himself to arsalan nd flashbacks appear of him stabbing imraan near the arm..he says isske peeche ek partner bhi hai..aftr recording this piece of info arsalan flees but knows imraan is alive nd thinks isse zinda rakna zaroori hai so tht I come to know his partner nd calls the nearby hospital doctor..

Arsalan : hello doctor (huskily )..its an emergency u need to move to tmc ring road tmc building ke peeche ek aadmi gayal pada hai...

Doctor : haan par tum ho kon???

Arsalan : its none of ur business..par voh aadmi zinda hai...uski saansain chal rahi hai..aur usse zinda rakna zarori hai..

Ambulance comes to tht place...nd sees imraan stabbed to death...near the stomach

Arsalan goes back to check on the ambulace but sees imraan stabbed near the stomach...arsalan gets furious..kon hai voh insaan...nd sees a black car...slowly speeding up...notes the number in his mind...

Flashback ends...arsalan moves speedingly towards the car nd dashes the car

The goons inside the car...arrey yeh kon hai..

They speed up even more nd move faster thn zoya's car..nd stop infront of zoya's car horizontally...making zoya to hit the break..nd zoya nd humi get down the car..

The goons surround zoya nd humi...frm all the sides

Humi to zoya:...ab tho hum gaye kam se...

Zoya : aise kaise gaye kam se...don't worry fikar not humare paas ab bhi ek weapon hai..winkingly

Humi : konsi

Zoya : jab dushman pad jaate hai bhari tho pepper spray comes to handy..nd starts spraying at thm ..thy start twitching their eyes nd zoya humi starts running

Humi : aapi aisa lag raha hai ...hum running shoes pehenkar marathon main bhaag rahe hain

Zoya :chup chap bhaag

Arsalan : comes frm behind nd starts to strangle the goons

Zoya sees back while running nd sees asad from distance...beating up the goons

Zoya gets surprised asad arrey wah mr six packs...ab kya darna no more bhaagna..nd stops humi...

Humi : asad jeej ...

Arsalan : ( sounding dangerously ) bataao...kisne imraan ko uss din maara...kisne...warna tum sab ko maardunga...catching ones neck nd strangling the other

Goon 2 : voh voh farhan qureshi bhai hai ...hum sab uskeliye kaam karte hai...imraan bhi uskeliye kaam karta tha...par voh pakda gaya...nd if he opens his big mouth tho hum sab bhi pakde jaate

Arsalan : filhal kaha hai...grabbing his neck tightly

Goon 2:voh kalhatty jungle main uska hideout hai ...

Arsalan :teri baat main kaise manoo...any proof

Goon3 : yeh unka number hai bhai ka number...u can track him through GPS...

Arsalan : smirkingly khel katam...farhan...iam coming to get u...

Zoya nd humi: both shouting asad's name nd moves towards his direction but zoya before she could reach she trips nd humi pauses...nd kabir holds her... zoya remains shocked .(.voice over:Yeh saazishen dishaon ki...
Yeh saazishen hawaon ki... kya chupa hai kabar nahi...In these storms of intrigue, in these winds of conspiracies, wht is hidden yet to know )

ps: (22nd chaptr 4th thread)
Edited by jilmil.1 - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove · 2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".